得点源のために自作のテンプレ使用してます。 空白は気にしないでください！みづらくてごめんなさい。添削お願いします😌

以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80語~100語です。 例題 09 とくちょう TOPIC <nI 31れた。 Today, some companies allow their employees to wear casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts. Do you think the number of such companies will increase in the future? POINTS nエうなエ バふのに" Business culture とう思り ● Comfort Fashion (解答 I think that more companies will allow employees to wear clothes like jeans or T-shirts. By doing so, they can make their workers happy. These clothes are more comfortable than dress clothes, so workers will be more relaxed and able to enjoy their work. Second, many companies want to help the environment. If employees are allowed to wear casual clothes, they will be cooler. Because of this, companies Won't have to use air conditioners as much, which will reduce the amount of energy used. So, more companies will allow employees to wear casual clothes to work. (96 語) (2016年度第1回) one (~) after another [the other] 次々と 137 on the contrary それどころか (every) once ina while 時々 筆記 4

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目標時間 - 20-分 ●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外の観点か ら理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 8 練習問題 目 ってくるのは、 aじ or。 8 日目 それシ gらの一番のしゃみかも知れたしし。 opping と簡潔に。 以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 Young people love playing computer games, and this may even be their favorite hobby. Do you think it is okay for young people to play computer games? 書き換えているこ 五や動詞を使用し T91つである。 知児はコンピュータ-グームバでれき あなたは見たちかここピューターバームてなことを TOPIC になる」理由 性」である。 op for thing. はないので、 こな人はイン POINTS Friendship 友洋 ストレス ● Health ら so は「接 Stress ので、だか 作成では、 解答欄 ここでは 5 ing の特 と述べ が使わ 10 g on よう met ーラ 15 thread 一筋 task (課せられた)仕事 Scene 現場 presentation 発表 る。 TOPICの

Whether or not の　or not はつけてもつけなくてもいいのでしょうか？ (1)の場合はどうでしょうか？

(1) トピックは私たちが制服を着るべきかどうかということです。 POINT O 1ST1 Jasioihs mi egibilidieaoq 970m n bots91 vdeubni m Vdaubni mi (2) 祖母は遠くに住んでいるのだけれども, よく私たちを訪ねてきます。 » POIN lool ine vog 9 boneg airli uodguond! pLonspon bswoj sburitis 9tisi-sseeinl S

英検準1級のwritingの問題です。 添削よろしくお願いしますm(_ _)m

6 日目 練習問題 Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. * Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion * Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: oman Pet owners should be licensed POINTS ●Discarded pets Government interference ●Pet ownership skills ●Cost

テスト直しをしているのですが、答えがこのようになる理由が分かりません。 この（1）〜（5）の問題が答えのようになる理由を教えて下さい。

応用問題(各1点×8) 0l29yalamidton Vetsassfol doum tad lat eredT |1| Choose the best answer to fill in each blank. ) the ancient Romans dressed in everyday life has long been a topic of discussion for historians. OExactly how ②Exactly the way how 3The exact way how OTHE exactly way 6What exactly (明治学院大) (2) That boy is ( ) than good. Dthe kindest @kinder ③more kinder ④more kind (関西学院大) )went on, the more tired the players became. OThe long game 2The longer game (南山大) OThe longer the game ④The longest the game

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語数の目安は80語~100語です。 解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお, 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて。 いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea? POINTS Safety The environmment Tourism

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ら答えてください。 TOPIC Some people say that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ● Education ● Income ● Skills

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以下の TOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外の観点か ら理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Young people love playing computer games, and this may even be their favorite hobby. Do you think it is okay for young people to play computer games ? POINTS ● Health Friendship Stress

学校を休んでいて答えが分からないので教えてください。

4 Use the passive of the verbs in brackets and complete the sentences. [一→ L.1 mainly from the U.S.A. [import] (1) Soybeans (2) How much for your first job? [pay] [過去時制で) you (3) A new theater near the station now. [is building] (4) Identity badges by all visitors. [should wear] (5) The file ; it may have a virus. [mustn't open] 1(6) our new gym? It's amazing. [have shown] you (7) It 19) gad yooy nst (8) The teacher that the company will open a new factory in Malaysia. [say] [「~だそうだ」の意味に) vit all the people in this town. [know] (9) Her boss her latest report. [satisfy] by her teammates because of her leadership. [look up to] (10) Sarah is 5 Put the words in the right order. [→L.8] 9qy To eon (1) My aim in life ( novelist, become, a, to, is ). lood s mid ovsy (2) I believe this is ( a, to, good, take, approach ). 00 (3) It ( is, to, very, predict, difficult ) the result of this match. (4) Billy ( important, it, make, thinks, to ) a success of his life. (5) The shop assistant kindly ( operate, how, showed, to, me ) the machine. (6) My mother ( to, to, withdraw, went, the post office ) some money. (7) I had no ( in, on, to, rely, friends ) Canada. I felt very lonely. (8) I'm(to, the soccer team, that, know, excited ) will come to Japan. 6 Correct the following sentences which contain one error each. [総合問題] (1) The festival is much bigger than it would be ten years ago. (2) My sister may talk with Mr. Williams at the. party last night. (3) Children under the age of six do not allow in this large pool. (4) I can't lend you my digital camera because it's repairing this week. (5) They have been discussing about the topic for more than two hours. (6) Helen was very pleasing with her exam results. (7) She pretended to not know anything about the matter. (8) This dictionary is easy to use it, so I recommend it to my juniors.

whatever topic you want to write about が答えですが、 topic whatever you want to write about ではダメな理由を教えていただきたいです🙇‍♂️

(4) to start 6 was delayed (6) was suPpo (センター試験) 3) You can look through your textbook and choose for your essay. Oyou (2) want to 3 topic のwhatever⑤ write about (センター試験)