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おもち

英検準2級ライティング採点お願い致します🙏
線が引かれているところはsoに直してあるので、直した方で読んでいただけると嬉しいです！

There
ari
SO.
Yes, I think it is a good idea, I have two reasons. First, they can learn many things because they
have a lot of time to sendy. Second, they are be able to prepare for next classes. I think!
is important of study. Therefore I believe getting early to study in the
getting ready for next classes
morning is
a amazing
idea.

QUESTION
Do you think it is a good idea for students to get up early to study in
the morning?

Answer 1

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First,〜.のところはもう1文詳しい理由を書いた方がいいと思います。(例: firstで『たくさんの物事を学べる』と書いているので、『For example, they can study many subjects such as Japanese and math efficiently.』(例えば、国語や数学などたくさんの教科を効率よく勉強できる。)などの英文を入れるのもアリです👍🏻 ̖́-)
secondの方は👌です!!

おもち

ありがとうございます！助かりました🥹