Question

いちご

至急です😭😭😭英作文訂正お願いします！😢

2. Many schools require students to wear schools uniforms. Do you think this is a
good idea
good
I do not think it is good idea that schools require students
I have two reasons why I think so. 24
First school uniforms are so expensive for them.
Some people must think it is difficult to buy schools uniforms.
Second, schools uniform take away the freedom to wear plain clothes.
If we wear schods uniform every day, we can not
my
wear
For the two / reasons mentioned above. I believe wearing schools uniform
is not good idea
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to wear schools uniforms.
favorite clothes. 67
CORT
Convenien
"Individu

Answer 1

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きのこ

いいと思います。
強いて言うなら、左上の箇条書きのところに、individualityと書いてあるように見えるのですが、折角ならそれも内容に含めた方がいいのではないかと思いました。

例えば、 if we wear schools uniform everyday,we can not wear our favorite cloths.

の後に、putting on not school uniform,but on what we like to school is good way not only to show our individuality,but also to deal with genderless issues.

とか入れるといいかなーとか思いました。
でも、すごくいい英作文だと思うので、このままでいいとも思います！

Answer 2

明日はきっと頑張る

we cannot wear our favourite clothes
is not a good idea

だと思います