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Should include the future from 'be going to"
(((check the grammar for me pls.)))
-you can compose or compare it for me-
My future plan is work and travel. At the end of my studies thought lwas going to work and travel. Because I
wanted to live. Going to work abroad and collect money after finishing my work.I was able to continue traveling
in that country. It gives me the experience of living, learning about different cultures. Improving my English and
really working on experiments in the real atmosphere so if I want to achieve my plan I'm going to study hard. I'm
going to be more diligent, not lazy. I'm going to gain as much knowledge and experience during college life. I'm
going to graduate from university in 4 years, and continue master's degree, so I can go to work and travel. 'm
going to learn and practice more English. Furthermore, I'm going to pay more attention to English I'm going to
have more courage to speak English and I'm goingto find a reliable agency to make it easier for me to go to work
and travel. When Italk about who is involved in the plan I think that me and the agency allows me to go to work
and travel, or maybe the staff that l apply for a visa to travel abroad.