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changed to (all-online, *remote learning, But some_people think traditional, face-to-face, in-class 4次の英文を読んで、 あなたの考えを, [条件]と [記入上の注意〕に従って 40語以上 50話程度の英語 learning is much better. What do_you think? Which way is better for you? *new coronavirus. many schools around the world have This year, because of the えんかく (注) remote……遠隔の new coronavirus 新型コロナウイルス 「木井」下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを、その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 (記入上の注意) らん 0【記入例】にならって, 解答欄の下線」 の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 *符号(..?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄の破線 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。 2 英文の数は問いません。 ③ 【下書き欄】 は, 必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 【記入例) Hello. everyone! I'm Tiffany from Canada. I'm twenty-one years old. August 12, 2020. That will be a lot of fun. 50語 (以上で問題は終わりです。)

一応解いたのですが、合っているか分からないので教えてください！

|5 次の英文を読んで, 1, 2, 3, 4の問いに答えなさい。 r Do you like dogs? Today, a lot of people have dogs. In Japan, in 2020, about 8,500,000 dogs lived with people. Dogs are the first animal people *kept, Then, when did people start to live with dogs? Some people think *humans started to do it about 15,000 years ago. *In those days, dogs were useful when people wanted to *hunt animals because dogs could the *smell of animals. When A dogs helped people, they gave them some *bones or *meat after *killing an animal. In this way, people had a good *relationship with dogs. Today, there are not so many people who hunt animals with dogs *as before. But dogs stil help people in other ways. For example, they help us as guide dogs or as hearing dogs. Guide dogs can help people who can't see things wel1. Hearing dogs help people who can't hear *sounds and voices well. If you go to *farms in Australia, you'll see dogs working with *shepherds to *control the *sheep. These dogs are people's good *partners. In *modern cities, T but some people still keep dogs. This is because dogs are not い B only useful animals but also our friends. [注) *human(s) =人間 *hunt =狩る *kept = keep(飼う)の過去形 *smell =におい *in those days =当時 *killing) =殺す *sound(s) =音 *bone(s) =骨 *meat =肉 *farm(s) =農場 *relationship =関係 *shepherd(s) =羊飼い *partner(s) =パートナー *as before =以前のように *control =管理する *sheep = sheep(ヒツジ)の複数形 rOne *modern =現代の rt 80 orl armond o 1 本文中の に入る語として,最も適切なものはどれか。 no02 amimom yal O A ア follow イ hit エ write bnn i ada noom sbear/T' mo omor Jog Bae ウ change he 2 下線部のイヌはどのようなことができるか。具体的に日本語で書きなさい。 3 本文中の B に入るものとして, 最も適切なものはどれか。 ア dogsare more useful than cats イ dogs are not difficult to keep ウ dogs are not as useful as before エ dogs are very popular 4 本文の内容と一致するものはどれか。 ア In Japan, in 2020, more than 9,000,000 dogs lived with people. イ Some people think humans started to live with dogs about 15,000 years ago. ウ There are many people who hunt animals with dogs now. エ People should keep dogs more because they help peoplealot.

英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♂️💦 ちなみに2020年の大阪府のB問題です。

大阪府B '20年 英語 5分 英語の授業で,先生があなたに次の質問をしました。 3 The Olympic Games and the Paralympic Games will be held in Japan this summer. Do you want to go to the competition venues to watch the games if it is possible? (注) the Olympic Games オリンピック競技大会 the Paralympic Games パラリンピック競技大会 competition venue 競技会場 この質問に対して,あなたはどのように答えますか。解答欄の[ I don't. のどちらかを○で囲み, そのあとに, その理由を30語程度の英語で書きなさい。解答の際には記 入例にならって書くこと。 ]内の,Yes, I do. または No, 記入例 When is birthday? your Well it's April 11

2.(2)の答えがis happy to meet new people なんですけど、、 自分はhappyをgladにしてしまいました。 happyとgladの違いを教えてください🙇‍♀️

からの留学生クリス(Chris)との対話の一部である。また, Hiroshi : Wow! That's great. (6)What volunteer work あとの図はそのとき二人が見ていたチラシ(leaflet) の一 部である。これらに関して,1から6までの問いに答えな さい。 (編集部注:実際の問題では, 図[チラシ]において,「ほじょ 犬とは?」の右に「介助犬の仕事の様子」の絵が,「ほじょ犬 ユーザーのコメント」の右に「『ほじょ犬マーク』ステッ カー」の絵がそれぞれ配置されていた。) Chris :Hello, Hiroshi. What are you looking at? Hiroshi : Hi, Chris. This is a leaflet about *assistance can we do as high school students? Ill think about it. (注)assistance dog 補助犬 (計28点) mobility service dog 介助犬 thanks to ~ ~のおかげで train 訓練する dog trainer 犬を訓練する人 training center 訓練センター safe 安全な sticker ステッカー society 社会 dogs. I'm learning about them for my homework. ほじょ犬について知っていますか? ほじょ犬とは? Chris :Oh, I see. They are the dogs for people who need) some help in their lives, right? I haven't seen them in Japan. | assistance dogs are there in Japan? Hiroshi : The leaflet says there are over 1,000 assistance dogs. There are three types of them. Look at the picture on the right. In this picture, a *mobility service dog is helping Dm 0 A 盲導犬 (909頭) 介助犬 (57頭) 聴導犬 (64頭) 2020年10月現在 -介助犬の仕事の様子 its user. This dog can the user. Chris for :They are very smart. Such dogs are necessary for the users' better lives. Hiroshi : You're right. The user in this leaflet says *thanks to his that he assistance dog. However, more than half of the users in Japan say that their dogs couldn't go into buildings like restaurants, c hospitals, and supermarkets. bfids ほじょ犬ユーザーのコメント ほじょ犬のおかげで、 新しい人々に出会えて うれしいです。 Chris :Really? In my country, assistance dogs can usually go into those buildings without any trouble. Hiroshi : There is (3)a difference betwee our countries. 「ほじょ犬マーク」ステッカー- :Why is it difficult for assistance dogs to go aban into those buildings in Japan? Chris Welcome! Hiroshi : Because many people in Japan don't know much about assistance dogs. Some people don't think they are clean and *safe. In fact, their users take care of them to keep them clean. They are also *trained well. :I understand some people do not like dogs, but I hope that more people will know assistance dogs are ほじょ犬 a bed Iarma d bobi t o 訓練センターではあなたの助けが必要です! Chris *自分が使わないものを送る(服やおもちゃなど) *訓練センターでボランティア活動をする (シャンプー,えさやりなど) :子犬の里親になる(子犬を家庭で1年程度飼育) B Hiroshi :Fhope so too. Now, I see many shops and restaurants with the *stickers to welcome 2oil gon :The situation is getting better, right? Hiroshi : Yes, but there is (4)another problem. We 5A don't have enough assistance dogs. It is this situation because it assistance dogs. 図(「厚生労働省」.「特定非営利活動法人日本補助犬情報セン ター」のウェブサイトにより作成) Chris onainos 1. 二人の対話が成り立つよう, A に入る適切な英語 2語を書きなさい。 e 2. 思考力>上のチラシを参考に、 二人の対話が成り立つ よう, 下線部(1), (2), (5)に適切な英語を書きなさい。 o ims no of 3. 下線部(3)の指す内容は何か。次の書き出しに続けて、 30字以内の日本語で書きなさい。 ただし, 句読点も字数 に加えるものとする。 カナダと比べて日本では、 4. 本文中の口B に入る語として, 最も適切なものはど hard to chang takes a lot of time to train them. Money Mhand *dog trainers are also needed. :That's true. (2点) u ola Hiroshi:Look at this leaflet again. The *training Chris (各3点) dal center for assistance dogs needs some help. For example, we can clothes and toys. I think there is something I can do. ea adala oord tud : You should try it. In Canada, high school students often do some volunteer work. Through this, we learn that we (5) like (3点) borse Chris れか。 (2点) ア. difficult イ. important エ. popular are ウ、 loud e members of our *society.

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2次の文章は,カナタに帰国したJudy が Maki に送ったEメールの内容である。 Dear Maki, Thank you for your help during my stay in Japan. Do you remember that you took me to the Dream Festival ? I enjoyed it very much. I enjoyed learning about Japanese culture at the festival. I played the shamisen for the first time at the event "Try new things!" The sound of the shamisen was very new to me. It was a wonderful experience. I learned that it is very important for me to try new things.The shamisen was one new thing. In Canada, I have started to practice the shamisen. Ipractice it every day. e piu The other day, I went to a concert withmy sister, Amy. It was exciting ! Japanese *musical instruments, such as the shakuhachi, shamisen, and wadaiko, were played together with western musical instruments, such as drums and guitars. I was very surprised. When they were played together, music became more beautiful and powerful ! At the end of the concert, I was very happy to have a chance to play the shamisen witha special band on the stage ! That was a lot of fun. I found a new thing I wanted to do. I'm very glad about that. Have you started doing any new things? Ifyou have, tell me about them. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Judy [注) musical instrument 楽器 western 西洋の powerful 力強い sheのふセでけどれか。

本文波線部分のthatの訳し方を教えてほしいです。

2 次の会話は, 日本の高校生の期太と沙希が, ニュージーランドの高校生のジェイミーとデビーと, テレビ 会議システムを使って衣類廃棄問題について話し合ったときのものです。また, グラフ 1.2は, そのとき 期太たちが用いた資料の一部です。 これらに関して, あとの1~5に答えなさい。 Shota :Now, shall we talk about the problem of ーグラフ1 dothing waste in New Zealand and Japan? Last week, I read a report about the problem 家庭から可燃ごみ·不燃ごみとして出される 衣類の総量とその処理方法(年間平均) 再資源化 約24,000 トン in Japan The Ministry of the Environment estimated that we threw away about 508 thousand tons of clothes from our home in 2020,/Please look at Graph 1/ This shows 焼却·埋め立て how we dispose ofthe clothes thrown away as 約 484,000 トン garbage, Saki :We recvcle onlv about 24.000 tons of clothes (環境省『Sustainable Fashion』による。)

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with “It is better for students to " 7 Answer the following question. [次の質問と指示を読んで,英語で答えなさい。] Tell us your opinion and give two reasons. Write about 70 words. Your answer should begin Which is better for students, to borrow books fromlibraries or to buy books at bookstores? 清教学園高 (2020年)-13 eo 10 ※解答する上での注意事項 -1つの下線につき1語を書いてください。 *途中で改行せずに, 最初から最後まで続けて書いてください。 * カンマ(,)やピリオド (.)は1語とは数えません。前の語に添えて書いてください。 【良い例) I like apples, but don't like od Tewe I oranges. I like pineapples, too. 【悪い例) do I like apples, but I don't like pine a pples ※1つの下線に2語を書いていたり, 1語を2つの下線にわたって書いていたりしているので ×。 apples, but don't like I like I oranges. 改行せずにここにも書く。 I like pineapples, too. ※途中で改行しているので ×。 I like ao apples but I don't like oranges ※カンマやピリオドで1つの下線を使っているので×。

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Kate: Yes, but if you can't eat all of it, it's going to become waste. So, I think you shouk Kate: Then, you can buy it *by weight. You can buy a little of it today, and if you like t not buy too much. In some countries, there is too much food waste, and it is a big 2 次の英文は,アメリカでホームステイをしている涼(Ryo)が,ホストマザーのケイト(Kaa 8-(2020年)京都府(前期選抜 共通学力検査) フ (graph)と表(table)を参考にして英文を読み, 以下の問い(1)~(4)に答えよ。 not I'l like it. Ryo : You mean that I can buy any *amount of fruit that I want here, right? Ryo : Right. In my town in Japan, we have the same problem. When I learned abot was surprised ② problem. know that people *throw away food which they can still eat Kate: Really? Please tell me more about it. Ryo : I found a graph on the website of my town. It shows some kinds of kitchen garbaca people throw away at home, and they are the things people didn't have to throw awar Look, we can see it on my phone here. Kate: I heard that people cut and throw away too manyparts of food when they cook. Ryo : Yes. About eighteen *percent of the kitchen garbage in the graph shows that. Kate: What does the biggest number mean? Ryo : It means that about thirty-six percent of the kitchen garbage is food which was not used. I see. Why does such a thing happen? Look at this table. I also found it on the same website. People in the town answer Kate: Ryo: the question about their reasons for food waste, and you can see some of them in the table. Kate: More than fifty percent of the people say the same reason for it, right? What is it? Ryo : They say that they throw away food when it has *gone bad. And I want you to look at this. Kate: Do you mean this, about seventeen percent? What is their reason? Ryo : They say that they buy too much food to eat. For example, if they buy too mich and can't use it all for cooking, it may go bad. Then, it will become waste. Kate: Now I'm sure that we should stop buying too much food. Buying by weight is a good way for that. We can buy only the amount of food that we need. Ryo: Iagree with you. But in Japan, we don't usually buy food in such a way. So. we ho to find another way. Do you have any ideas?

問2の問題で自分は、 It was painted mountains and the morning sun. と答えたのですが丸になりますか？

Urushi is used for small crafts, and also for buildings made of wOod. It was als 次は、高校1年生の Moe が漆(urushi)について書いた英文です。これを読んで、問1~ of them were painted with "urushi," Urushi is used in many traditional crafts in Japan. Ne Around the sixteenth century, many people from Europe came to Japan. These Europeans really liked crafts made with urushi, so they bought a lot of these crafts. In Europe, rich peopl= In fact, the number of Japanese workers who produce urushi is Many old buildings in World Heritage Sites in Nikko also need a lea 「sap of these trees is used as paim decay slowly. Urushi ha Why did she buy me those chopstics This winter, I went to Ishikawa Prefecture with my family and visited some museums there 「valuable crafts made with urushi. After we left he Urushi has been used for over eight thousand years in Japn 3 enjoyed looking at all the beautiful and mother smiled, and boughta set of *chopsticks for me. made with urushi ? After I came home, I began to use them. They were very beautiful easy to use. rash, but it's safe World. There are five kinds of urushi trees in Japan. The 'bonding agent. If you touch the sap of urushi, then you'll get a or as a sets. touch urushi after it "preserved because they Crafts made with urushi are well preserved very old crafts, so it has played a very important role in Japan. used to build Kinkakuji Temple in Kyoto. Of course, a lot of urushi is needed c. buildings. of urushi. の restormg traditional buildings like these only in Japan. Those crafts were called "japan" 。 'symbol of wealth. collected crafts made with urushi as a symbols of Japan. Of course, even today, urushi is famous as a symbol of Japanese traditional crafts TL the *Nagano Olympic Committee (NAOC) was planning the 1998 Nagano Olympic Winter Gam medals with urushi. NAOC thought that the medals sho it decided to make the winners' be made with original *materials and ^techniques. They also need to be beautiful and h- "permanent value. After thinking about all this, NAOC chose to make them with urushi painted mountains and the morning sun on them with urushi. Many foreign countries restore crafts made with urushi, too. Many of the crafts Europe from Japan now need to be restored. Urushi is especially *vulnerable to sunlig: crafts made with urushi are * damaged when they are in the sunlight. In Europe, some p. have tried to restore their Japanese crafts made with urushi with other materials and techn. because there are no urushi trees there. A But these materials and techniques didn't wor! with urushi. For example in Europe, some of the crafts have now turned brown. 10 Sue a group of Japanese “craftspeople recently visited Germany and restored some ot the ja 2020年·埼玉県(学校選択)(GA)

（）に入るのが何か教えてください！

(People in billions) てのもとになった資料です。レポート中の( )に入るのは何年でしょうか。 Do you know which country has the largest population in the world? Here is a graph that shows the population growth in India and Introduction Most Populous Countries 1.55 - 導入 資料の紹介 1.5 China. 1.45 According to the graph, the population of s 1.4 Body India will be larger than that of China from 1.35 説明 ). Then India will be the most populous country in the world. 1.3 2025 2020 (Year) 2030 I think that India will become more and 2015 Conclusion India China 感想や意見 more powerful in the world. 10 World Population Prospects (2017)