九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です！🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です！🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

characteristicとcharacterの違いを教えて頂きたいです

1435 erfectionist K Multiple Choices 123 Richard Gere played the leading () in the movie. a. characteristic b. characterize c. character 24 One major () of the Japanese car is its compact size. a. characteristic b. characterize c. character 25 The magazine () an article on Hollywood movi 3 recognize No

大ブリテン・アイルランド連合王国が複数の国が同一の君主の下に連合する同君連合でないのはなぜですか、、 イギリスはアイルランドを併合したんだからアイルランドの王もイギリスの王も同じ人になるんじゃないんですか？

Cの問題はアンダーラインを引いて終わりで合ってますか？

About you Listening and writing A good idea? 1 A 4.30 Listen to Sophia and Alan discuss the inventions from the article on page 124. For each invention, who says it's a good idea? Check (✔) Sophia or Alan. Invention 1. virtual goggles 2. a space elevator 3. a smart mirror About B) 4.30 Listen again. Write one reason why Sophia or Alan thinks the invention is a good idea. Do you agree? Discuss with a partner. you C Read the article below and the Help note. Underline the words that list ideas. Home Edit Who says it's a good idea? Sophia apeAlan Document Elements Tables Table Layout Charts Why? Smart Art "Smart" Refrigerators Scientists predict that people will have "smart" refrigerators in the future. Scanners will read bar codes on food and... X I think this will make our lives better. First, you won't need to go grocery shopping anymore, so.. Second, you'll never come home and find an empty refrigerator.. Next, scanners will tell you if the food is bad, so you won't get sick... Finally, you'll be able to ... Help note Listing ideas First, you won't need to ... Second, you'll never... Next, scanners will... Finally, you'll be able to ... D Write a short article about a future invention. Will it make life better or worse? Why? Give four reasons. Free talk p. 135

赤線を引いた部分 具体的にはどう言うことですか？

465 466 1467 のようなも ●注意 「どのような」という日本語に引きずられて, (x) How is S like? としないこと｡疑問代名 詞 what は前置詞 like の目的語になるが, 疑問副詞 how は目的語にはならない。 What is it like to do ...? 「・・･ するのはどのようなものですか」 を用 464 の What is S like? の主語S に形式主語itを用いて, 真主語に不定詞 to do いた What is it like to do ...? を想定する。 さらにそれを間接疑問にすると. what it is like to do ... 「...するのはどのようなものか｣という語順になる。 ◆「海外生活とはどういうものか」 を what it would be like to live abroad と表現する。 SC Flel What do you think about [of] A? 「A についてどう思いますか」 What do you think about [of] A? は 「Aについてどう思いますか」という意味で、Aに 関する意見を尋ねる慣用表現。 疑問代名詞 What は他動詞 think の目的語。 1 2 語法 (x) How do you think about...? という誤りに注意。 疑問代名詞 what は他動詞 think の目的語になるが, 疑問副詞 how は目的語にならない。 解答 464 shoy What • What has become of A? 「A はどうなりましたか」 (= What has happened to A?) What has become of A? は 「Aはどうなりましたか」という意味で, Aに何かが起こっ た結果を尋ねる慣用表現。 疑問代名詞 what は文の主語。 間接疑問は what has become of A という語順になる。 主語を尋ねる疑問文は間接疑問にしてもその語順は変わらない ことに注意。 Field 13イディオム id you not join... の語順は不可。 ◆ 間接疑問の what has become of ... を,他動詞 wonder の目的語にする。 「母が買ってくれたマフラー」は, the scarf (which [that]) my mother bought for me となる。ここでは目的格の関係代名詞 which [that] が省略されている。 209 ●注意 464 466 と同様に「どうなりましたか」 から (x) How has become of A? という誤りを しやすい。 疑問副詞 how は主語にならない。 に注意 〈How come +平叙文...?> 「どうして [なぜ] ･・･するのですか wow come ...?? は Why ...? と同じ意味だが, How come には平叙文の語順が続くこと 注意｡ ▶(x) H Fl cation was like (how 不要) 465 what it would be like (was 不要 ) _bout the article that (how 不要) 467 wonder what has become of Sught468 come you did not

Check It Out の問題があっているか教えてください。添削して欲しいです。

Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. 3 This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 "application 771) / assignment. Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? Q3 What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

Q3が分からないので教えてください。

Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. ³ This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 7 "application 771) / assignment . Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

高一模試の過去問(英作文)です。 1枚目が私の回答、2枚目が問題、3枚目が模範解答 です。 私の回答の間違えているところを教えて欲しいです。 読みにくい字があったら遠慮なく言ってください🙇

5 点詳細 21点 B (ア) Recently, we can get many books and magazines on the Internet.. I want to go to the bookstore and I want to buy it looking an inside carefully. |(1)| I think we should practice at. community sports clubs. Students studying at school can't concentrate. because the voices of the ( ). I think students who are doing school clubs are load. ださい。 標点の対象となりません。

1がなぜ答えが②になるのか分かりません。 1996から1997と1997から1998は同じ売り上げの差なのになぜ②とわかるのでしょうか。 また、どこからパーセントが分かったのかも教えていただきたいです。 よろしくお願いします🙇

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