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１つ目のEメール
Hi!
I recently made 【a new friend】. He is the same age as me and lives in France. We met on the Internet. We both like video games, so we usually talk about our favorite games. He is very funny, and I enjoy talking to him a lot. However, my parents told me that I shouldn't make friends online. Do you think making friends in such a way
is a good idea?
Your friend,
Alex

２つ目のEメール
Hi!
Guess what! My father bought me 【a robot pet】 last week online. I wanted to get a real dog, but my parents told me it's too difficult to take care of dogs. They suggested that we get a robot dog instead. I'm sending a picture of my robot with this e-mail. My robot is cute, but there's a problem. The battery doesn't last long. Do you think that robot pets will improve in the future?
Your friend,
Alex

私の回答は写真です！！

I would you like to ask you two questions.
First, What video game does he like?
Second, What langage does he speak?
About your question, I think making friends in
Such a way is
a good idea because If we use
internet, we can meet many peoples.
I would
You
like
to ask you
two
questions.
First, How much is it?
Second, what is cute point of it?
About your question, I do not think that robot pets will
improve in the future because real dog is cuter than
robot pets.

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