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Q Write about a person who helped you and explain what you learned from that experience. (00~1507. I was helped by my junior high school band contest. I was. 3.0 (o 20 Date when you were in trouble, I was especially worried about whether the thing what help people to become happy. brass band club teacher when I was I would be able to play well or not at contest. I often very nervous and make mistakes when I think it is important or when I do something in front. of many people. I talked my brass band club teacher it and she said that playing well is important, but enjoy. playing and make people to be happy is more Ao 90 important than try to play well because music is L too much. and I could student and worried about brass 40 he When I heard it, I become not to think about plaing well F... 20 succes the contest.. 460 because 30. From this experience, I learned about well skill is not most important and should think about the true purpose. of things.. (1487) 60

(8)ってどうして2じゃだめなんですか？ ただの完了形とbeenがはいったときのちがいがいまいちわかりません

) asleep. But outside factors can influence LIU (6) ( Among such factors are diet, stress and (7)( ) to light. Rhythms ✓ set by the body's internal clock naturally flow like tides of the ocean. For example, body temperature is lowest around 4 a.m. and highest around 7 p.m. ) in the evening than in the Occur Interestingly, more world records (8)( morning. And research has shown that many athletes perform best in the intern: afternoon or evening - near the peak of body temperature. influer tide (1) prepared preparing 3 are preparing 4 prepare intere predicta circadia rhythm biologic

黄色のマーカーの部分のsvocなどを教えていただけないでしょうか？(..)

plainly Dreaming is a universal phenomenon, though much of what we dream may be forgotten, and some few persons are able only rarely to remember their dreams on waking. The dream represents mental activity during sleep. For this reason the workings of the unconscious mind can be more p 5 seen here than anywhere else. Ordinarily the thoughts and wishes of the unconscious mind are unknown to us, though it contains the source of creative and instinctive energy. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes liberal use of such primitive methods of representation as symbolism. In a very general way, the unconscious mind of present-day man may be 10 compared to the conscious mind of the caveman, and dreams often remind us of the picture writing of the caveman, where a relatively few simple pictures used as symbols told a detailed story of events. In addition, it is the function of a dream to express a wish, but since the wishes of the unconscious are often highly instinctive in nature, they would be 15 as disturbing to most modern persons as would the acts of a caveman in present-day society. Therefore, most dreams are disguised enough to conceal their true meaning from the dreamer. This is accomplished through the intervention of the conscience, a much more recently developed function of the brain. In psychoanalysis an effort to get the true meaning of the dream is 20 made by having the dreamer give all his thoughts and feelings about every element of the dream. These are then pieced together by the analyst, who uses his knowledge of the life history of the individual as a reference point. By this means, unconscious thoughts and wishes, as well as long-forgotten experiences, can be revealed so as to give the dreamer a much more complete understand- 25 ing of himself. Passage 35 Psychoanalysis ー語句と構文- 13. on waking = /17. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes = それは概念を形成するための装置一式の中の一番古い部品と ・・・ 訳) / L.9. may be compared to 〜 = 〜になぞらえるこ 272 - ( CLOSE ときに目く とし 16 1027 性質を るだろ ある。 見た BO 17 わ

普通にmarryとかって現在形とか過去形で使う気がするんですけど、それと何がちがうんですか？？

s 詞 + 過去分詞〉は〈be 動詞+形容詞〉であると考 英語では受動態で表される表現 be married to ~(~と結婚している) □ be crowded with ~ (~で混んでいる) be dressed in ~(~を着ている) □ be born (生まれる) □ be raised (育つ) be seated (座る) He was born and raised in Fukuoka City. (彼は生まれも育ちも福岡市だった。) ■The train was crowded with high school students. (列車は高校生でいっぱいだった。) ■Donna was dressed ir る(⇒FOCUS

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taminidrship. ① My brother Kota, who is studying abroaa, 2 He's published his latest novel, which will be translated into English. F-GUIDE ②非限定用法は関係代名詞の前にコンマを入れ, 人以外について情報を補足的に加える場合は which ①だれなのかはっきりしている人に関する情報を補足的に加えるときに、 関係代名詞を非限定用法で使う。 を使う。 非限定用法ではthatを使うことはできない。 ECK 次の英文に, [ ]内に与えられた説明を加えて1文にしよう。 Stevie Wonder became blind shortly after his birth. [ He is an American musician. Stevie Wonder, who is an American musician, became blind shortly after his birth. 1. George Lucas was inspired by Japanese movies. [He created “Star Wars”.] 2. This movie received several awards last year. [ I really like it. ] 3. He did some important research in biology. [ No one has ever done it before.] 興味や関心のある有名人の名前を3人挙げて, その人物について説明しよう。 ⓒHachimura Rui, who became an NBA basketball player, was born in Japan. In his high school days, he won the All-Japan High School Tournament title three times. 述べた内容に情報を加える which: 節や句が先行詞

和文英訳についてです。 ピンクの付箋に書かれているのが私の回答です。 添削お願いします(т т)

課題文 (1) 東京の人口は私の故郷の8倍だ。 (2) 東京は私の故郷よりも物価が高い。 文法研究 §97 比較対象の統一 比較対象は意 英語の比較構文 (2) The price of Tokyo is のでなければならない」とい いてはいけない。 (a)The popul (x) この文の主語は higher than that of my hometown. ルの etor

英検２級のライティング対策です。 添削お願いしたいです🙇‍♀️文法やつづりのミス以外にも構成とか書き方のアドバイス等あれば教えて頂きたいです！あと、文章中のfuthermore,i think theyの後、don'tが抜けてました🙏🏻

補足 です。 す 時間を費やすべきだとは思いません。 2 次のTOPICについて、反対の意見とその理由を2つ書きましょう。 POINTSは、理由を書く 際の参考観点です(これ以外の理由を書いてもかまいません)。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Some people say that the right to vote should be extended to 16-year- old citizens. Do you agree with this opinion? ● Society Politics ●Rights POINTS

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与えられた状況に合うように( )内の語句を並べかえ,全文を書きなさい。 ただし、不要な語 句が1つずつ含まれています。 A B 71 状況 荷物を運ぶのに困っていた老人がいたので、私は言った。 (carry/ box / I'll / upstairs / this / will) for you. May bluo 1-4X29) Shoes Toy (2)状況久しぶりに実家に戻ってきた。 その道中、懐かしい店を見て···。 Su noc Podw I (that/go/store/ would / to / used ) almost every day during junior high school. MDF frennib Hor (3)状況】 友人のコンピューターに問題があり、私に助けを求めにきました。 ( so / will / I / my computer/startup / won't ) need your help. I llar2 $3 at [BJ@163 16%JJ

力の釣り合いについての質問です。Nの大きさは重力の大きさの分解によりmg sinθとなると思ったのですがどうして０になるのですか。

ve1 がいな hunga いがも 適切に かった d no en Qun 110 第1章力学 21. 斜面上の運動とエネルギー 水平面上に断面が直角三角形ABC となる三角台が固定されている。 ここに BC面から測った A 間のみ摩擦があり (小物体との間の動摩擦係数をμとする), 斜面の他の部分はなめらかである. 点の高さはんであり, ∠BAC=90°, ∠ACB = 0 である. また, 斜面 AC間の距離 1 の部分 OP 0 P A F B (1) B 点に質量 m の小物体を置き, 力Fを加えて小物体を斜面に沿ってゆっくりと A 点まで 移動させた.物体が受ける力をすべて数え上げ, BA間で各々が物体にした仕事を求めよ. ●(2) A点から初速0で小物体を滑らせた. B点を通過する時の速さはいくらか. ●(3) A点からC方向に小物体を滑らせたところ, 0 点を速さで通過し,さらにP点を通過 して滑り続けた.OP 間で小物体が受ける力をすべて数え上げ,各々が小物体にした仕事を 求めよ. (4) P点における小物体の速さはいくらか.

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Grammar for Expression 3 LESSON 5 A 名詞について説明する現在分詞・過去分詞 a. The setting sun was really beautiful. b. They sell imported cars at that shop. c. Look at the baby sleeping on the bed. d. This is a picture taken in Okinawa. B 長い主語の代わりにItを使う①<It is ~ that....> It is certain that Bill will join our club. C 長い主語の代わりにItを使う ② <It is ~ to do ....) a. It is important to learn about foreign cultures. 外国の文化について学ぶことは大切だ。 君が彼に腹を立てるのは当然だ。 b. It is natural for you to be angry with him. (沈んでいく太陽→)沈む夕日は本当にきれいでした。 あの店では (輸入された車→) 輸入車を売っています。 ベッドで眠っている赤ちゃんを見てごらん。 これは沖縄で撮った [一撮られた] 写真です。 ビルが私たちのクラブに入ってくれるのは確かだ。 Read the following David's diary. Follow the example and complete the sentences Aug. 30th, 2022 I found a photo in my desk this morning. It was taken in Hokkaido when I was a high school student. In the center of the photo, there's the statue of Dr. Clark. My friend, Kaito, is smiling so happily in front of it. I'm also smiling next to him. This trip is still one of my best memories. statue Ex. The boy standing next to Kaito is David. [stand] 1. David found a photo 2. Kaito is the boy . in his desk. [take] the statue of Dr. Clark. [smile 2 Follow the examples and complete the sentences about yourself. 1. Ex. It is possible that I will go abroad next summer. It is possible that 2. Ex. It is difficult for me to get up early every morning. It is difficult for me LESS TOY A a. b C B C 1. 11