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In my opinion, people should not trist information on the Internet. I have two reasons to support this based on news and socil media, In the first place, Internet news may contain fake news. I don't know whether information is true because it don't have evidence. However, many people don't know it and believe it. It is very dangerous In the second place, many people post take information on social media, and people who belive it twe pout it, too. It's bad a cycle / Therefore, I think people should be careful about I Internet Intamation.

意見文の添削をしていただきたいです！！ Hello everyone,today’s topic is “students should do volunteer work.” We define that hosted by their school and appl... 続きを読む

Hello everyone,today's topic is "students should do volunteer work. We define that hosted by their school and apply for any volunteer work by myself. We have two points. We can make a social contribution and we can learn many things. I will explain our 1st point. We believe that doing volunteer work broadens one's horizons. According to Japan University of Health Science, volunteer work makes us self-development. Doing it connects with many kinds of people. Participants find a new perspective. For this reason, our minds are inspired by other participants. Also I learned many things about the situation of the world. I participated in volunteer work to clean the beach. Before I did it, I didn't have an interest in the ocean plastic problem. But by participating in it, I know that there is a lot of ocean plastic and I was interested in the problem. Therefore I think students should do volunteer work. Thank you.

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16 ONE-MINUTE GRAMMAR [関係代名詞・関係副詞] | They live in groups, which have a strict, hierarchical social order. 「彼らは群棲しているが､それぞれの群れには厳しい序列がある」 ■Shrimp who live on their own always become haermaphrodites. 「単独で生きているエビは、常に雌雄同体になる」 ■The female fish that was previously ranked third changes sex. 「以前は第3位であったの魚が性転換する」 If they swim too far from the coral reefs where they usually live, they can be easily caught by predators. 「もしいつも住み処にしている珊瑚礁からあまりにも離れたところで泳ぐと、い とも簡単に捕食者に捕まってしまうだろう」 次のそれぞれの文を関係代名詞か関係副詞を入れて完成させなさい。 1. My father works for a company ( 2. The book is about a physicist ( 3. What happened to the paintings ( 4.A widow is a woman ( 5. The Hotel California ( ) makes electrical appliances, ) made a ground-breaking discovery. ) were on the wall? ) husband is dead. ) we stayed was in the middle of the desert.

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2. The committee members (A) is discussing (C) discussed about social problems every Thursday. (B) will discuss on (D) discuss De stu to

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このような英語長文のsvocの振り方が分かりません。コツなどあればこの写真の例文を使って教えて欲しいです。

4 Part 2 Part 3 30 18 Vol. II FL 20 本文 21 22 レーズ23~24 ¹A flexible perspective is necessary / when we deal with social problems. // 2For 教科書 pp.58-59 instance, / many children in South Africa / once died from diseases. // ³It was because called "Hope Soap." // they didn't wash their hands enough. // To get children to wash their hands regularly, / a toy was put / inside each piece of soap.// 5Children became eager / to wash their hands / because they wanted to get the toy. // The soap used in this successful program / was bi nid deen At 'Let's look at another example. // In 1995,/ more than a million volunteers / went to A We 1 Loa 1 pers 2 die 4 reg help / after the Great Hanshin-Awaji Earthquake. // However, it was difficult / to match communication/in disaster areas. s. // volunteers' skills with victims' needs. // 10 Later, / dekimasu zekken was created / to solve 5 eas 8 mc 2 C (1) d this problem. // 1¹ Volunteers wrote their skills / on sheets of paper / and put them on their backs. // ¹2 Dekimasu zekken still brings people together and promotes a C B 31 5 6