Question

Yuna

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QUESTION
Do
you think parents should take their children to museunms?

I think parents should fake therr children
1O MUseUm. have tuo easons.
First, they con ouch many thin9s.
For erample, ancient dinosaur an d local
history.
Second, it is erciてing for their fomilyt0go
there. If they go with their family, also
po1 ents can learn not on y children. Sotheit
family ship will be ketter.
That is why I think se.

Answer 1

✨ Best Answer ✨

taka_r

,not only children but also parents can learn.
That's why は「だから」とか「ま、そういうわけで」と言う意味なんで、続くのは「自分をmuseumにつれていけ」みたいなオチが入るのかな？

Answer 2

Cafe

理由を書くときもうちょっと書いた方がいいと思います。
字数を増やしたいときにも役立ちます。

Yuna

ありがとうございます(*'ω'ﾉﾉﾞ