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日本文化を紹介の作文です。
文章におかしなところありますか？

We have a setuzun erent.
It's February 3rd and 4th.
it throws beans and kicks output bad thigs.
It does it in hope of good health.
It's a traditional Japanese culture.

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Answer 1

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Xx_Saskia_xX

添削してみました。

We have a setuzun erent.❌
setuzun と erent がスペル間違い。
There is an event called setsubun in Japan. ⭕
訳: 節分という行事が日本にはあります。

It's February 3rd and 4th. ❌
It is held on February 3rd and 4th every year. ⭕
訳: 毎年２月3日と4日に催されます。

it throws beans and kicks output bad thigs. It does it in hope of good health.❌
People throw beans to keep bad spirits away and to hope for a good health. ⭕
訳: みんなで豆をまいて悪いことを遠ざけ、健康を願います。

It's a traditional Japanese culture. ❌
It is a traditional cultural event in Japan. ⭕
訳: それは日本の伝統的文化行事です。

Answer 2

Hinata🐾

いいんじゃないかと思うよ