英検２級のライティング問題です。試験近いので添削して頂きたいです💦最後の結論の文はないのですが、それ以外を見て頂きたいです！

4 ライティング ●以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお, 解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ■解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容 をよく読んでから答えてください。 20.01 TOPIC Some people say that people today should spend less time using the Internet. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ● Communication ● Education ● Health advers designed

今回の共通テストで、納得いってないんですが、4の答えは④なんですけど、本文を見ていると、どのキャンプコースでも、他の生徒の前で、発表する という趣旨のことが書いていますが、見る側の立場にも立てば、お互いのパフォーマンスにアクセスしてる、という①がバツと言える理由が分かりません

You are a senior high school student interested in improving your English during the summer vacation. You find a website for an intensive English summer camp run by an international school. B GIS Intensive English Summer Camp Galley International School (GIS) has provided intensive English summer camps for senior high school students in Japan since 1989. Spend two weeks in an all-English environment! Dates: August 1-14, 2023 Location: Lake Kawaguchi Youth Lodge, Yamanashi Prefecture Cost: 120,000 yen, including food and accommodation (additional fees for optional activities such as kayaking and canoeing) Courses Offered ng i FOREST: You'll master basic grammar structures, make short speeches on it sdt trods a simple topics, and get pronunciation tips. Your instructors have taught English for over 20 years in several countries. On the final day of the camp, you'll take part in a speech contest while all the other campers listen. MOUNTAIN: You'll work in a group to write and perform a skit in English. Instructors for this course have worked at theater schools in New York City, London, and Sydney. You'll perform your skit for all the campers to enjoy on August 14. SKY: You'll learn debating skills and critical thinking in this course. Your instructors have been to many countries to coach debate teams and some have published best-selling textbooks on the subject. You'll do a short debate in front of all the other campers on the last day. with an advanced level of English will be accepted.) (Note: Only those (2610

この問題に関してですが、スキルは、発展　された　ものである、というふうな答えになると思ったのに、なぜ3番なのですか？

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英作文の添削をして頂きたいです。 何点かについても記載していただけると嬉しいです。 左：問題＆回答 右：解答

模試 表現 次の日本文中の下線部(ア)~ (ウ) を英語になおしなさい。 生徒 : 失礼します。 生徒: 先生: ちょうど時間ができたところだよ,どうぞ。 okad どれだけ考えても,この箇所がどうもしっくりこなくて。 もう一度説明をお願いでき ますか。 □Call Ⅰ ask at last class. I considered この前の授業でわからなかったところを質問してもよろしいですか? 生徒:なるほど! これですっきりしました。 ありがとうございました。 loo 生 (ウ)急いで説明して申し訳なかったね。 こう考えるとどうかな。 able me to it, but I didn't understand " I'm sorry that I explained to your in a because I have to speak English only what I speak English, so it improve my English 月 you a question I didn't understand harry t あなたの学校は語学プログラムとして生徒に海外留学とオンライン留学を提供している。 あなたは英語力を高めたいと考えていて、どちらかのプログラムを選ぶ予定である。どちら を選ぶか、「英語力を高める」という目的に合う理由を含め、あなたの考えを具体的に45語程 一度の英語で書きなさい。 なお, 複数の文になってもかまわない。 Janothe be birt I chose to study abroad. I'm alle to more 日 it. Overseas improve my English Also, I concentrate (2021年度 進研模試 2年生1月実施) •Affectively than online sindy commedia yang alamian bến ph abro 17 解答 (45点) A 【解答例】 (ア) May Ⅰ ask a question about something s that Ⅰ couldn't understand in the last class? 5 • I'd like to ask a question about something/5 that Ⅰ couldn't understand in the previous lesson.js (10点) (イ) Though I've spent a while on this part6 I cannot quite understand it.」6 • I've spent quite a while on this part,16 but it's not really clear to me.6 (12点) (ウ)I'm sorry to have explained itg in such a rush-j2 Ⅰ apologizeg for explaining ing in a hurry-12 (8点) B 【解答例】 〈海外留学〉 I would rather study abroad to polish up my English. Actually, meeting people there would motivate me to try my best to be a better English speaker. Also, communicating face-to-face makes it easier to ask questions and would help me further improve my English skills. (45語) 〈オンライン留学> Studying English online would be better for me. By recording classes, I could review what I learned and practice my English repeatedly by watching the recordings. Also, studying online would enable me to take classes at any time. So, I think I could improve my English effectively. ( 47語) (15点) 採点基準 B 【ポイント①】 自分が選んだプログラムを 明示できている・・3点 【ポイント②】 選んだプログラムに固有の特徴 を示し, それが 「英語力を高める」 という目的 に合っている選んでいないプログラムに固有 の特徴を示し,それでは英語力が高められない ことが書けている・・12点 「英語力を高める」という目的と関係がない/「英 「語力を高める」という目的に合っているが、そ の特徴が選んだプログラムに固有ではない・・・･ 6点 設問解説 A (7)「~について質問してもよろしいです か?」 は May Iask a question about 〜? で表 すことができる。 また, 「~について質問し たいと思う」と言い換え, I'd like to ask a question about 〜と表すこともできる。 「わ からなかったところ」 は関係代名詞を用い て, something that Ⅰ couldn't understand な どとすればよい。 「この前の授業で」 は 「こ の前の」 の意味の last や 「前の｣ の意味の previous を用いて, in the last class や in the previous lesson と表現できる。 (イ) 「どれだけ考えても,この箇所がどうもしっ くりこなくて。」 は前半を 「私はこの箇所に (多くの) 時間を費やした」 と言い換え、 現 在完了を用いて I've spent (quite) a while on this part と表すことができる。 後半は 「私は それを完全には理解できない」 や 「私にはあ まりはっきりしない」 などと言い換えて, I cannot quite understand it や it's not really clear to me と表せばよい｡ また. 現在時制を 用いて, No matter how hard I try to understand it this part doesn't make sense. などと表すこ ともできる。 (ウ) 「急いで説明して申し訳なかったね｡」 は <be sorry to have+過去分詞〉 ｢~したことを 「すまなく思う」 や apologize for ~「~のこ とで謝る」 に 「説明する」 の目的語を補い。

空欄の単語が合っているかの確認をお願いします。

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It is only when th another person that a real basis for ed. While some people can make us feel comfortable others make us feel ill at ease and some seem untrustworthy. s has to do with the length of time that they look at us or with how long hold our gaze as they speak. この内容が関係してる等位は後ろ見て、見る!!! のは手前、 Michael Argyle, a pioneer of social psychology and nonverbal communication skills in Britain, found that when Westerners and Europeans talk, their average, gaze commun time 相互に、お互い is 61%, consisting of 41% gaze time when talking 75% when listening and 31% mutual V C 10 mutual gaze was 1.18 seconds. gazing. He recorded the average gaze length to be 2.95 seconds and the length of a We found that the amount (of eye contact) in a typical conversation ranges from 25% to 100%, depending on who's talking and what culture (2) AL'X they're from? When we talk we maintain 40 to 60% eye contact with an average of 注目すべき 80% eye contact when listening. The notable exception to this rule is Japan and some Asian and South American cultures, (where extended eye contact is seen as aggressive 15 or disrespectful. The Japanese tend to look away or at your throat, which can be A *disconcerting for culturally inexperienced Westerners and Europeans. Argyle found that when person A likes person B, he will look at him a lot. This 1 1:1 him 21

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① ( )内から最も適切な語句を選び,○で囲みなさい。 1. She had her mother (pack / packed) some sandwiches. 2. I hate (his/he) being treated like that. his 3. I'm sorry for (not going / going not) to the party. 4. He is proud of (buying / having bought) the house when he was young. 5. I heard the birds (to sing / singing). 2( 内に入る最も適切な語句を選び, 番号を○で囲みなさい。 1. Dad, if my grades improve by the end of the term, would you mind ( 34678 2 locking ) by my nickname. raising 2 rising 3 to raise 4 to rise 2. "I'd better call our neighbor to ask her to check the door of our apartment." "You don't have to do that. I remember ( ) it when we left." 1 lock 3 to be locked 3. I like ( 1 call 1 allowed 2 being called 4. "Our trip to Tokyo was fun, wasn't it?" "Yes, it was great! I'm really looking forward ( 1 go 2 going 3 5. "Do you still plan to go to Hawaii this winter vacation?" "Yes, and I wish you'd consider ( ) with me." 1 go 2 going 3 to go 6. If the pain in your throat becomes worse, have it ( 2 checking 1 check 3 to check 7. Although her parents had said "no" for a long time, they finally ( alone. 3 to call ->>> 1 2 5 8 10 ) at once. ) my allowance? 〔センター試験〕 4 to lock 4 calling ) there again sometime." [センター試験〕 to go 4 to going 4 to going [センター試験〕 4 checked 4 made 〔センター試験〕 [センター試験] ) her go to Europe 〔センター試験〕 2 got 3 let 3 ( 内の語句を並べかえて, 意味の通る文にしなさい。 1. I was thinking of the speech (called, I had to, make, my name, when I heard ). [センター試験] I was thinking of the speech I had to make when, I heard 2. If we want to (English, in, make, ourselves, understood ), we need not only good language skills but also clear thinking and a broad general knowledge. If we want to make ourselves understood in English language skills but also clear thinking and a broad general knowledge. [センター試験] we need not only good 02.01

この文の緑のマーカー引いてるところの、訳と構造を教えて欲しいです！特にcrimes for which のところがなぜそうなるかわからないです

and have 2 R not Advances in technology/over the past 200 years have been remarkable ght us many benefits/However, the integration of technology Into society has always been smooth/ The first industrial revolution began in Britain in the late 18th century/Machines developed at the time/could make clothes much more efficiently (1) 14 easily and cheaply than before. Even so not everyone felt happy about this at first. Groups of skilled weavers and textile machine operators known as Luddites feared 労働運動 that their jobs would be taken away/They began/a labor movem ement in order to protest and resist the widespread use of the new technology by factory owners. Their protest actions included destroying machines crimes for which some Luddites were killed by authorities. ようたい CO ↑ To Cut 27. 減速する we now know these technological advances did not/slow down. Over time, they became widely accepted and appreciated. Before long, other innovations like the steam engine were powering heavy machinery across Europe and beyond. The second industrial revolution, toward the end of the 1800s, brought the gasoline engine and the s use of electricity. The third industrial revolution, in the late 20th century, produced computers as well as digital technologies and communications. And, recently, experts have declared that developments in artificial intelligence (AI) and advanced robotics have led us into the fourth industrial revolution. Even today, however, we hear warnings about the potentially harmful effects of (2) contemporary technologies. Some observers claim that the latest AI inventions could have negative impacts on workers, businesses, and society as a whole. The main concern, as in past eras, is that machines will replace humans in the workplace. Thes- observers suggest that a large number of occupations might be lost to AI and robot in the next few years. Taxi and truck drivers, cleaners, and factory workers are amon those considered to be at risk. The fear is even expressed that the AI revolution might lead to mass unemploymen According to some experts, up to 800 million jobs could be lost globally by 203 Moreover, the workers who will lose their jobs to machines are likely to be those wit ewer skills and less education, increasing the gap between rich and poor. Some peop believe that this will create social conflict and instability. do not necessarily need to take such a negative outl

401 なぜ①になるよか解説お願い致します🙇‍♀️

401 His great skills, not to his speed, made him a good soccer player. ① mention ② remark 3 speak ④ talk 〈東京理科大〉 ①訳スピードは言うまでもなく,そ の卓越した技能により、彼はすばら しいサッカー選手となった。

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ねらい ^^ うした内容などを表現できるように学習していきましょう。 A 言語 ① 英語は第二言語として多くの国で話されている。 English is spoken as a second language in many countries. [第二言語] ① 「第二言語としての英語」 English as a Second Language (ESL) は, 母語 (native language / native tonguebout th に加えて、後から学習して習得する英語を指す。 「外国語としての英語」 English as a Foreign Languag (EFL) は, 日本のように日常的に英語を使わない環境で英語学習を行うことを意味する。 ●言語に関する表現 ◎基本例題 1.次の日本語に合うように空所に適語を入れなさい。 私は、自分の英語の技能を生かせる仕事に就きたい。 I want toget a job where I can use my ( 「英語圏 (の国々)」 English-speaking country (-ies) / 「英語力 [英語の技能]」 one's English skills / 「語学 力」 a knowledge of a language / 「語学教育」 language education / 「多言語の」 multilingual (able 144) ) ( ② 「成績がよい」は have good scores, 「奨学金」は a scholarship と表現する。 ●学校教育に関する表現 ◎基本例題 2. 次の日本語に合うように空所に適語を入れなさい。 奨学金に応募し, 受諾された。 I applied ( ) a ( B 学校教育 ② ソフィアは成績がよかったので,大学進学への奨学金を得た。 (able 247) Having good scores, Sophia got a scholarship to college. [成績がよい,奨学金] ember (東京経済大 * 「小学校」elementary school(s) / 「教材」 teaching material(s) / 「義務教育｣ compulsory education/「教育制度 education system/ 「学期」 term(s) / 「担任の先生」 homeroom teacher(s) / 「学歴」 educational background(s ◎基本例題 3. 次の日本語に合うように空所に適語を入れなさい。 ), and my application was accepted. C異文化 ③ 海外にいる日本人の中には,まるで日本にいるようにふるまう人もいる。 (able 補充例文) Some Japanese people in foreign countries behave as if they were in Japan. [まるで日本にいるように] Fis ③ as if they were in Japan は仮定法過去。 「(実際には日本にいないが) まるで日本にいるように」という意味 ●異文化に関する表現 「異文化」 different culture(s) / 「異文化コミュニケーション」 cross-cultural communication / 「多文化の｣ multicultural / 「国際化」 internationalization / 「グローバル化」 globalization / 「アイデンティティー」 identity 友人はイングランドで愉快な時を過ごし、異文化体験を楽しんだ。 My friend had a nice time in England and enjoyed experiencinga ( ( ). (成城大**