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Q
Date
Do you think it is a good idea for people to learn how
to
cook by using
the
Internet?
意見と理由2つ
learn how to
I think it is a good idea for people to
cook by using the Internet. I have two reasons for!
this. First, Internet has a lot of information about
cooking, Secound; they can learn to cook for free.

Answer 1

Acactmen

3行目　Internet→the Internet
4行目　to cook→how to cook

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