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I didn't know that there were so many senior citizens who were Mr. Lee: You are still young, so you have a lot of time to think about your future. Are there interesting activities in our city. I can't imagine what our lives will be like when wete Mr. Lee: That's great. People are living longer now, soI think it's important to keep happy | students at the community center in the city. She is very good at calligraphy. She is | I really respect my grandmother. She teaches calligraphy to elementary schoo) | 題あり,放送はすべペて英語で行われます。 放送される内容についての質問にそれぞれ答え」 なさい。No.1~No.5 及び No.7は, 質問に対する答えとして最も適切なものを、A~D |4(After class, Akina, Hayato and Mr. Lee are talking abOUl IM I'm surprised that so many senior citizens in Singapore are still working Akina: Hayato: Me, too. older. any senior citizens you respect, Akina? Akina: glad that she can teach many children. She loves her work very much. and healthy even when we're older. 問7 本文 4の会話の中で, Akina は, 自分の祖母がどのようなことに喜んでいると述べてい ますか。日本語で書きなさい。(4点) 問8 次は,後日の Akina と Mr. Lee の会話です。自然な会話になるように,( )に適切た。 語以上の英語を書きなさい。(4点) Mr. Lee, I went to the English language school Hayato talked about before. 1 learned a lot from the senior citizens working there. Akina: Mr. Lee: I'm sure they know a lot of interesting things we don't know. ( at the English language school ? There are five teachers. Akina: Mr. Lee: I see. When senior citizens are happy and healthy, we can be happy, too. We can learn a lot from senior citizens by talking with them. 5 次の(質問)に対して, [条件]に従い,まとまった内容の文章を5文以上の英文で書きなさ (10点) [質問) What is the best way to learn English for you? (条件) 0 1文目は【質問]に対する答えを,解答欄の①に書きなさい。 く放送を聞いて答える問題台本> ※「チャイム」 これから「放送を聞いて答える問題」を始めます。 なさい。放送中メモを取ってもかまいません。 各問題について革評け 放送されま -0F 2010年

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Activity 4 Make a * temporary bed with cardboard Activity 5 Learn useful Japanese words and how to Activity 2 Experience earthquakes in a special car call 110 or 119;only for foreign people Tikari : Hello. Ms. Bell. We are 12:00~ Lunch(Try emergency food) going to have evacuation drills next Sunday. What should we do Schedule Opening Ceremony eters aayl o Date and Time Sunday September 1st 9:30~15:30 O Evacuation Place Tsubame Elementary School 9:30 Ken 10:00~ Activities Ms. 1 13:00~ Activities A Closing Ceremony 15:00 s. Bell: Evacuation drills? No. 5 Can anyone go? You can choose one activity at each time, Hik Activities en : Of course. Here is the Activity 3 Practice how to use an AED 0 Time 10:00~11:00 Ms. olo poster about the drills. We are going together. 1:00~12:00 O 0 O 13:00~14:00 10 14:00~15:00 lo (注) Would you like to come 10 口(1) with us? yun : We're going to meet at Midori Park at nine. If you come by that time, we co. together. eari :What shall we do for lunch? 15 :Well, Ill get some sandwiches at the convenience store on the way. 口に Bell: B Look at this. Let's try some emergency food. ari : Why not? Do you know what kind of food we can try, Ken? : No. Umm Cup Ramen? ri : No, I don't think so because 20 『n: Yes, it may be difficult after big natural disasters. Anyway, we will know on the do. :Ms. Bell, do you often have natural disasters in your country? Are they different+2 Bell: Yes, we do. I can only talk about my hometown, but from my experience CHID earthquakes are bigger here, I think. After I came to Japan, there was a bia earthquake. I was very surprised, and didn't know what to do. i: Then, why don't you do Activity 25 あ You have already experienced a at at TOTAL natural disaster, but you can learn how to protect yourself. 2ll: C I will do that. So, in the event, we can experience four kinds of activities. What are you going to choose? : Umm. Let's see. I'm interested in AEDS. I want to know what they are like. 30 : Oh, you don't know abóut them! They are used to save people's lives. : Of course I know, but I just wtant to try them because I've never touched them. :I took the course last year, but I'll try it again. II when we are in an emergency. 7:Iagree. Can all of us take part in the same activity together? 35 :I join the same activity with my family every year. This year we are going to learn how to make beds we can use in evacuation places in the morning. After that, I will be free. ;Tam going to help with the fire drills as a volunteer.

(1)はfor junior high school studentsを入れてはダメですか？

〈鹿児島県) 2 中学生のAkiraが書いた次の英文を読んで, あとの問いに答えなさい。 This summer my friends and I went to a three-day event in my small town. I was *planned by university students for junior high school students. Many junior high school students from other towns joined, too. The university students helped us with our studies. We also played soccer and baseball with them. Through these *activities, we made a lot of new friends. People in my town helped with the event. They *offered places for the activities. They also cooked meals for us and the university students. Some *elderly people told us about the town's history. It was very interesting. During those three days, people in my town looked very happy. This event was a good *chance for us to make new friends and learn a lot from elderly people. I hope this event will *be held again next year. *Thanks to the university students, I had a good time this summer. I want to plan events for my town in the future. That's my dream. * plan ~(~を計画する) activities (活動(activityの複数形)) offered ~ (~を提供した) elderly (年配の) chance (機会) be held (行われる) Thanks to ~(~のおかげで) 次の(1), (2)の質問に対する答えを英文で書きなさい。 (41%)(1) Who planned this event? (35%)(2) What is Akira's dream?

こちらの問題なのですが、 本文にあったものをひとつ選ぶ問題で、答えがウになるのですがなぜそうなるのか教えて頂きたいです。

(3) 考力> ティアのお知らせです。 (各3点) for a Day Bea Volunteer to Pick Grapes の Who can be a volunteer? We are looking for grape lovers between 14 and old. upindost You can: Bring your own hat and gloves, or borrow ours. ◆ Only use our scissors. Please do not bring your 答えなさ (計10点) ur right to hold Most S right- handed people archers p have e left- anded. hand? f you hen it Own. Buy more grapes. ◆ Use our delivery service. 65 years ② What can you take home? To say thank you for volunteering, we will give you free grapes (2 kg) to take home. vine yuBm 9 bhow o do? GUAN ③ What should · Grape picking starts at 8 a.m. 916 and finishes at 3 p.m. The grapes will be delicious when the branch is brown, not green. sirogatt * You should pick dark purple grapes. It 1s too early to picklight purple grapes.arno19 you m ar branch- T 89 利きの それ 号を書 各3点) Join by calling or visiting our website! 8:555-987654 日: www.grapelovers.inc EHOR (注) grape lover ぶどう好きな人 volunteering ボランニ ue (s

私の書いた英文を添削していただきたいです🙇🏻 都立入試に向けての問題です。 (クオリティがとても低いですが…)

次の文章は,英語の授業で Maiが行ったスピーチの内容である。この文章を読んで, あとの各問に答えよ。 She came to Japan with her family from China last year. Her father is Chinese and her mother Last month, she began to work as a volunteer in Japan. She does volunteer work at the hospital Today I'm going to talk about my friend, Lin. is Japanese, so she speaks both Chinese and Japanese. pear here every Saturday. Iasked her, “Whydo vou work as a volunteer at the hospital? She ons 9mon answered, "When Iwas sick in the hospital in China. Italked with someone and I felt happy. She thinks talking can make sick people better sometimes. Last Saturday, I went to the hospital with her and talked with a girl in the hospital, She said to Lin, “Thank you, Lin. Iwant to talk with you again,” Lin looked happy then. Iwas very happy, too. Ofcourse, Lin will go there to see her again. NowI think I should start something, too. I'd liketo do something for other people. How about you? Thank you for listening.

なるべく早くお願いします！ ③ 問1のい　　問6 ④ 問4のイ　　問6 を採点していただきたいです！ 2ページ目は模範回答です。

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この問題の（a）と（C）の解説をどなたお願いします。 ちなみに答えは（a）はfriends,（C）はtired になります。 問題が長くて申し訳ありません。本当によろしくお願いします！！

次の英文は、留学生のナンシー (Nancy) が、友人と参加したボランティア活動について書いたスピーチ の原稿です。これを読んであとの問いに答えなさい。 Today, I am going to talk about my * experiences in doing volunteer work. I did ア two volunteer Jobs with my friends during the summer vacation. The first one was to read books to children at the ibrary. I can'tread Japanese well, so I practiced hard every day before the job.I * made some mistakes on that day, but I tried hard. The children enjoyed the books and had big smiles. I was very happy to see their smiles. The second .job was to sing songs for sick people in a hospital. In a big room in the hospital, we began to sing. Our chorus was not so beautiful. However, people listened to our songs *happily and :ome of them were crying. An old woman said, "I cried * with happiness. You tried hard to sing for us. Her words really * moved me. From these experiences, I learned a very important thing. When you want to do something for other people, you don't have to be* perfect. Just try very hard. They will see your* passion and they will feel happy. I will never forget these experiences. *experience in~ing: ~した経験 *make a mistake : 間違える *happily : うれしそうに *with happiness : うれしくて *move : 感動させる *perfect : 完べきな *passion : 情熱

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come here. Why don't you talk together?” I felt a little nervous. But I went to the table and residents were sitting around a big table in the *dining room. A *care worker said to me, “Ken, 6 次の英文は中学生の健(Ken)が, ボランティア活動(a volunteer activity)をしたときのことについて書 In the afternoon of the first day, many *residents were ①(enjoy) their *teatime. Eight During the summer vacation, I visited a *nursing home for four days to work as a volunteer. (静岡改) .a to the eight residents, "Good afternoon, I'm Ken. Nice to meet you." Then, I sat next to an J woman called Reiko-san. She smiled and said to me, “Hello. How old are you? Where do , live2" I answered, “Well, I'm fourteen. I live near this nursing home.” I was hanny when Reiko-san talked to me. Then, I wanted to ask some questions about her. but. I what to ask. So, I 3 and we kept quiet. I felt sorry for her. nursing home 老人ホーム care worker 介護福祉士 resident 入居者 teatime お茶の時間 dining room 食堂 (1) のの( )内の語を適する形にかえて書きなさい。 (3点) (2) 2, 3の に適する語(句)の組み合わせを,ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 (5点) ア 2 knew asked many questions イ knew didn't ask anything asked many questions 2 didn't know (3 didn't ask anything ウ 2 didn't know 3 エ (5点×2) (3) 本文の内容にあうように,次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 (a) How long did Ken work at the nursing home as a volunteer? (b) How did Ken feel before talking to the eight residents on the first day? 39

問2の問題の答え方で First, you go straight the street, next you right third corner. 自分は上のように答えたのですがおかしい箇所があったら教えて頂きたいです🙇🏻‍♀️

children. You don't need to use any money there, so you should leave money you don't need at 次は,本文 2の station や Child Care Support Center などが示された地図です。 station application form and send i So, I'm sure you won't miss it. On your first day of volunteer work, you donit ドworkshop there before you start. The center isn't too far from the station 2 (That night, Miku sends an e-mnail to Joseph.) you want to be a volunteer. To start, you have to "complete an to take a B home. Good luck! …~に記入する application form· 申込用紙 od [注) complete workshop …研修会 O 問2 空欄 Bに適切な2文以上の英語を書きなさい。(4点) Child Care Support Center park post 9190 office bank station SW b Tsukushi ho River 1910l Hov a 000 問3 本文 2の内容に関する次の質問に 華語で省立tY

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81 次は、日本の中学生の美歩 (Miho) と、 ハワイ在住のキャシースミス (Cathy Smith) さんとのメールのやりとりで ある。 読んであとの問いに答えなさい。 なお、 あとの注を参考にしなさい。 (長崎) [メール1] スミスさんから美歩へのメール July 8th, 2020 Hello, Miho, This is Cathy Smith. I will be your host mother. Our family is very happy to welcome you to 0ur house. We have a daughter. She is as old as you. To make your stay wonderful, I would like to know a feww things about you before you come. Please answer the questions in your e-mail. Qustions: 1) How do you usually spend your free time? 2) (do/food /like/what/you)? 3) What do you want to do in Hawaii? I will send youa picture of my family, We hope that you will enjoy your stay here next month. Yours, Cathy 44