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14:41 1月16日(日) 全100% eiken.or.jp - 非公開 14/24 Grade Pre-1 4 English Composition Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Agree or disagree: Big companies have a positive effect on society POINTS The economy The environment Work-life balance lagree with this opinion that big companies have a positive effect on society. Thave two reasons. 18 First, big company's products give us safety and relieve. Big companies can produce a lot of products with little money, so customers always can get same products. Also, big companies study products very much, so they can sell cheap and high quality products. And big company's products have a kind of brand that is safety and nice products. 58 Second, big companies have a great support system for workers. Big companies have a lot of workers such as raising child or enjoying hobby. Workers can keep their work life balance in big companies. 34 For these reasons, I agree with this opinion that big companies have a positive effect on society. 17 117

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TR. 48-51 Reading 2 aud sdt To 19dmun ar) bas 0 asw anisy 1o smo s 「黄金の腕を持つ男」 James Harrison とは,一体どのような人物なのでしょうか。 dyo James Harrison is known as “the man with the golden arm” and has saved millions of 9eud no anisu sbin o lle obr law lives. When people hear this, they may think he is a kind of superhero with special powers. In fact, he looks like ( ① ) in Australia. However, he has something special: his blood. James was only fourteen years old when he had big surgery*. The surgery was hceKGug Coop 5 Successful, but he lost so much blood that he needed a blood transfusion*. 。This experience o AC taught him the importance of blood. He made his first blood donation* a few weeks after his 18th birthday. Soon after that, a special antibody was found in his blood. An antibody woH (S 3 au alnsbuie is a kind of protein* the body makes when it finds something bad in the blood. Every year, thousands of babies in Australia were suffering from* a type of blood 10 disease. Some babies even died before birth, while (④ ) were born Toortoe serious brain abute eri od gnib1o0oA (ト damage. The antibody found in James's blood can cure* this disease, and so he has ! with bluorta tsdhw Joorbe orly donated his blood more than 1,000 times over the past sixty years. His blood has helped to save about 2.4million babies, and his own grandson was one of them. In one interview, he said, “An hour of your time is a lifetime* for someone else," ( 63nineai. 15 James Harrison, the man with the golden arm, never gives up helping ( 6) さ史の素 関歩限のア い(ー ou とに、次の日本を英語にしなる (229 words)

英検2級のライティングです！ 用いている表現の間違いなどがあれば教えて欲しいです。よろしくお願いいたします_(._.)_

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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

イオン式の作り方が分かりません。 反応に関与しないイオンと関与するイオンがどれがどれか分かりません。 早急におしえてほしいです！！

5)次の化学反応式をイオン反応式で表せ。 係数をつけて始 Fetさe (1) Zn + H2SO4- ZNSO4+ H2 (2) HCI + NaOH → NACI + H20 (3) Na2CO3 + CaCl2- 2NACI + CaCO3 OsH +0 0

この問題の(2)と(3)を教えて欲しいです。よろしくお願いしますm(_ _)m

第2問[MOS トランジスタ】 関値電圧 V, が 0.5[V]であり、Ves = 0.8[V] かつ Vos = 0.4[V] のとき I,= 0.9[mA] である Nチャネル MOSFET がある(以下 M,と呼ぶ)。 M, が6週目の授業で説明したモデルに従うと仮定して以下の問いに答えよ。 (1) M, の。の比例係数(H, Cox)の値を求めよ(単位は[AV]あるいは[mA/V2]を 明記せよ)。 (2)横軸に Vosをとり、縦軸に I。をとった図2のようなグラフ用紙を用い、VGs が 0.7[V] の場合について M, のVos と I, の関係を表すグラフの概形を描け(横 軸の範囲は0.0~1.0[V]とし、縦軸の単位や目盛りを明記すること)。 (3) M,を用いて図3のような回路を構成したときの,と Vos を求めよ(単位を明記 して解答すること)。但し、Ves = 0.7[V]、Vec = 1.0[V]、R, = 1.5[kQ] とする。(ヒ ント:負荷線を作図するとよい。)

【写真】の読むとき、どこを区切りればよいのか教えてほしいです。

Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Cnaren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by poverty. I Khew foreign children were troúbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japan live in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? 「nere are many causes. First,non-regular employmentis increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children? I think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member ofa support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Willit come?I hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

【写真】を読む時に… •アクセントをどこに付ければいいのか •どこできって読めばいいのか •繋げて読む部分はどこか •語尾を上げる又は下げるところはどこか を教えてほしいです。

Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Chiidren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by póverty. I Knew foreign children were troūbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japanlive in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? There are many causes. First,non-regular employment is increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children?1 think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member of a support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Will it come?l hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

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問1 硫酸酸性で鉄(1Ⅱ )イオンと二クロム酸イオンの反応は, それぞれ次の(1) (2)のイオン反応式で表される。 三純な足し Fe?+ Fe* + e" 一ト CraO,- + [アH* +6e E ]Cr+ + [ウH,O 7 18 2 2+14 ~6: 1 6 鉄(I)イオンは空気中の酸素によって酸化され,鉄(Ⅲ) イオンになりやすい。 Fet 硫酸鉄(I)の結晶を空気中に放置しておくと, 一部の鉄(Ⅱ) イオンは酸化され Fest Fe Fest て滴定により求めることができる。 て鉄(I)イオンになる。残った鉄(IⅡI)イオンの量は, (1)· (2)の反応式を利用し Feet 6 Fe?t é → 6Fet tt 0- Cre On + 14H+ザ→ → 2Cド*+クHe0 6 Fe"" t Cre Oッ+14H+ → → 6Fe"+2Cht +7H20 0- Feet: Cra07 6:1

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Lesson 7 教科書p. 98~99 Japanese Dishes from Abroad Part Sのd menl 城 0 A2 10. source 図sS.rs) B111.lead 回 li:d] B2 12. campaign国 kempéin) A1 13. supermarket 図 [sd:parmáxrkat CD-2 1 Reducing CO2 emissions / is now one of the mo 26. increase 動 inkri:s) .cafeteria 図(keatioria) 10 の important problems / that we have to tackle. // Ther。 A2 8. area 図éoria) 9. attention 圏 aténfan] is a report / saying / that choosing local products / is 0 effective. // The number of people / who are interested 内容を理解しよう in food miles / has been increasing. / の Doducing CO2 emissions is now one of the most important problems 2 In 2008, / some university cafeterias in the Kansai that we have to tackle. の二酸化炭素排出量を減らすために効果があるとして紹介されていることは何です area / showed food miles and CO2 emissions / on the か。3語の英語で答えなさい。 6 enu. // Many students said / that they had never の The number of people who are interested in food miles has been paid attention / to the sources of food / before. |/ “I increasing. Q has been increasing の主語は何ですか。1語の英語で答えなさい。 didn't know / where our food came from,” / one student 10 の said. // “Now / the information on the menu / leads 6 Many students said that they had never paid attention to the sources of food before. me to choose food / with fewer food miles / and CO2 Q the sources of food とほぼ同じ内容を表す表現を,第2パラグラフから書き出し なさい。 emissions.” |/ 0 “Now the information on the menu leads me to choose food with 0 3 “Food-mile campaigns” have started / in many fewer food miles and CO2 emissions.” Q the information の具体的な内容を,英語で答えなさい。 0 parts of Japan. // You may see information / about food 15 and miles / at supermarkets and restaurants. // B もう一度Part 3 全体を読み,次の要約文を完成させなさい。 )量を減らすよう努めなければならず、フ 今日,私たちは二酸化炭素(1. 122 words )を持つ人が増えている。2008年,いくつかの大学食堂 )と二酸化炭素排出量がメニューに表示され,多くの学生が食物へ )のあちこちではじまっ ードマイルに(2. 単語を調べよう 内に日本語の意味を補いなさい。 で,(3. の関心をより示した。「フードマイル運動」が(4. B1 1. reduce 動 [rid6)ú:s] 2. emission 図 (imifan] B2 3. tackle 動 [tek] ている。 A2 4. local 岡16ukl] 7 Part 3