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Today, many people enjoy jogging before or after work. Do you think the number of
such joggers will increase in the future?

I think the number of such joggers will increase
in the future. I have two reasons. First,
jogging is good for helth. We have to keep helth
better. If we jog, we don't be sick. Second,
jogging is fun. It must not run fast or
don't have to care speed. It is fun for
many people. And It's important to enjoy it.
For these reasons,
I think the number of
such joggers will increase in the future.

英検 2級

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