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Australia, the United States, and urban India. Rend the following passage and answer questions A through C in English. while their wives work outside the home, Stay-at-home dads are also called stay- Stay-at-home dads are married fathers with children who care for their family domestic burden has led some couples to completely reverse their roles. The number of stay-at-home dads is starting to increase in Britain, Canada, 「husband who can do the housework, such as shopping, cooking, and looking alter the children. The widespread expectation that men should share the vin England showed that 75 percent of women in their twenties prefer a 38 on were breadwinners and women were caregivers. Arecent Traditionally, Survey can Many stay-at-home dads take great pleasure in showing affection to their children. Their wives can pursue careers without worrying about teaching family values or paying for child care. Research suggests that children of stay- athome dads often benefit from strong bonds with both parents, whereas the father's role ina stay-at-home mom household is less influential. Although the number of stay-at-home dads is increasing, it remains small Compared to the total number of fathers. In the United States, the government estimates that in 2009 there were 158,000 stay-at-home dads, a mere 0.2 percent of 67.8 million fathers. In Australia, about 1 percent of fathers are stay-at-home dads. In urban India, one estimate suggests 3 percent of fathers stay at home full-time. Some stay-at-home dads suffer from social stigma. Many people, including stay-at-home moms, do not understand why a man would choose to give up his career to care for his family full-time. Being a stay-at-home dad can also be career suicide. Many employers view stay-at-home dads as lacking ambition and commitment. Losing professional skills may prevent stay-at-home dads from returning to the workforce.

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問題は【1】~【4】まである。答えは各問題の指示に従って別紙の解答用紙に書きなさい。 【1】次の英文を読んで設問に答えなさい。 Headaches are a big problem. Each year, millions of people suffer from severe headaches that affect their enjoyment of life, (1) not to mention their productivity at work. estimate, headaches cost individuals and businesses more than (2) $50 billion each year! (3) This is one of the reasons research into headaches has become a worldwide effort. Although he did not know much about how headaches work, Hippocrates was the first doctor to find a way to treat them. By 400 BC, Hippocrates had discovered that the *bark from willow trees was useful in treating pain. He made a white powder from the tree's bark and gave it to his patients. Hippocrates did not know it, but he was actually prescribing a natural chemical in willow bark called salicin. Whena person eats salicin, the chemical is changed inside his or her body into (4) salicylic acid. It turns out that salicylic acid is good for stopping pain, including headache pain, but it is bad for a person's stomach. In the 1800s, a chemist in Germany slightly changed easier for people to take. commonly known as aspirin. Aspirin was used throughout most of the 1900s to treat headaches, but doctors had little idea about what really caused headaches. When doctors can *diagnose the cause of a disease, they can find better ways to treat it. Therefore, as medical technology developed, doctors began to use it to learn more about the human brain and about headaches. In fact, according to one m to make it This new form of the chemical was called acetylsalicylic acid, now acid's Now doctors classify headaches ( A ) two general types: primary and secondary. A primary headache is a condition ( B) as only the headache itself. one caused by another physiological condition, such as an *infection or a *tumor. For primary headaches, doctors have determined three possible causes. headache is caused by stress. characteristically felt on both sides of the head as a dull, steady pain. Another kind of primary headache is the *migraine headache. Exactly what causes these headaches is not well understood, but many experts believe it could be abnormal brain activity causing changes in the brain's chemistry and blood flow. For many people, migraines are caused by certain (5) stimuli, such as poor sleep or particular foods or smells. A sufferer usually feels intense pain on one side of the head and becomes sensitive to light and noise. If the migraine is severe, the sufferer may *vomit repeatedly. The third kind of primary headache is known as the cluster headache. Cluster headaches typically occur around the same time each day for weeks or months at a time. The person ( C)from this kind of headache usually feels pain on one side of her or his head, and the pain is centered around one of the eyes. Doctors do not know much (6) at present about cluster headaches, but they seem to be more common among men and could be related to alcohol or other things that affect a person's blood flow. Using computers and more advanced medical equipment, doctors continue to learn more about what happens in the brain before and during headaches. Especially in the case of migraines, some doctors believe they have found the part of the brain that sets off the reaction for severe attacks. With these insights into brain processes, doctors hope new ways will be discovered to stop headaches before they begin. On the other hand, a secondary headache is One kind of primary Doctors usually call these tension headaches, and they are 注: bark 樹皮 diagnose ~を診断する、~を突き止める 感染症·伝染病 migraine (headache) 偏頭痛 infection tumor 腫場 vomit 食べたものを吐く (出典:READING FOR THE REAL WORLD 3rd edition, Compass Publishing より)

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Masters of the Desert “Bedouin” is a name given to some of the people who live in North Africa and the Middle East. Unlike most people, many Bedouins do not ( 24 Instead, they are nomads, which means that they are always moving about. They walk around the hot deserts of countries like Egypt and Israel, leading their camels and sheep to gras and water. Life in the desert is not easy, but over thousands of years, Bedouins have developed unique skills to help them survive. Some people estimate that there are around 20 million Bedouins in the world today. However, ( 25 ). Because many of them are traveling, it is impossible to count them all. In recent years, however, many Bedouins have given up their traditional way of life. This is because the amount of land controlled by governments has increased, which has made it harder for the Bedouins to travel freely. Some of them now live in urban areas and have regular jobs, such as driving taxis and working in restaurants. Some Bedouins have found work with the Israeli army as trackers. A tracker is a person who follows people by using signs left on the ground, such as the marks left by feet or tires. Trackers must know their environment well and be quick to notice anything unusual. ( 26 ), with their desert survival skills, Bedouins are excellent trackers. About 1,600 of them are now serving in the Israeli army, and their ability to notice dangers along Israel's borders is helping to protect the countily. 1 sleep lying down 2 live in one place 3 eat meat or fish 4 use paper money 1 their exact numbers are unknown 2 there were many more in the past 3 the groups have no government 4 they all meet once every year 1 Naturally 2 Occasionally 3 Secondly 4 Equally

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TR. 48-51 Reading 2 aud sdt To 19dmun ar) bas 0 asw anisy 1o smo s 「黄金の腕を持つ男」 James Harrison とは,一体どのような人物なのでしょうか。 dyo James Harrison is known as “the man with the golden arm” and has saved millions of 9eud no anisu sbin o lle obr law lives. When people hear this, they may think he is a kind of superhero with special powers. In fact, he looks like ( ① ) in Australia. However, he has something special: his blood. James was only fourteen years old when he had big surgery*. The surgery was hceKGug Coop 5 Successful, but he lost so much blood that he needed a blood transfusion*. 。This experience o AC taught him the importance of blood. He made his first blood donation* a few weeks after his 18th birthday. Soon after that, a special antibody was found in his blood. An antibody woH (S 3 au alnsbuie is a kind of protein* the body makes when it finds something bad in the blood. Every year, thousands of babies in Australia were suffering from* a type of blood 10 disease. Some babies even died before birth, while (④ ) were born Toortoe serious brain abute eri od gnib1o0oA (ト damage. The antibody found in James's blood can cure* this disease, and so he has ! with bluorta tsdhw Joorbe orly donated his blood more than 1,000 times over the past sixty years. His blood has helped to save about 2.4million babies, and his own grandson was one of them. In one interview, he said, “An hour of your time is a lifetime* for someone else," ( 63nineai. 15 James Harrison, the man with the golden arm, never gives up helping ( 6) さ史の素 関歩限のア い(ー ou とに、次の日本を英語にしなる (229 words)

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Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Cnaren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by poverty. I Khew foreign children were troúbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japan live in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? 「nere are many causes. First,non-regular employmentis increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children? I think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member ofa support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Willit come?I hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

【写真】を読む時に… •アクセントをどこに付ければいいのか •どこできって読めばいいのか •繋げて読む部分はどこか •語尾を上げる又は下げるところはどこか を教えてほしいです。

Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Chiidren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by póverty. I Knew foreign children were troūbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japanlive in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? There are many causes. First,non-regular employment is increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children?1 think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member of a support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Will it come?l hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

画像の1番下の Q1 What were the good points of the 20th century? What were the bad points？ の答えはどうなりますか？

“Looking Back at the Twentieth Century" is an exhibition of 300 photographs which show us the history of the past In the entrance hall the guide introduces the look back at = recall ~ century. photographs. Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to “Looking 5 Back at the Twentieth Century." /The 20th century was an age of great pregress in science and communications. People's lives became richer and more comfortable. People achieved greater freedom 10 and equality, and seemed to be closer to the dream of living a happy life. But it was also an age of terrible wars, and G-2 tens of millions of ~ tens of millions of people lost their lives. The photos =a great many ~ here will show you what people like you and me 15 went through in the 20th century. As you look at G-1 them, ask yourself: “How would you feel if these O cannot rememi were photos of your own family and friends ?” Some -ondemned to rg George Su will shock you; some may make you sad or angry. But they will also give you a message for our future. Ago |20 Before you look at the exhibition, I would like to show you twophotographs which are particularly TF important to us. fotod freedom [fri:dan entrance [éntrans] progress [prágras] achieve [atfi:v] terrible [térabl] particularly [partikjalarli] exhibition (èksibifan] equality [ikwálati] 15. go through Many people went through hard times during the war. G-2 She told me how she had solved the problem. G-1 Ifihad a lot of money, I could buy that sports car. Q-1 What were the good points of the 20h century? What were the bad points? e? 113

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中「秋ロ a One night, Bill Gates came home and told his wife he was going to buy a notebook. @ "That's nice, dear,” she may have said while reading the newspaper. ® Only it wasn't your average kind of notebook. @ It happened to be one of Leonardo da Vinci's notebooks, the Codex Leicester, and it was in fact to be the most expensive book ever sold after Bill Gates bought it at an auction for $30.8 million. ある夜ビル = ゲイツは家に帰ってきて, 手帳を買うつもりだと妻に言った。 の妻は新聞を読みながら, 「それは素晴らしい」 と言ったかもしれない。 @だが, それは平均的な手帳ではなかった。@それは偶然にもレオナルド= ダ = ビンチ の手帳の1冊,「レスター写本 (コーデックス レスター)」で, 実はビル = ゲイッがオークションで3,080万ドルで買い,これまでで最も高い値段で売ら れた本だった。

By the mid-1990s,he ( ) a millionaire. ①became ②becomes ③had become ④has become 答えは③なのですが、①ではなぜだめなのでしょうか…？ 詳しく教えて下さると嬉しいです

By the mid-1990s,he ( ) a millionaire. ①became ②becomes ③had become ④has become 答えは③なのですが、①ではなぜだめなのでしょうか…？ 詳しく教えて下さると嬉しいです