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れん‪

埼玉県の英語の過去問で英作文の添削をどなたかお願いします🙏🏻
①I want to study abroad.
②I have two reasons. First, I have never been to abroad. I want to learn English there. Second, I want to talk with foreign people. That is why I want to study abroad.

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【質問) When you are a high school student, what do you want to try?
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Answer 1

✨ Best Answer ✨

yuuki

been abroadの間にtoはいりません
study abroadのstudyと同様にbe動詞もverbなのでtoは必要ないです
他は大して問題無いと思います

れん‪

感謝します🙇🏻‍♀️