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英語 高校生

【写真】の読むとき、どこを区切りればよいのか教えてほしいです。

Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Cnaren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by poverty. I Khew foreign children were troúbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japan live in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? 「nere are many causes. First,non-regular employmentis increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children? I think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member ofa support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Willit come?I hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

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英語 高校生

学校でする英語のスピーチの原稿なのですが、知らない表現がとても多く、 文法がぐちゃぐちゃになってしまっている気がします😖 間違っているところを教えていただきたいです。お願いします

I wos inferes ted about the Iiteracy rate I was Surprised thot there are one. hundred twenity four million children who can't 90 to School in the world. Also there are seven hundred eight-one m: 1on| また、成人非激諾も 7億 abults illiterate Pleace look Screen. This is graph of literacy ratec in some Countries. According fo the research in 2016, the glabal Qverage De ve loping countries average is 63% Japan liferacy. 1ate is 99.84ん I noticed that 4here is agreat betveen developing and deve lope d COuntries, I think the reoson tor the low teracy rate in developing. countries is that there are Hew school's. So I think it is nece ssary to in areoee the number of schols. Whot individuls cau do is very limited , but we still have somlething we can do. First of all,. I thimk it is important to 1snow fhe current situcdion.. I hope the warld literacy rate to be 100%. 世界のが100%に 私は讃字率について興味をもちました 学校に行けない子どが 1億24005人もいることにおどろき . ました。 8100万Aいます。 スクリーンを見てくださいlo これば 1くつかの国の設字季 のグラフです 2016歳のリサーチによれば 診字車の 世界平均は 78%です。 途発上国は63%です。 hteracy Yate is 78% 日本は99,8%です。 ditHerence 私は発磨全国と先進国にだな 差があることに気けきました。 このようになっている理由に、 発展会上国に営校がすくないということが あると思いす。 なので、学校を増やすことが大切だと 思います。 個人ができることは非常に限Sれ ていますが、またできなとがあります ず現状を知るとう分中学せし 思います。 な3-と確頼っています。

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