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●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 TOPIC In some Japanese university programs, students must study abroad for one year. Do you think university students should study abroad? POINTS ● Cost Work ■Communication

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It is often said that restaurants, and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree this opinion? I agree the opinion that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they thinw I have two reasons to support this opinion. Firstly, It is bad for the enviroment two throw away the food. To throw away the food lead to global warming Secondly, reducing food waste is one of critical factors Developing contries have a lack of safe food If wealthy countries reduce the amount of food that they throw away, people in developing countries will happy. for these reasons f mentioned above, I believe that we should reduce the amount of food that the restraunts and supermaket's throw away,

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1885 4881 1880 1888 1801 1800 T Superbugs 1882 A British government study has shown that infections caused by $ drug-resistant bacteria-those that cannot be controlled by antibiotics-kill about 700,000 people worldwide annually. By 2050, this number could rise to over 10 million. "It's just a fact of evolution-the more antibiotics that are around, the more bacteria has been exposed to antibiotics, the more opportunity they have to acquire these resistances," explains Sarah Fortune, a professor of immunology and infectious diseases at Harvard T.H. Chan School of Public Health. Although these drug-resistant bacteria, known as "superbugs," are found around the world, India is considered to have the biggest problem because the factors that encourage superbugs are extensive and widespread in that country. TOOS

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When we think about lives filled with meaning, we often focus on people whose grand contributions benefited humanity. Abraham Lincoln, Martin Luther King, Jr., and 壮な Nelson Mandela surely felt they had a worthwhile life. However, how about us ordinary people? Many scholars agree that a subjectively meaningful existence often boils down to 主観的に (a) three factors: the feeling that one's life is coherent and “makes sense,” the possession of clear and satisfying long-term goals, and the belief that one's life matters in the grand 信念 scheme of things. Psychologists call these three things coherence, purpose, and (1) existential mattering. 存在に関する な However, we believe that there is another element to consider. Think about the first butterfly you stop to admire after a long winter, or imagine the scenery on top of a hill after a fresh hike. Sometimes existence delivers us small moments of beauty. When S people are open to appreciating such experiences, these moments may enhance how they =4 view their life. We call this element experiential appreciation. The phenomenon reflects 感謝価値評価 the feeling of a deep connection to events as they occur and the ability to extract value 抽出する. V from that link. It represents the detection of and admiration for life's inherent beauty. 発 (b) 本来備わっている。 We recently set out to better understand this form of appreciation in a series of studies that involved more than 3,000 participants. Across these studies, we were interested in whether experiential appreciation was related to a person's sense of meaning even when we accounted for the effects of the classic trio of coherence, purpose, and existential mattering. If so, experiential appreciation could be a unique (c) contributor to meaningfulness and not simply a product of these other variables. 変数の産物 As an initial test of our idea, during the early stages of the COVID pandemic, we had participants rate to what extent they agreed with different coping strategies to 対処方法 relieve their stress. We found that people who managed stress by focusing on their Avent appreciation for life's beauty also reported experiencing life as highly meaningful. In 感謝 - 1 - 有意義

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Kimura said that making an environment where everyone feels at ease speaking up is an important part of promoting diversity and inclusion in a company. Kimura, co-leader of the Women's Network, an internal working group that focuses on supporting female employees of the company, has been promoted to marketing manager, overseeing six *subordinates. She said that she has recently come to believe that systems and rules are not the most important (4) ) in achieving diversity and inclusion.POGY?

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Vocabulary Reinforcement A. Circle the letter of the word or phrase that best matches the word(s) in italics. 1. He was not going to pay until I told him that I paid last time. a. had to do with him b. kept track 2. The feeling of love is a very widespread human characteristic. a. universal b. regular c. mild 3. Many things contributed to the accident. b. factors a. aliens 4. That movie was really offensive. a. rude b. romantic 5. It really has nothing to do with you. a. would not be interesting for you b. would be difficult for you c. took for granted 6. Generally, dogs make great pets. a. As well as c. dots c. funny d. pointed out d. passionate d. gestures d. exciting c. is not related to you at all d. would be damaging for you d. As the name sugges b. To this day c. By and large 7. Although he did not say it directly, the tone of his voice suggested that he was angry. a. implied b. gestured c. pointed out d. announced 8. If you put money in that machine it will wash your clothes by itself. a. well b. quickly c. automatically d. carefully

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