作文の添削をお願いいたします🙇🙏🙌

指示に従って, ワークシートを完成させなさい。 ('17年 富山県) ALT のブラウン(Brown) 先生がテーマを発表します。 We have a three-month summer vacation in America. So today's *theme is “A three-month summer vacation is good for junior hign school students in Japan." *theme テーマ テーマに対して太郎 (Taro) さんと花子(Hanako)さんが音見を述べます。 太郎さんと化す さんになったっもりで、 書き出しの英語に続けて( のと2の英文を完成させなさい。 )内に3語以上の英語を書き、 they want to rest のI think it is good, because ( 太郎さん 2I don't think it is good, because ( Tthink they like fo o 5chool. 花子さん あなたの立場を決め, 太郎さんと花子さんのどちらに賛成するか〇で囲みなさい。 ③ (太郎さん.花子さん ) ←どちらかを○で囲む。 次の指示に従って, あなたの意見を書きなさい。 *書き出しの英語に続けて, 相手に対する反論から書き始めること。 ただし( には3語以上の英語を書く。 *書き出しの文を含めて4文以上の英語で書く。 ⑤は4文に含めない。 *1文は3語以上とし, 前後つながりのある内容の文章にする。 )内 「どちらか(3とは逆の人物) を○で囲む。 . Hanako's ) idea, because (they on't ④ I don't "agree with ( Targs atudy if they hNea thee-menth suyhhet. VACation ). in suimmer ユカnk many perple will ae omt r vALatran Br dhane s0」 they went. hne tine to stalen Albe, I hink they wents o meet thelr Teacher sadtknds, ⑤ Sol ( think · dof't thidk ) a three-month summer vacation is good for us. Lどちらかを○で囲む。 *agree with~ ~に賛成する ロ

英語の作文で、 簡単で、かつ１５字程度の文にするにはどうつくったらよいでしょうか‥、 日本語でまず伝えたいこと考えても、難しくなってしまいます💦 解答欄もとてもむずく書いていたので、アドバイス、そしてあなたならどう作文で答えるか教えて下さい💦

) あなたが外国語でコミュニケーションをする際に, 大切にしたいことは何か。 あなたの考えを 15語程度の英勝で書け。 ただし, 1文または2文で書き, コシマやビリオドは語数に含めない こと。

私の書いた英文を添削していただきたいです🙇🏻 都立入試に向けての問題です。 (クオリティがとても低いですが…)

次の文章は,英語の授業で Maiが行ったスピーチの内容である。この文章を読んで, あとの各問に答えよ。 She came to Japan with her family from China last year. Her father is Chinese and her mother Last month, she began to work as a volunteer in Japan. She does volunteer work at the hospital Today I'm going to talk about my friend, Lin. is Japanese, so she speaks both Chinese and Japanese. pear here every Saturday. Iasked her, “Whydo vou work as a volunteer at the hospital? She ons 9mon answered, "When Iwas sick in the hospital in China. Italked with someone and I felt happy. She thinks talking can make sick people better sometimes. Last Saturday, I went to the hospital with her and talked with a girl in the hospital, She said to Lin, “Thank you, Lin. Iwant to talk with you again,” Lin looked happy then. Iwas very happy, too. Ofcourse, Lin will go there to see her again. NowI think I should start something, too. I'd liketo do something for other people. How about you? Thank you for listening.

問3、問4を教えてください！

問2 く問3.問4 4点× 4, その他 3点×4〉 [対話文読解] 7 ア 作織は, 借りていた CDを返しにピリーの家を訪れています。 これを読んで, 後の各 間に答えなさい。 次は、高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出身のビリー ( Billy) との対話です。 ウ オ Aa0rn : Thank you, Billv. This CD is wonderful. Ilike all the songs on it. Billy : Good! I'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. 問 Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori:[ A Billy:I have about fifty. Kaori : Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But Ill be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy :Sure! [ B Kaori: At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we meet? Kaori : There is a hamburger shop nearthe stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy :OK! [ C ] Kaori : By bus or by subway. Billy:I think going by bus is better. Kaori:OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy:No, I'll go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori : See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket· チケット hamburger… ハンバーガー subway… 地下鉄 問1 部 that が指している内容を,日本語で答えなさい。

分からないので教えてください！

問2 [ く問3·問4 4点×4, その他 3点×4> ア [対話文読解] 7 作械は,借りていた CD を返しにビリーの家を訪れています。これを読んで, 後の各 問に答えなさい。 伏は、高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出出身のビリー(Billy)との対話です。 ウ オ Billy : Good! T'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. Kaori : Thank you, Billy. This CD is wonderful. I like all the songs on it. 問 Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori:[ A Billy:I have about fifty. Kaori:Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But Ill be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy:Sure! [ B Kaori : At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we mee Kaori: There is a hamburger shop near the stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy :OK! [ C ] Kaori :By bus or by subway. Billy:I think going by bus is better. Kaori:OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy : No, I'll go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori:See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket…チケット hamburger…ハンバーガー subway … 地下鉄 問1 部 that が指している内容を, 日本語で答えなさい。

分からないので教えてください！

「岡2 伏は、 高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出身のビリー(Billy) との対話です。 作服は, 借りていた CDを返しにビリーの家を訪れています。 これを読んで, 後の各 問に答えなさい。 く問3·問44点×4, その他 ア [対話文読解) 7 Aaorn : Thank you, Billy, This CD is wonderful. I like all the songsS on it. Billy : Good! I'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori :[ A Billy :I have about fifty. Kaori: Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But I'll be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy:Sure! [ B ] Kaori: At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we meet? Kaori :There is a hamburger shop near the stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy:OK! [ C] Kaori:By bus or by subway. Billy :I think going by bus is better. Kaori: OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy : No, Ill go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori:See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket チケット hamburger ハンバーガー subway … 地下鉄

英作書いたので、採点と解説して欲しいです🙇‍♀️ お願いします🙇‍♀️🙏

あとの各問いに答えなさい。(12点)sM O学中販 お の(S) (1) 次のような状況において,あとの①~③のとき,あなたならどのように英語で表し ますか。それぞれ5語以上の英文を書きなさい。 ただし、I'm などの短縮形は1語として数え,コンマ(),ピリオド(.) などは語数 に入れません。 3 C 0公 (つunim) 00 【状況) あなたは、カナダから来た外国語指導助手(ALT)の David 先生と, 廊下で話を しているところです。 OS の 放課後に時間があるか尋ねるとき。 0 ah。 2 昨夜書いたレポートを読んでほしいと伝えるとき。 YabnoM 3 日本の伝統文化についてのレポートだと伝えるとき。 129gnol srit onsiq odt (2) Reina は,留学先のロンドンでホストファミリーが開いてくれる歓迎パーティーに 出席することになりました。そこで挨拶することになり,下の原稿を準備しました。 あなたが Reina なら,①~③の内容をどのように英語で表しますか。 それぞれ4 語以上の英文を書き,下の原稿を完成させなさい。 ただし,I'm などの短縮形は1語として数え, コンマ(,), ピリオド(.)などは語数 に入れません。 SIVBD 「9 200g9 uo buscgecq bjs2n iPS 、 Su.0U。 S T6TV 【原稿) Hello, everyone. My name is Reina. Nice to meet you. 05人家族だということ。 2_テニスが得意だということ。 3_英語を勉強するためにロンドンに来たということ。 Thank you.

1文の英作文です。 They should study hard, especially math. (特に数学を熱心に勉強すべきです) 間違っているところはありますか？

(2) 次の英文を読んで, スミス先生 (Mr. Smith) の問いかけに対する答えとしてふさ わしい内容を考え,英語で書きなさい。ただし, あとのく条件>にしたがうこと。 Mr. Smith is an English teacher at Kamome Junior High School. *One day, he said to the students in his class, “This school will have new *first-year students in April. Please tell them what to do to have a good school life in junior high school.” *One day :ある日 first-year: 1年の く条件> の ① They shouldで書き始め,これらを含んで全体を6語以上の1文で書くこと。 ② 文末は 「.」 「!」 のいずれかの符号で終わること。 ※ 短縮形 (I'mやdon'tなど) は1語と数え, 符号(,や.など) は語数に含めません。

英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ ①You should visit in summer.②The summer festival is held. You can play games and eat delicious foods.

about Easter ? Easter is an important holiday in the U.S., and its date changes every year. Iil 次は、アメリカ (the U.S.)に住む,あなたの友人である Peter から届いたメールです。こ 以上の英語を書きなさい。 (4点) ) to the center again? MD FUX picture book for them. Miku: That sounds interesting! ( Miku: Oh, I see. Can I see it when you finish ? Joseph: Of course! o 5 を読んで,間1~間3に答えなさい。 *印のついている語には, 本文のあとに[注)があい (12点) Thank you for your e-mail last week. How are you ? Easter. Do you knon Last Saturday, I went out with my family to buy new clothes for 2019, it was on the third Sunday of April. Easter eggs are al On Easter, many families wear new clothes and buy "Easter eggs. symbol of Easter. Many families in the U.S. *prepare Easter eggs, and a lot of children Inm looking for Easter eggs that their families *hide for them. I have a little sister, so this week Im going to prepare some Easter eggs for her. Last year, I put Easter eggs in the garden, bu. this year, I'm going to hide Easter eggs in the house. There are a lot of good places to hide l them. For example, I can hide them under tables, on chairs, or behind doors. My little sister loves looking for Easter eggs. I like spring the best because of Easter. I think spring is a good season to visit the U.S. How about Japan ? If I visit Japan, which. season should I visit in ? hope I can see you soon. 【注) Caster… …イースター(復活祭) Easter egg……イースターエッグ (イースターに贈り物とする彩色した卵, チョコレートで作った卵) 19r symbol…象徴 prepare ~ ~ を準備する hide 開1 Potor t …………….を歴 十 n010 の

21から26お願いしますm(_ _)m 5時までにお願いしますm(_ _)m

(18) Caroline doesn't have as ( ) CDs as her brother does, so (23) A: Hey, Rob. Can you and Yuki come for dinner tomorrow? I'm she often borrows his. 1 soon making curry. B: That sounds good. ( 23 ) A: Oh, I didn't know. I can make a mild one especially for her. B: That's very kind of you. I'll ask if she's free tomorrow evening. 2 much 3 long 4 many (19) A: When I asked Patrick to go to a movie with us tonight, he said no. But he didn't say ( B: Maybe he's not feeling well, or maybe he just has other plans. 1 which ) he doesn't want to come. 1 But I don't like making Indian food. 2 But I ate curry at a restaurant yesterday. 3 But Yuki doesn't really like spicy food. 4 But Yuki thinks curry is hard to make. 2 what 3 why 4 who (20) Randy just got a puppy for his birthday. He really likes it and (24) A: Hello, sir. Welcome to Ron's Pet Store. Can I help you with can't stop ( 1 to follow 3 to be followed )it around the house. something? B: Yes.( 24 ) I think his old one is too small. A: I see. How about this one? It's the largest we have in the store. B: That's perfect. He'll have plenty of space to swim around. 2 following 4 followed 次の六つの会話文を完成させるために, (21)から (28) に入るものとして最も適切 なものを1, 2, 3, 4の中から一つ選び, その番号を解答用紙の所定欄にマーク しなさい。 2 I bought a baby turtle recently. 1 I want to get a bigger turtle. 3 Iwas just looking at that turtle. 4 I needa tank for my turtle. A: Hi, Kaori. I haven't seen you in the office for a while. Have you been on vacation? B: Yes. I went to Rome with my husband for a week. It was fantastic. A: Did you take any pictures? I'd love to see them. B: Well, I did, ( 25 ) A: Oh, that's too bad. You must have been really upset. B: I was, but luckily my husband also took some. I'll show them to you later. A:I was thinking about going to Rome myself. Do you recommend it? B: Yes. ( 26 ) There are so many interesting things to see. (21) A: Guess what, Uncle Bob! I started learning karate today. Mom said you used to do karate. B: That's right. I took lessons in high school. A: Can I practice with you? We could do it in the backyard. B: ( 21 ) You might get hurt. Maybe after you've had some more lessons. 1 That's probably not a good idea. 2 You should practice with me now. 3 It would be better to quit your lessons. 4 Ill get changed into my karate uniform. (22) A: I'mgoing to Paris on a homestay this summer. B: Really, Karen? My sister lives there. ( 22 ) A: That would be great. I'd like to meet her. B: Well, write to her soon because she's very busy. (25) 1 but I forgot where I took most of them. 2 but I lost my camera on the last.day. 3 but I haven't gotten them from the store yet. 4 but I didn't bring the camera with me today. 1 Shall I go to France with you? 2 Shall I introduce you to a host family? 3 Shall I give you her e-mail address? 4 Shall I teach you some French? (26) 1 I'm sure you'd have a great time. 2 It's more fun with lots of people. 3 You should go to Milan instead. 4I like to practice my Italian. 38