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次のTopic について、自分の意見とその理由を50 語程度の英文で書きなさい。 Topic :If you had an "Anywhere Door", where would you go? Topic 2: If you could travel in a time machine, when would you go to? Topic 3: Do you think more people will have pets in the future? 55 ☺ If I could travel in a time machine, I want to go to Heian Period. I have two reasons. First. I can watch Helankya. Sei Shenagon and Murasaki Shikibu. I like their essay. so I want to talk with them. For this reason. I want to go to Helan Period 54歳 0 If I had an Second. I want to meet "Anywhere Door", I want to go to Shizuoka. I have two reasons. First I want to eat Local gourment food like Fuzimiya-yakicabo, Second I want to watch the volley match of Hamamatushugakusha high school. But I haven't enough many to ge So I want to go to Shizuoka with anywhere door. ☺ I think more people will have pets in the future. It's because having And having pets make children's pets is good for education. emotions enriching. Also, pet helps relieve children's loneliness. So I think more people will have pete in the future Check! □自分の意見や考えを最初に述べているか。 □その理由を述べているか 理由に対する具体的な事例・事実を述べているか ( つなぎ言葉を効果的に使っているか。 □単語・文法の誤りはないか。 ) words

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旧日本語に合うように ( )内の語句を並べかえなさい. (1) トムは20歳になって初めて海外旅行をしました. Tom (was, travel abroad, didn't, he, until) 20 years old. Tom (2) 君はその質問のすべてに答えなければならないというわけではありません。 You (answer, of, have to, all, don't) the questions. You (3) より高い価格が必ずしもより質がいいことを意味するとは限らない。 A higher price (not, better quality, mean, does, necessarily). 20 years old. _the questions.

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(5) Read the instructions and write your answer in English. (30 points) The graph below shows changes in the number of global UFO sightings recorded from 1990 to 2020: 10,000 8,000 ¥6,000 ¥4,000 2,000円 319 1990 92 2000 98 20 8 sqmod 2010 08 21 28,736 2022 九州大学 7,26778 RONTASSENPI obolksad & eworle rar sig i Isra berl A vasqmo IngA al bagasi ni birb bodas yragmo? 91 im bnooo; basie & neqigo er bris 2020 18 Itsed) * 10-0750 Using about 75 English words, describe the trends in UFO sightings between 1990 and 2020. OS ovods ar A yoqme to sisde todemon esgs 06-01 mi s38 odwongan alam si ei stunts oig airls to neg regned on. Note: Words that express a number, such as 319 or 1990, are counted as one JI6q legisl eggs 02-06 i alem the word. m 2510 M

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英語 ( 70分) 1 次の文章を読んで 1~7の問いに英語で答えなさい。 It's Christmas Eve, December 24, 1914. The night is clear and cold/ Moonlight illuminates the snow/covered land separating the British and German trenches outside a small town in northern France. British military command feeling nervous sends a message to the front lines: it is thought possible the enemy may attack during Christmas or New Year. Extra caution will be maintained during this period. The military command has no idea what's really about to happen. Around seven for eight in the evening/ British soldier Albert Moren blinks in disbelief What's that on the other side? Lights flicker on./ one by one. Lanterns. he sees, and torches, and... Christmas trees? /"Stille Nacht, That's when he hears it - soldiers singing in German/" heilige Nacht." Never before had the Christmas music sounded so beautiful. I shall never forget it," Moren says later. It was one of the highlights of my life. Then, in response, the British soldiers start singing The First Noel." The Germans applaud, and counter by singing "O Tannenbaum." They go back-and-forth for a while, until finally the two enemy camps sing "O Come, All Ye Faithful" in Latin, together. "This was really a most extraordinary thing." soldier Graham Williams later recalled, "two nations both singing the same Christmas music in the middle of a war." Events just north of a small town in western Belgium go further still. From the enemy trenches, Corporal John Ferguson hears Someone call out, asking if they want some tobacco. "Come towards the light," shouts the German. So Ferguson walks out into no-man's land into the field between both armies. "We were soon speaking as if we had known each other for years." he later wrote. "What a sight little groups of Germans and British talking together almost as far as the eye can seel Out of the darkness we could hear laughter and see lighted matches.... Here we were laughing and chatting to men who only a few hours before we were trying to kill!" The next morning. Christmas Day, the bravest of the soldiers again climb out of the trenches. Walking past the barbed wire, they go over to shake hands with the enemy. Then they wave "come on!" to those who'd stayed behind. "We all cheered." remembered soldier Leslie Washington of the Queen's Westminster Rifles. "and then we all came out together like a football crowd." (A Gifts are exchanged. The British offer chocolate, tea and cakes: and the Germans share cigars, sauerkraut and schnapps. They make jokes and take group photographs as though it's a big./happy reunion/ More than one game of football is played./using helmets for goal posts. One match goes 3-2 to the Germans, another goes to the British, 4-1. In northern France/the opposing sides hold a joint burial service. "The Germans formed up on one side." Lieutenant Arthur Pelham- Burn later wrote./"the English on the other, the military officers standing in front, helmets off, heads bowed in respect. As their friends are laid to rest friends killed by enemy bullets - they sing in English "The Lord is My Shepherd" and the same song in German mein Hirt" their voices in unison. "Der Herr That evening, there are Christmas dinner parties up and down the lines. One English soldier finds himself invited into the German held zone to a wine cellar, where he and a soldier from southern Germany pop open a bottle of 1909 French champagne. The men exchange

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物理のエッセンス　力学　74 運動方程式 解答では発射された質量mのガスを正と仮定していますが、私はロケットとは逆方向だと仮定し負にしました。 3枚目が私の考え方なのですが、合っていますでしょうか？

60 力学 以下,滑らかな水平面上での現象とする。 70 2kgの球Pと10kgの球Q が図のように衝突し た。 衝突後のQの速度を求めよ。 71* 静止している質量Mの木片に質量mの弾丸が速 さひで突き刺さった。 木片の速さを求めよ。 ま た、系から失われた力学的エネルギーEを求めよ。 72* 質量Mの粗い板が置かれている。 質量mの物体 が速さで飛んできて, 板上をすべり,やがて板 に対して止まった。 最後の全体の速さ”はいくらか。 運動工か? なんでだ... 73 静止していた物体が,質量mとMの2つに分裂し した。両者の速さの比v/Vと運動エネルギーの比をそ れぞれ, m, M で表せ。 m vo 6m/s 3m/s Po- mvo ■ 運動量保存則はベクトルの関係だから,直線上に限 らず,平面上で起こる衝突･分裂に対しても成り立つ (証 明は前ページちょっと一言と同じ)。 そのような場合には x,y 方向それぞれの成分について式を立てる。ときに は,運動量のベクトル図を描いて考えてもよい。 High 物体系に働く外力の和が0とな Miss 摩擦があると運動量保存則が使えないと思う人が多い。 でも物体と 板の間の摩擦は内力だ。 作用・反作用 3m/s M V A M 0? m トク 静止からの分裂速さは(運動エネルギーも) 質量の逆比 ムズム 74* 速さ Voで進む質量Mのロケットから質量mのガスを後方に噴射したとこ ろ, ロケットから見てガスはuの速さで遠ざかった。噴射後のロケット(質量 M-m) の速さ Vはいくらか。 相対速度の考え方 M V2 V2

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ⅡI. 次の英文の空欄 ( 11 ) から ( 30 )に入る最も適切な語句を, a.〜d.の中から 1つ選びなさい。 解答は解答用紙1枚目 (マークシート方式)の所定の解答欄にマークし なさい。 Huy Fong Foods, the southern California company that produces 20 million bottles of sriracha (1) annually, has experienced a low ( 11 ) of red jalapeño chili peppers in recent years made worse by spring's crop failure. What is the cause? ( 12 ) weather and drought (2) conditions in Mexico. It's not (13) chili peppers. Mustard producers in France and Canada said extreme weather caused a 50% reduction in seed production last year, ( 14 ) to a shortage of the condiment on grocery store shelves. Blistering heat, stronger storms, droughts, floods, fires and changes in rainfall (15) are also affecting the cost and availability of staples, including wheat, corn, coffee, apples, chocolate and wine. The climate crisis is increasing the intensity and ( 16 ) of extreme weather events — and it's putting food production at risk. "Almost everything we grow and ( 17 ) in the US is facing some climatic stress," said Carolyn Dimitri, nutrition and food studies professor at NYU. Wheat and other grain crops are particularly ( 18 ). In the Great Plains region, (19) most of the US's wheat is harvested, drought depressed the winter crop. Farmers are abandoning farmland used for growing winter wheat in the US-primarily in Texas and Oklahoma - at the highest rate since 2002. Meanwhile in Montana, flooding is (20) grain crops. The impact of the climate crisis on grain crops ( 21 ) beyond the US. In India, a fierce heatwave damaged the wheat crop ( 22 ) record-setting temperatures throughout the spring and summer. As Delhi hit 49°℃ in May, the government placed a ( 23 ) on wheat exports, driving up prices even further than the rise following Russia's invasion of Ukraine. Food production is a driver of the climate crisis and a (24) of it. ( 25 ) the food system will require a wide variety of actions, including increasing crop diversity, delivering climate (26) to farmers around the world, expanding conservation programs and offering growers insurance that pays out when an index such as rain or wind speed falls above or below a fixed limit. The Biden administration is supporting research into "climate-smart" agriculture, an approach to managing cropland, forest, fisheries and cattle that attempts to address the intersecting challenges of the climate crisis and food ( 27 ). In May, the UN secretary general, António Guterres, said that climate-related disasters and extreme weather were a driver of global hunger and that 1.7 billion people ( 28 ) by the climate crisis over the last decade. Experts say (29) action is taken, we can expect to see increased food prices, decreased availability and conflict over water, which will primarily affect poorer countries and low-income Americans, (30) everything from school lunches to food aid programs. © Copyright Guardian News & Media Ltd 2023 (1) sriracha (2) drought かんばつ 世界中で人気のチリソース

二つ目にその大学は駅から近く、立地が良いからです。今通っている高校は駅から遠いのでそれは魅力的な要素です。 的なことを英語で言いたいのですが Second, that university is near the station and good location. T... Read More

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III 英文中の空所 21~25 に入れるのにもっとも適切な語句をそれぞれ選び,番号を マークせよ。 Processed foods like chips, soda and ( 21 ) pizzas)are full of salt, sugar and fat. Scientists have already linked low-cost, packaged foods to rising obesity rates around the world. Obesity is a condition (22) too much body fat. It is said to cause many health problems. A study found that people tend to eat a lot more calories when eating mostly processed foods ( 23 ) to when they eat less processed foods. In another study, researchers in France found people who ate more processed foods were more ( 24 ) to have heart disease. A similar study in Spain linked eating more processed foods to a ( 25 ) risk of death in general. 21 22 23 VOA Learning English (https://learningenglish.voanews.com/) 事 “What's So Bad about Processed Foods?" から抜粋し,一部改変。 25 1. freezer 1. involved 1. compare 24 1. like 1. height 2. freezing 2. involving (2) compared 2. liked 2. heighten 3. froze 3. involvement 3. comparison 3. likelihood 3. higher 4. frozen 4. involves 4. to compare 4. likely 4. highly