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サキイカ

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以下のTOPICについて、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。
POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただ
し、これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。
語数の目安は80語~100語です。
TOPIC
Today in Japan, there are few restaurants where pets are allowed to
Come in. Do you think more restaurants should allow pets in the
future?
POINTS
sanitation
* allergy
danger
1 do not think that more restaurants should allow
pets in the future. I have two reasons. hirst, most
most of the people have allergy of dogs or cots. Ifthey
eat lunch with petた, they will oppear allergic symptoms.
Second, most pets have a lot of vorious disease.
9ood Sanitation ond cam be give people
disease. The number of. people who suffer from diseose
may increase in
These for reasons, I think that
"Can
H is not
of animal
the future it stores allow
pets
pets should not enter the restauronts .
Come in .
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模擬問題

英検2級

Answer 1

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こんな感じでいかがですか？
間違っていたらすみません💦

サキイカ

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