日本のスポーツ「羽子板」についてのプレゼン原稿を書いたのですが、文法や単語など、合っているかを確認していただきたいです…！ また、こうしたらより良くなるよってところがあれば是非教えていただきたいです！

D。 you know the Hanetsuki "? --Ihis..13..A.tkadi.tional.spor.t3 In..pan.en.New Yeat.s. Day …. !will talk about two points of Hanetsuki. -r2tly..1..w.lL.Intreduce..ebeut the..hiz.tory--2f It. There was "Grttyo" in Heran period. --I.9 Dne..of eld..spe.rts.. Gittyo wsed 'sticks" and. "Mari". Andr.In.the.Maramachi. peria.d.a.the..sticks.cha.nged..to.. Hagot ta'and Marī changed to "Hane ". The se..are..the..his.tory of. Hlane tuki.. However, 1 don'+ often'see playing with Hanetuki on New Years Day. -2.L.think..oany.people.dou'.tkntw.the.hule..of it. Then, Secondly,I will intro duce about the rule of it. - Peeple..continue the..kally.- when Hane toncheg thé ground, the rally cnds. --Thie.mle And._badminten's..kule..are inilar. But Hanetuki has unique rule. Winner.-give..ese..penalt of.-pa.inting..on.lu2e.r face wてth ink. エt TS. intvesting. These are two_ points of Hane tuki. --The ke..are..Various.fun.een.ts..T..Japan _now . For example, Halloween, Christmas, Valentine's Day.. Hananaty.k-_and..8o.0n.. So1 feel mahy people farost S01-Ihank.1tisImpsr.ta丘. be interested.in.old clture of Japan- the old culture of Jopon. -why.. don't. Jau.tky.lay.ikg. thaditianal.spkt.thi. New Year's Day.

下線部1の()の中が、「彼らのおかげで」(thanks) (to) になるんですけど、なぜthanksにsがつくのでしょうか？themは三人称複数でsはつかないんじゃないんですか、？！教えてください

4 次の文は、ホームステイを経験した3人がホームステイの感想を書いています。 これを読ん で、後の問いに答えなさい。 Shin's case My host family was an elderly couple, Mr. and Mrs. Brown. My homestay was a great ) them. However, I only had one problem. experience for me, ① ( When I finished (②use the bathroom, my host mother said, “Your shower was too long. You should finish it in ten minutes." [ ア ]l said to her, “Why do I have to do it so quickly? 3I can't ( finish / a/ washing / such / in) short time." She said, "Because we Ohave to save water. We need to take our showers quickly." What shouldI do? Nami's case My host family was a young couple, Mr. and Mrs. Mace. (⑤私のホストファザーは料理 his dinners, but there was one problem. He put

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4 次の英文を読んで, あなたの考えを, [条件]と[記入上の注意]に従って 40語以上50語程度の英語 で書きなさい。*印のついている語句には, 本文のあとに[注〕があります。 (10点) In Japan, the number of farmers is *decreasing, and the farmers are getting older. More and more farms are not in use. Farming in Japan is getting difficult. The *food self-sufficiency rate in Japan is about 40% now. We import a lot of food from other countries. Some people say we can always buy more food from them. However, others say we should *produce more food in Japan. Which idea do you agree with? [注) decrease 減る, 少なくなる food self-sufficiency rate …食料自給率 produce ~を生産する 【条件) 下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを, その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 (記入上の注意) らん 0【記入例】にならって, 解答欄の下線」 の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄の破線 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。 苗立の は旧

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It is I of a You I am a , but new create for the . s6uIM Y全首 Leonardo da Vinci If I had レオナルドダヴィンチ uhua ep nopw:pue:m the across ages. They led to the ir My dream is to invent a time machine. long time, ways. one, I would visit areat inventors things stary This is the first t" 04 I have learned from past dreamers ho new. The Wright Br as dreams. flight in 1903. Bef experinents. They 01 again. Sometimes, times, the brothers Leonardo da Vinci. He thought, “I wish I couid flv liu. However, they ne- a bird." He and others studied birds. They watched problem, they lo feathers in the wind. Gradually they learned some of the that they had t S1 secrets of flight. afraid of it. Th

英語の授業の発表の台本です。 この文章をなるべく短く簡単にわかりやすく英文を直して欲しいです。 日本語の文章、文の構成は変えてもらって大丈夫です。 なるべく早くにお願いしたいです。 お願いします。

一つ目は、だれと過 ごすかです。 アメリカやヨーロッ パではクリスマスは 家族や親せき·友人 と自宅でパーティー をしながら過ごす が、日本は恋人とデ ートをして過ごすこ とが多いです。 二つ目は、海外では クリスマス前後はほ とんどの人がお店を 閉店し、町全体が静 The first is who to spend time with. In the United States and Europe, Christmas is spent at home with family, relatives and friends, but in Japan, it is often spent on a date with a lover. Second, most people Overseas close their shops around Christmas, and the whole town is quiet. On the other hand, in Japan, stores are か。 一方日本では、お店 は開店しています。 三つ目は、食べ物の 違いです。 アフー C

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が、「世界のさまざまな場所から集められる情報をつなぎ合わせることに (6) 本文中の よって、研究者たちはシギ·チドリ類について多くのことがわかるのです。」という内容になるように、 次の( 5 ]内の語を並べかえて解答欄の に英語を書き入れ,英文を完成させなさい。 By connecting the information (various which collected from is ] places in the world, researchers find many things about shorebirds. (7) 本文中の べかえ,前後と意味がっながる内容となるようにして入れたい。あとのア~エのうち,英文の順序とし て最も適しているものはどれですか。一つ選び、記号を○で囲みなさい。 に、次の(i)~()の英文を適切な順序に並 (i) This change in the environment caused a very difficult situation for shorebirds. (ii) They need to rest and eat food there during their long travel to migrate. (i)However, more than 60% of wetlands in the world including Asia have disappeared since 1900. ア(i)→(i) →(i) ウ(ii) イ(i)→(m)-→(ii) ェ(ii)→(m) →(i) ート (8) 本文中の'I have learned that knowing how shorebirds live is the them.' が,「私は,シギ。チドリ類頼がどのように生きているのかを知ることが,彼らを保護するため にまず第一に私たちがすべきことであるということを学びました。」という内容になるように、解答欄 の to protect の に英語5語を書き入れ,英文を完成させなさい。

could do itと、過去形になっているのは、これより前の文が過去の話であるからですか？

They moved and talked in the movies. All of them were cute and became popular. The animations were popular, but his company had some problems. He had to close his In 1923, Walt started another studio with his brother. Walt *created a popular *character. Walt was a high school student, he made *cartoons for the school newspaper. He also *took elasses at an a He wanted to make his own animations, so he started his first *company and made short movies there. 背ay from him. But Walt never *gave up., He created a new character again. He created an anmaton Ater that Walt decided to make a long animation movie, Some people around him said it was difficnk. Walt also had the idea to create a large park because he wanted to make many people happy. In 1955, chool at night. In 1919, Walt found a job at an art *studio. During this time, he learned about * anmaion. However, there was a big problem. Another company took his character and his *co-Workers He liked drawing and art. He started drawing when he was little. When This is one of my favurde 英-20-4-美城-問05 時びnts by *Walt Disney, alt was born in 90) Company. 2 Then Walt created many new charactar e bolieved that he and his co-workers oulldoit of 3 They finally finished making the moyie in money. He used the money to build anotham 1937. The movie became very popular. Walt gof a movie studio and to make more animation movies The park became famous and popular, and it is still one of he opened his first park in America. the world's most popular places to visit on vacation. edican city. He worked on the plans but died before the park opened in 1971. 4 Later, Walt had the idea to build a larger park in Walt Disney died on December 15, 1966, but his dreams still *livo'on His movies and parks are loved hw many people around the world. His company "has been creating wonderful movies pursue ~ ~を追い求める Walt Disney ウォルト·ディズニー COurage 勇気 cartoon (s) 漫画 took classes 授業を受けた studio スタジオ animation アニメーション company 会社 created ~ ~を作った character キャラクター cO*Worker (s) 仕事仲間 gave up あきらめた live on 続いている has been creating ~ ~を作り続けている

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ce:I read a book. It says that they needed it because they wanted to travel longer in a shorter time. Some p could travel 12 kilometers in one hour on this bicycle. :That's surprising. :However, the "Draisine" had a problem. 2 People(ア to イ feet ヴ to I had オ their own 1文本お文英谷の水 e カ push it キ use ) on the stone roads. So their shoes were *worn easily. People didn't like that and something was *added to the bicycle. It is very important for today's bicycles, too. Can you guess, Mr.

星つけた文ですが、冷蔵庫に保存された食べ残しの23%は廃棄された というのは、冷蔵庫に保存された食べ残しを100%とした時に、そのうちの23%が捨てられたということになりますよね。 グラフは食品ロスの原因の割合を示しているので、間違っていませんか？

トピック 食品ロス 場面 同校生の蓮(Ren)が食品ロス(food loss)について調べたことを発表しています。 食品ロスはさまざまな形で発生しますが, 下のグラブは 0 ) cause of food loSs. た場合,それは食品ロスと呼ばれます。 but the graph below shows that the leftover food is the 食品の食べ残しが食品ロスの最大の原因であることを示しています。 For example, if you have eaten only two of the three sandwiches you bougnし aい a は.コンピニで買ったサンドイッチ3個のらち2個だけを食べて、 残りを捨てた場合、 食品ロスを生み出 5 convenience store, and have thrown away したことになります。 2the rest, you have just produced food loss. 食事を全部食べきれずに 食べ残してしまった。 2% 4% 3% Or, 食べきれなかった料理を 保管しておいたら、 傷ん でしまった。 (3if you have not finished all the food また、夕食で出された料理の全部を食べきれず、 その食 served at dinner, and you throw away the べ残しを捨てた場合も、 食品口スとみなされます。 leftover food, it is considered food loss too. 11% 消費期限または賞味期限 を過ぎてしまった。 57% 23% おいしくなかった その他 Of course, if you keep the leftover food in もちろん食べ残しを冷蔵庫に保存すれば、 翌日にそ the fridge, you can eat it the next day According to the graph, however, ( ① )% of れを食べることができます。 the leftover food kept in the fridge is thrown away after all because it has gone bad. 23パーセントは, 傷んでしまったという理由で、 結局廃棄されています。 10 無回答 しかし、グラフによれば, 冷蔵庫に保存された食べ残しの