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Cows Need Friends Milk production is big business. In North America, for example, one person consumes on average over 150 kilograms of milk every year. To supply the huge amount needed, big farms use machines that automatically feed cows and take their milk. Because ( 24 ), the cost of producing milk is lower. On such farms, though, it is easy for diseases to spread from one animal to another. This can lead to many cows dying on one farm. As a result, cows are often kept separately from a young age. Scientists in Canada researched the effects of keeping young cows in this way. They compared such cows with ones that had been kept with another cow. The researchers showed a red plastic container, which the cows had never seen before, several times to each cow. The cows that had been kept in pairs were interested in the container_at first but soon ignored it. ( 25 )。 the cows that had been kept alone continued to react as if it was the first time they had seen the Container. The researchers concluded that cows kept alone are more sensitive to new things. This is important news for farmers. If cows cannot get used to the feeding and milking machines, milk production slows down. The researchers believe farmers would have fewer problems with feeding and milking if cows were kept in very small groups, rather than separately. The researchers also say that diseases are not sucha big problem for small groups. There should be little risk of ( 26 ) if only two or three of them are kept together. (24) 1 each cow is much larger 2 the milk can be kept longer 4 cheaper food is being used proie 3 fewer people are needed (25) 1 Later on 2 At last 3 In other words 4 On the other hand (26) 1 feeding cows too much 3 wild animals attacking 2 losing many animals 4 young cowS staying healthy

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4 以下のTOPICについて、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただ し、これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Today in Japan, there are few restaurants where pets are allowed to Come in. Do you think more restaurants should allow pets in the future? POINTS sanitation * allergy danger 1 do not think that more restaurants should allow pets in the future. I have two reasons. hirst, most most of the people have allergy of dogs or cots. Ifthey eat lunch with petた, they will oppear allergic symptoms. Second, most pets have a lot of vorious disease. 9ood Sanitation ond cam be give people disease. The number of. people who suffer from diseose may increase in These for reasons, I think that "Can H is not of animal the future it stores allow pets pets should not enter the restauronts . Come in . 興疑問題の 模擬問題

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TR. 48-51 Reading 「黄金の腕を持つ男」 James Harrison とは、一体どのような人物なのでしょうか。 00 DIbe w aTeau aucd srit To 19dm an) bns W anini am James Harrison is known as “the man with the golden arm” and has saved millions of 10 lives. When people hear this, they may think he is a kind of superhero with special powers. In fact, he looks like ( ① ) in Australia. However, he has something special: his blood.s James was only fourteen years old when he had big surgery*. The surgery was -boo) .bredos 5 Successful, but he lost so much blood that he needed a blood transfusion*. 。This experience taught him the imp tance of blood. He made his first blood donation* a few weeks after 特殊は花体 his 18th birthday. Soon after that, a special antibody was found in his blood. 13 antibody woH (S の 9au elnsbute vni is a kind of protein* the body makes when it finds something bad in the blood. Every year, thousands of babies in Australia were suffering from* a type of blood 10 disease. Some babies even died before birth, while ( ) were born with serious brain loodbe damage. The antibody found in James's blood can cure* this disease, and so he has 1orda tsdtw 9 o brooaA ( donated his blood more than 1,000 times over the past sixty years. His blood has helped to save about 2.4 million babies, and his own grandson was one of them. In one interview, he said, “An hour of your time is a lifetime* for someone else,"» 15 James Harrison, the man with the golden arm, never gives up helping ( ⑤ ). 9 TegGuua yo (229 words)

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Modern humans evolved in Africa about 200,000 years ago and began You are studying about the world population. You are going to read the Then just 12,000 years ago, several cultures shifted from hunting and migrating to other parts of the globe about 100,000 years ago. Our earliest ancestors relied on hunting and gathering their food to survive. Only a finite number of people could be supported on the wildlife in an area for a to control its own food supply. Civilizations grew and so did the human 30 B*★★ following article to understand how the world population has grou limited amount of time. gathering to farming. Humans became the first and only species a population. About 2,000 years ago, the estimated world population wo. 170 million people. The largest civilizations at this point in history wew. the Roman Empire and the Han Dynasty in China. The next 1,700 years were marked by the growth and conquest of empires, global navigation and exploration. People had yet to understand the science behind life and death, or how to prevent and treat most diseases. As a result, many children died young. Our global population grew, but slowly, reaching / angh waibdlie, aumans in Alfs about 500 million around 1500 and 1 billion by 1804. By the late 1700s, the world was embarking on the Industrial Revolution, a period of history in Europe and North America, where there were significant advances in science and technology. The Industrial Ainge and Chia Revolution brought the invention of the steam engine and the use of mlontrl the l ie Romam humans start electricity. During this period, there were also many inventions that promoted longer life. These included improvements in farming, nutrition, medicine and sanitation. Now, people were able to fight once-deadly Banpe and germs, produce more and different kinds of food, and cure more illnesses. Before long, these new discoveries and inventions spread throughout the world, lowering death rates, especially among children, and improving people's quality of life. Now you might be wondering what happened to the birth rates while the death rates were coming down. In Europe and North America, on re attes sa/and lar mle Acoher thar deuath pgoulatron had doudled to ton er bitkien br1974(0m pits decran groo tas beer oing Dulton pes Hamans fiaing adut.

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bote O (B) Dirty air is one of the most serious national issues in industrialized countries. According to a recent study, breathing in contaminated air now ranks fourth highest among the causes of death in the world.(エ) age or sex, a lot of people are suffering from chronic illness, including asthma* and heart disease. When people breathe in the really tiny pollutant particles, which scientists call particulates*, they