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英検準1級のライティングが毎回悪いです。 1回目 内容 3/4 、構成 1/4 、語い 3/4 、文法2/4 2回目 内容 1/4、構成1/4、語い3/4、文法3/4 こんな感じで毎回ライティングの点数が1番低いです。 2回で共通しているのは、構成が... Read More

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英作 初めは花子は太郎が好きではなかったが、一緒に仕事をする中で、2人はお互いを愛すようになった。 解答が At first, Hanako didn't like Taro, but while they were working together, they came... Read More

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付箋で示してあるところからの文の最後のfollowing their introductionはどういう意味ですか？和訳のどこの部分ですか？後この部分は分詞構文になりますか？

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ら一つずつ選べ。 (1) Whether as a dream or reality, the idea of climbing to the top of the highest mountains of the world has a special appeal to mountain climbers. Two sets of mountains have become targets for the most serious climbers. The first set, called the Eight-thousanders (8000ers), consists of the 14 mountain peaks higher than 8,000 meters above sea level) (which are all in Asia even Summits, refers to the highest are Asia mountain on eacl ents of the world. (2) First, let us consider the 8000ers. Endeavors to climb such high Vt. 2 mountains understandably T 1/₁ 1 involve situations that are life-threatening volve 2 of the climbin Such difficulting 2

The first is Nevada〜の文が全体的にどこがS主語でどこがV動詞かわかりせん 後、その次の分のat the opposite end of the magnet scale のところが マグネットの度合いではその（ネバダの）対極に位置する　と訳してあるんです... Read More

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付箋の貼ってるところのadults bornのところがよくわかりません。born はbe動詞と一緒に使いませんか？

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