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TOPIC:　some people say that playing sports helps children become better people. Do you agree with this opinion?

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I agree with the opinion that playing sports.
helps children become better people for the following
two reasons.
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First of all, it is good for children to play
sports with relation to their health, for they
can keep their weight and don't thend to grow
fat.
Second of all, they have many opportunities
to make friends. When they play sports at
outside, someone who want to make friends
trend to chat.
For these leasons that I mentioned above,
I think that to play sports helps children
become better persons.
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