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美琴

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My memories during qn emergency school closure is that made masks with
my fqmily.

The mask is made of cloth qnd string.

1made it for the first time, but | was happy that it was done well.

1miss my friends but | had aq lot of time with my family.

1want to continue to value the time | spend with my fqmily.

英作文

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with my family のところが被っているので、一番したの行のところをthemに置き換えるとさらにいいかもしれないです

美琴

ありがとうございます！！😭