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英作文なんですけど、添削をお願いしたいです🙌🏻学校の先生にしてもらう時間がなくて明日テストなんです!お願いします🙇🏻‍♀️💭(字汚くてすいません)

次のTopic について、自分の意見とその理由を50 語程度の英文で書きなさい。 Topic :If you had an "Anywhere Door", where would you go? Topic 2: If you could travel in a time machine, when would you go to? Topic 3: Do you think more people will have pets in the future? 55 ☺ If I could travel in a time machine, I want to go to Heian Period. I have two reasons. First. I can watch Helankya. Sei Shenagon and Murasaki Shikibu. I like their essay. so I want to talk with them. For this reason. I want to go to Helan Period 54歳 0 If I had an Second. I want to meet "Anywhere Door", I want to go to Shizuoka. I have two reasons. First I want to eat Local gourment food like Fuzimiya-yakicabo, Second I want to watch the volley match of Hamamatushugakusha high school. But I haven't enough many to ge So I want to go to Shizuoka with anywhere door. ☺ I think more people will have pets in the future. It's because having And having pets make children's pets is good for education. emotions enriching. Also, pet helps relieve children's loneliness. So I think more people will have pete in the future Check! □自分の意見や考えを最初に述べているか。 □その理由を述べているか 理由に対する具体的な事例・事実を述べているか ( つなぎ言葉を効果的に使っているか。 □単語・文法の誤りはないか。 ) words

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英語 高校生

九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です!🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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英語 高校生

九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です!🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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