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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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90.2 次の中から適切な文を選び、関係節にして文を完成しなさい。 Ann is wearinga dress yeu lest seme keys we wanted te visit a museum you're-going to see a movie you had to do some work Linvited some people te-the party n。 1. Have you found the keys_you lost 2. I like the dress _Ann is wear ing. ve wonter to visit. was closed when we got there. 3. The museum 4. What's the name of the movie_I/0U're qoing to SCe 5. Some of the people 1inventéd to the Dortty 6. Have you finished the work_which couldn't come. had f0 do 90.3 次の中から適切な文を選び、 前置詞を使った関係節にして文を完成しなさい。 you-ean rely-en Brian you-teld me about a hotel Japplied for a job Isaw you with a man FOn we-went-to a party last-night we were invited te a wedding Iwerk with a number of peeple- yeu were leeking for seme keys 1. Are thesé the keys _you were looking for 2. Unfortunately, we couldn't go to the wedding which were invited to. 63. I enjoy my job. I like the people who work witha numberof 4. What's the name of that hotel _you told me abaut 5. The party We went to last night wasn't very much fun. 6. I didn't get the job _nhich applied tor 7. Brian is a good person to know. He's somebody _1/0u Can rely on 8. Who was that man I saw you with in the restaurant? 90.4 thatまたは whatを書き入れなさい。 thatがなくてもよい場合は、(that)のように() でくくること。 (that) I had. 1. I gave her all the 2. They give their children everything 3. Tell me 4. Why do you blame me for everything money that they want. and I'll try to get it for you. goes wrong? I can. I've got. (what you want, that 5. Iwon't be able to do much, but I'll do the best (that) what 6. I can only lend you ten dollars. It's all with (what ) you've just said. 1that) 7. I don't agree he says. 8. Idon't trust him. I don't believe anything 18

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People in Finland were the least likely to believe that people laughing in thelr presence were making fun of them. Less than ten percent of Finns in the study saia they would (3)think that, compared to eighty percent of people/in Thailand) Some people in the study said they felt unsure of themselves in social situations 10 but hid their feelings of insecurity. Others said they avoided social situations where they had been laughed at before. The study found that people( in Turkmenistan and Cambodia were more likely to (4)be in the first group. They would hide their feelings of insecurity if they were around other people's laughter. But people in Iraq, Egypt and Jordan were more 15 likely to try to avoid such situations if they felt they had been laughed at before.

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]内の語句を並べかえなさい。 08S-T14 2 274 彼らは燃えそうなものは何でも集めた。 [Owould ② everything ③ thought ④ collected ⑤ they © burn ⑦they ] (東洋大) 1nd o bluo 「大土) 2 275 未来には悲しみばかりだ, などと誰が信じるものか。(2語不要) Who can believe that ( 大) [O bring @ but ③ in ④ future ⑤ nothing ⑥ sorrow ⑦ the 8we ⑨will ] 01d 1dmombi Tnob (東京理科大) 19ora:oe 2 276 宝くじによって集められたお金の大半は, 宝くじ委員会によって様々な慈善活動へと分配さ の c pA voot fhbi o 1o れる。 eg 1apon Most of the money ( )( ) () ( ) ( ) ( ) out by the Lottery Commission among a variety of good causes. [O shared ② the ③is ④raised ⑥ lottery ⑥ by ] on atoteT (上智大) outeo 2 277 His argument was convincing: otherwise () ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ).bua one with ⑦would] (一橋大) [Oagreed @② have ③ him ④ no 6 Lnecw I TA d yioeg stlt jesmil boog 2 278 In the history of skirts, the more voluminous they became, ( ( ) ( ) ( ) fitted mantles or jackets with them. (上智大) [O to ② the ③ it ④more ⑤ was ⑥ difficult ① wear ] dots

全く分からないので解答を教えていただきたいです。

]内の語句を並べかえなさい。 08S-T14 2 274 彼らは燃えそうなものは何でも集めた。 [Owould ② everything ③ thought ④ collected ⑤ they © burn ⑦they ] (東洋大) 1nd o bluo 「大土) 2 275 未来には悲しみばかりだ, などと誰が信じるものか。(2語不要) Who can believe that ( 大) [O bring @ but ③ in ④ future ⑤ nothing ⑥ sorrow ⑦ the 8we ⑨will ] 01d 1dmombi Tnob (東京理科大) 19ora:oe 2 276 宝くじによって集められたお金の大半は, 宝くじ委員会によって様々な慈善活動へと分配さ の c pA voot fhbi o 1o れる。 eg 1apon Most of the money ( )( ) () ( ) ( ) ( ) out by the Lottery Commission among a variety of good causes. [O shared ② the ③is ④raised ⑥ lottery ⑥ by ] on atoteT (上智大) outeo 2 277 His argument was convincing: otherwise () ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ).bua one with ⑦would] (一橋大) [Oagreed @② have ③ him ④ no 6 Lnecw I TA d yioeg stlt jesmil boog 2 278 In the history of skirts, the more voluminous they became, ( ( ) ( ) ( ) fitted mantles or jackets with them. (上智大) [O to ② the ③ it ④more ⑤ was ⑥ difficult ① wear ] dots

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to the large health probieffis iaCiiig [2] Today, the WHO estimates that a third of the global population lack easy access to modern drugs, and that in the poorest parts of Africa and Asia, that figure rises to 50 percent. The WHO believed that the people in developing countries who could not afford or find modern medical doctors were better off using traditional medicine rather than no medicine at all. [3] Today, traditional medicine and treatments are not only used in developing countries,

高校1年、grammar、不定詞 "私はここに工場を建設するのは間違っていると信じている"を英語にした時、私は I believe wrong to build it a factory here.と答えたのですが、itはbelieveの後にくると答えに書いてありました。こ... Read More

関係詞の語法の問題です。 3の問題の答えは4なのですがなぜthatは入らないのでしょうか

の英文の空所に入れるのに最も適切な語句を,下の①~④ から一う 1. Do customers ( 0なさい。 ) smoke in restaurants bother you ? 2 when Dwho 4 like (3 to 2. There was something about his story ( ① what ③ which )made me suspicious. 2 whatever (京都産一 ④ whichever 3. Ken didn't believe ( ) Jane said. D however (2) Some ③ that ④ everything diom n 4. You are the only man in the world ( )I can call my friend. のwhose 2 which 3 that 4 what 5. Towns ( ) attract tourists are usually crowded. uon ort pi (大本日(1 where (のAzhinh

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10 The American weekend officially begins on Friday evening, bint already by Friday morning there are signs that the weekend is just around the corner. You see fewer cars on the highways, and buses and subways are less crowded with people, too. This is because 5 some people take a day off on Friday to have a three-day weekend. 2 Things are also different at work. People don't wear the same clothes as they wear on weekdays; they dress themselves more casually. For instance, managers in the office may put on casual sports clothes instead of coats and ties. Some people put on blue jeans. 103 This trend toward “easy Fridays” is popular with employees who normally wear uniforms to work. In Los Angeles, for example, bus drivers are usually dressed in military-style jackets, hats and trousers. Recently, however, they have received permission to wear polo shirts and baseball caps on Fridays. 15 4 Transportation officials believe that this new Friday *dress code is good for the drivers' *morale. And they are also sure that the 17 passengers won't mind -just as long as the buses run on time. (注)dress code 「服装規定」 morale「士気」

関係詞3 課題が出たのですが分からないので教えて欲しいです

Drills 日本語に合うように,[ ] 内の語句を並べかえなさい. A 1. [ do / what / you ] is more important than [ say / what / you ]. 行動は言葉より重要だ。 2. Don't put off till tomorrow [ can/ do/ you / what ] today. 今日できることを明日まで延ばしてはいけない。 3. [ important /is/what ] in learning English is to practice it every day. 英語を身につけるうえで大切なことは毎日練習することです。 4. You should not believe [ is / on this website / what /written ]. このウェブサイトに書かれていることを信じないほうがいいですよ.