こんばんは英作文の添削をお願いします！ たくさんの人の意見が欲しいです！ 1、2枚目が下書きでこの文章と点数です 最初で満点をとりたいのでchat GPTを交えて文を書き直しました。不自然な文があったら教えてください！ 明日の午後提出です！

I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

(4)について This is why にしてしまいました。　 This is becauseというようなThis is whyの表現ではだめな理由を教えてください

(60分) Ⅰ 次の英文を読んで、下の設問 (1)~ (11) の語には注が付いています。 に答えなさい。 なお、 Food is fuel. When your body needs energy, you eat. When it doesn't you don't. It should be so simple when you think about it, but that's exactly the problem: us big smart humans can and do think about it, (, introduces all manner of problems and neuroses*. Have you noticed how you always have "room for dessert"? You might have just eaten the best part of a cow, or enough cheesy pasta to sink a gondola, but you can manage that fudge brownie or sundae. Why? How? If your stomach is full, how ice cream triple-scoop b) eating more even physically possible? It's largely because your brain makes an executive decision and decides that, no, you still have room. The sweetness of desserts is a palpable* reward (7)that the brain recognizes and wants so it overrules the stomach. C Exactly {c case is ③ is 4 the this why) uncertain. It may be that humans need quite a complex diet in order to remain in tip-top* condition, so rather than just relying on our basic metabolic systems to eat whatever is available, the brain steps in and tries to regulate our diet better. And this would be fine if that was all the brain does. But it doesn't. So it isn't. Learned associations are incredibly powerful when it comes ( d ) eating. You may be a big fan of something like, say, cake. You can be eating cake for years without any bother, then one day you eat some cake that makes you vomit. Could be some of the cream in it has gone sour; it might contain an ingredient you're allergic to; or (and here's the annoying one) it could be that something else entirely made you throw up shortly after eating cake. out of The disgust eating poiso g And it consider th The brain than food, it doesn't worryingl needlessl one of li shovelin the brai (注) (1) (2

google翻訳なんですが、1番最初の文章の｢過去最高｣というのは英語のどこに該当しますか？ 調べ物をしてるんですが、単語ずつ考えると｢過去最高｣と言ってない気がしたので気になって…

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レストランが使用している油という訳が their using oilだと取れると思いCを選んでしまったのですが、 oilが使う側になり意味が通らない理由を教えてほしいです。

92. Many restaurants in the state have been selling their ------- cooking oil for use as an alternative fuel source. (A) use (B) used (C) using (D) uses

添削お願いします🙇‍♀️

[東海大†] 根本的に (1) 英語と日本語とでは発音も文法も根本的に違います。 English is completely different from Japanese in pronouncing and gromer. (2)子犬と同じで, 元気で健康な子どもはじっと座ってはいられない。 cheerful and healthy children are libe Puppies completely 子犬 C puppy [中部大] じっと座っている in not being able to sit still. sit still (3) 耐えて待つことがどのくらいできるか, ずいぶん個人差がありそうだ。 耐えて待つ wait patiently [京都教育大*] I That how Seems (org some can wait patiently. Varies greatly from person to persou. (4) 動物と違って人間は考え, 話すことができる。 Humans, unlike animals, ican think and talk. (5) 医者と教師の似ているところは人を扱うところである。 Doctor, and teachers are alike in that They both work with people [学習院大 * ] [京都教育大 * ] 〜を扱う work with - / deal with /(→~を手伝う / 〜に助言する) help ~ / advise 77

至急です🙇‍♂️ 1.3kgの箱が上に35°引っ張られてる状況です。 箱が動き出す最小の摩擦力を見つける問題です。 解き方わかっていたつもりなんですが、全然解けなくて。 何な間違っているんでしょうか？ 答えと解き方を教えて欲しいです。

A mass m₁ = 1.3 kg is pulled in the direction [E35°U] by a string. The mass is at rest on a rough surface with the following friction coefficients: Ms = 0.6 μk = 0.4 8) If Ft = 4.00 N, what normal force acts on the mass? 9) If Ft = 4.00 N, what friction force acts on the mass? 10) If Ft = 6.00 N, what friction force acts on the mass? 11) If Ft = 6.00 N, what is the acceleration of the mass? 12) What is the smallest Ft that will get it to move? 10.44N 3,27 N 491N Omis 3350 Ft

この線部の式の意味がよくわからないので教えてください🙇‍♀️ 蝶々型の面積比の問題です。

216 総合演習問題 §7 図形の性質 ( 7 (12分20点) 〔1〕 太郎さんのクラスでは,数学の授業で次の問題が宿題として出された。 6円 ABの 4 形は 問題 △ABCにおいて, AB = 4, BC=2, CA =3とする。 辺 AB を 1:3 に内分する点を D, △ABCの内心をIとして, 直線 AI と辺BC の交 点をE, 直線DIと辺BCの交点をFとする。 このとき, Iは線分 DF をどのような比に分けるか。 (1) 内心についての記述として,次の①~③のうち、正しいものはア である。 ア |の解答群 ⑩ 三角形の3本の中線は1点で交わり, この点が内心である。 ① 三角形の三つの内角の二等分線は1点で交わり, この点が内心である。 三角形の3辺の垂直二等分線は1点で交わり, この点が内心である。 三角形の3頂点から対辺またはその延長に下ろした垂線は1点で交わ り,この点が内心である。 (2) 太郎さんは宿題について考え, 次のように解答した。 イ AI I 点Iは内心であるから, BE= であり, である。こ ウ EI オ のとき, BF 「カキ] EF FI ケ であるから, である。 DI ク コサ よって, 点Iは線分 DF を コサ: ケ の比に内分する。 (3)△ADIと△EFIの面積比は AEFI 「シス] = AADI センタ である。 (次ページに続く。) 3)

教えてほしいです

1 次の各英文で,空所に入れるのに最も適切なものを,それぞれ下の①~④のうちから一つずつ選びなさい。 (1) It is true that training helps improve performance, ( ) there must be some limit to how fast a person can run. 1 as ( SO ③ but because ) we didn't arrive on time, we were not allowed to enter the lecture hall. ①Because Although (3) Therefore However (3) Sunlight produces vitamin D in our bodies, which is necessary for good health. ( ), doctors tell us that spending too much time in the sun can result in skin cancer. ①Because 2 Thus 3 Suppose ④However (4) People have been using white vinegar as a natural alternative to chemical treatments, ( A ) it can lower blood sugar, kill bacteria, and help treat insect bites. ( B ), these benefits might come with some risk. Vinegar's acid can also damage your stomach, throat, and teeth. ①A: since B: Therefore 3 A: though B: However 2 A though 4 A: since B: Therefore B: However (5) We were planning to travel abroad this summer, ( A ) we ended up staying home ( B ) we were both too busy. A while B: so 2 A: but B: because (3) A: so B: though 4 A: since B: but

内容的には間違ってないか。文法は合っているか。の2点で英文を見てもらいたいです。全部で5文で、対話の穴埋め問題です。 ⤵︎ ⤵︎私が描きたかったことです。 1、電気を変えるのを手伝って欲しい 2、あなたの誕生日は2月25じゃなかった？(2月のスペルが間違ってます🙇‍♂️)... 続きを読む

II. 以下に指示された二人の対話を完成させるのに, 最もふさわしいと考えられる 英文を6語以上で書きなさい。 1) A: I'm thinking about changing the design of my bedroom. B: What were you thinking of doing? A: ( ) B: That will really brighten the atmosphere of the room. Let me know if you need a hand. : 2) A Hi, George. Happy birthday! B: Huh? What do you mean? It's not my birthday today. A: ( ) B: No, it's the 25th of March. But, that's okay. You can say it to me again next month. 3) A Did you hear that Tracey and Belinda decided to get married? B Yes, Belinda called me last night. It's wonderful news. We need to think about a present. A: ( ) B: That's a great idea; they both love entertaining at home. 4) A Why were you late this morning? B Well, there was no room to leave my bicycle at the station. A Really? Were all the spaces taken? B: Yes. I think people should be able to leave their bicycles anywhere. A: ( ) 5) A Don't you think John did really well in the debate contest? B: Yes, I was surprised. He is usually quite shy.

これの解き方教えてください

練習 2次方程式 x2+5x+m=0の2つの解が次の条件を満たすとき, 定 練1 16 数mの値と2つの解を,それぞれ求めよ。 (1)1つの解が他の解の4倍である。 (2) 2つの解の差が1である。 20 SON .0