英作文についてです。 私の回答は2枚目なのですが、間違っている箇所がないか添削お願いします😭

(2) 彼女は、どうして留学したいのか両親に説明するのに苦労した。

英語で写真を with +名詞+分詞を使って説明する問題です。 私の答えがあっているかと、 間違ってたら指摘してほしいです！ おねがいします🙇‍♀️

Exercises You are talking to your friend on the phone with the following photos in your hands. Describe the photos, explaining what these people are doing using the words in parentheses. Also use the word "with." e.g. BAY 2 Dr. Smith Justin e.g. Dr. Smith is leaning against the wall with his arms folded. 1. Justin is reading (crossed) a book with his feets crossed. sher back following. (following) 2. The dog is wakeing with Sarah

最後の生徒たちから大人気だった のところが補語として a student favorite と名詞と名詞が並んでいるのがよく分からなくて どうしてこんな訳になるのですか？

med dern was non ■lts 2." on ar otner elite scientists considered him to be a that S´V` 構文 4 magician. * Yet (like Faraday), Feynman was not content to hide_his tricks. 5 He insisted on teaching an introductory class [for undergraduates] —- exceedingly rare (for top academics). 6 (With his Brooklyn accent, ironic sense O of humor and talent [for explaining things (in practical, everyday terms)]), he was a student favorite. V SO~ 訳 もっと最近の例では,リチャード・ファインマンという天才がいた。彼は1965 年にノーベル物理学賞を受賞したが, 生物学でも重要な発見を成し遂げ, 並列計算および 量子計算の初期の先駆者でもあった。 実際、彼の才能はあまりに卓越しており、他の一流 科学者たちでさえも彼のことをマジシャンだと思っていたほどだった。だがファラデー 同様, ファインマンも自分の秘術を隠して満足していることはなかった。 「彼は学部生向け の入門クラスを教えることにこだわっていたのだが,これは一流の学者にしては非常に珍 しいことであった。 ブルックリンなまり、 皮肉っぽいユーモアのセンス、そして物事を実 用的な普段使いの言葉で説明する才能のあった彼は、学生たちから大人気だった。 Y

共通テストのリーディングの問題で時系列的な問題があるのですが、何回やっても正解できません、 誰か教えて欲しいです。

B You found the following message on a personal blog written by an exchange student at your school. Save Our Park! Wednesday, April 21, 2021 Vera Sherman First, thank you for visiting my blog. Today I'm writing about something very close to my heart. I hope everyone in town has had a chance to spend some time at Kaneko Park. It is a lovely place, and it's easy to walk to from our school. As it is springtime, the park is currently full of blooming trees, singing birds, and people enjoying the outdoors. Some creative students even built little squirrel houses for the animals to live in. Unfortunately, however, we need to do more to help clean up our wonderful local park. One month ago, I was taking pictures of the flowers near the pond. When I looked at the pictures at home, I noticed some garbage in the background. I spoke to Mr. Tanaka, the city official who is in charge of the park. He told me that sometimes students eat fast food and leave packaging on the ground. He said that in the past he had asked students to clean up after themselves but very few students had actually done as he asked. Because students were a big part of the problem, I felt I should take some responsibility in trying to sort out this problem. I put up flyers explaining the situation and asking for students to help after school. A small group came out, but we were not well prepared. We didn't have enough trash bags, and we did not have a clear plan for cleaning up. I went back to Mr. Tanaka, and he promised me that next time we went to the park, the city would provide trash bags and maps of locations to clean. Now we are ready to make a difference. Maybe it doesn't seem fun to spend your time picking up trash, but please consider helping. We will be meeting outside the front gate of the park at 10 a.m. this Saturday. Please try to arrive by 10 a.m. as we will be starting the litter pick straight away. Let's all help clean up our beautiful park!

新中3です！英語が苦手です、、 単語ひとつに例文を作ってます 採点お願いします🙏 たぶんぼろぼろなんですけど、心優しい方細かくお願いします〜💦

is far from far probably I'm probably a genius. (94 17 to 30 LAAT" ) I still love you though though ! (2" (77 (2 787 01497!) actually this is actually happened story, I 2 18 1²) later See yo later, (7**er".) yet Have you eaten dinner yet? (+99T) -quickly Preparation quickly. (1211233) inside We to play inside (193) Thanks (x1=OKby or ).) taste 1 anyway anyway. white Where were you while I studied English? (Ahor R$ 2 勉強している間あなたは fix 7 hold Collect My hobby is paint I like strawberry taste ice cleam (#12115= "131221² 好きです) G Ⅰ can fix a TV.(私はテレビを修理できます) Statue of liberty holds I torch、(自由の女神は松明を持っている Collect cards of game. (私の趣味はゲームのカード集めです)。 I like painting very much, 14, 1871 37th and zz Berg)

□62がasになる理由を教えて頂きたいです。

explaining the mysterious concept of ... having a purpose in life. This isn't a totally new development in history, as Japanese concepts such as wa and wabi sabi have long earned attention from places like the United States, sometimes from a place of pure curiosity and sometimes as pre-internet "life hacks" aimed 61 making one's existence a little better. (B). just made these inescapable. exotic At& The web as ization ~10 at 生涯 There's certainly an element of exoticization in Western writers treating hum-drum activities secrets from Asia. There are also plenty of Japanese people helping to spread these ideas, albeit mostly 6225 the form of books like Ken Mogi's "The Little Book of Ikigai." 2

英作文の添削をして頂きたいです。 何点かについても記載していただけると嬉しいです。 左：問題＆回答 右：解答

模試 表現 次の日本文中の下線部(ア)~ (ウ) を英語になおしなさい。 生徒 : 失礼します。 生徒: 先生: ちょうど時間ができたところだよ,どうぞ。 okad どれだけ考えても,この箇所がどうもしっくりこなくて。 もう一度説明をお願いでき ますか。 □Call Ⅰ ask at last class. I considered この前の授業でわからなかったところを質問してもよろしいですか? 生徒:なるほど! これですっきりしました。 ありがとうございました。 loo 生 (ウ)急いで説明して申し訳なかったね。 こう考えるとどうかな。 able me to it, but I didn't understand " I'm sorry that I explained to your in a because I have to speak English only what I speak English, so it improve my English 月 you a question I didn't understand harry t あなたの学校は語学プログラムとして生徒に海外留学とオンライン留学を提供している。 あなたは英語力を高めたいと考えていて、どちらかのプログラムを選ぶ予定である。どちら を選ぶか、「英語力を高める」という目的に合う理由を含め、あなたの考えを具体的に45語程 一度の英語で書きなさい。 なお, 複数の文になってもかまわない。 Janothe be birt I chose to study abroad. I'm alle to more 日 it. Overseas improve my English Also, I concentrate (2021年度 進研模試 2年生1月実施) •Affectively than online sindy commedia yang alamian bến ph abro 17 解答 (45点) A 【解答例】 (ア) May Ⅰ ask a question about something s that Ⅰ couldn't understand in the last class? 5 • I'd like to ask a question about something/5 that Ⅰ couldn't understand in the previous lesson.js (10点) (イ) Though I've spent a while on this part6 I cannot quite understand it.」6 • I've spent quite a while on this part,16 but it's not really clear to me.6 (12点) (ウ)I'm sorry to have explained itg in such a rush-j2 Ⅰ apologizeg for explaining ing in a hurry-12 (8点) B 【解答例】 〈海外留学〉 I would rather study abroad to polish up my English. Actually, meeting people there would motivate me to try my best to be a better English speaker. Also, communicating face-to-face makes it easier to ask questions and would help me further improve my English skills. (45語) 〈オンライン留学> Studying English online would be better for me. By recording classes, I could review what I learned and practice my English repeatedly by watching the recordings. Also, studying online would enable me to take classes at any time. So, I think I could improve my English effectively. ( 47語) (15点) 採点基準 B 【ポイント①】 自分が選んだプログラムを 明示できている・・3点 【ポイント②】 選んだプログラムに固有の特徴 を示し, それが 「英語力を高める」 という目的 に合っている選んでいないプログラムに固有 の特徴を示し,それでは英語力が高められない ことが書けている・・12点 「英語力を高める」という目的と関係がない/「英 「語力を高める」という目的に合っているが、そ の特徴が選んだプログラムに固有ではない・・・･ 6点 設問解説 A (7)「~について質問してもよろしいです か?」 は May Iask a question about 〜? で表 すことができる。 また, 「~について質問し たいと思う」と言い換え, I'd like to ask a question about 〜と表すこともできる。 「わ からなかったところ」 は関係代名詞を用い て, something that Ⅰ couldn't understand な どとすればよい。 「この前の授業で」 は 「こ の前の」 の意味の last や 「前の｣ の意味の previous を用いて, in the last class や in the previous lesson と表現できる。 (イ) 「どれだけ考えても,この箇所がどうもしっ くりこなくて。」 は前半を 「私はこの箇所に (多くの) 時間を費やした」 と言い換え、 現 在完了を用いて I've spent (quite) a while on this part と表すことができる。 後半は 「私は それを完全には理解できない」 や 「私にはあ まりはっきりしない」 などと言い換えて, I cannot quite understand it や it's not really clear to me と表せばよい｡ また. 現在時制を 用いて, No matter how hard I try to understand it this part doesn't make sense. などと表すこ ともできる。 (ウ) 「急いで説明して申し訳なかったね｡」 は <be sorry to have+過去分詞〉 ｢~したことを 「すまなく思う」 や apologize for ~「~のこ とで謝る」 に 「説明する」 の目的語を補い。

左の文章の内容に合うものを右から1つ選ぶ問題です 教えてください🙏

12 Problems of communication affect us all in many aspects of It is quite easy to be day-to-day living, and can cause serious trouble. misunderstood or to speak vaguely. 3 An example of difficult communication is in the doctor-patient relationship, where most patients find it very difficult to get the right words to describe their problems. 4 Even fairly common terms, like "pain", are ambiguous, and used differently by different patients. The problem affects the doctor too, who often has difficulty explaining the medical situation in words which the patient will understand.

答えと出来れば訳を教えて頂きたいです！

2 次の各文の下線部に最も近い意味を持つ語句を,下の1~4から一つずつ選びな nwob og ‣ 1. Please pick me up at 7:00 p.m. PARK 1 lift me off the ground gailten 2 call me wonomo soy 992 of old accident resulted (4) collect me 3 ignore me no S ) HOND II 2. There is no accounting for tastes. - - saw the 'No Smoking' 0801 m ( he reluctantly put ( discussing 2 giving up Juo ni (S 3 imposing (2) off 4 explaining anoidesup biquie woy dirw gabiserd 3. What do the letters in YMCA stand for? the business. Ho 1 maintain out no (2) 2 represent (3) write livs dod boog ( 4 require so I have to noltrem & RM (S)

25分かる方教えていただけると嬉しいです😭！！

b(24) (25) He had difficulty ( ) the problem in English to his teacher. Dof explaining Oto explain Dexplaining ④explain)idd bobragen I (09) oDas (25) D (26) A(0)is the money that you pay for a journey made, for example, by