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英作文の添削をお願いしたいです💦「公共の安全を改善するためにもっと多くのことをする必要がある」というテーマです。

disagre ;More needst0 be done to ieanprove public Satety. (a笑の安全を処差するためにもっと多くのことをする必要がある。 9ree or (素へ安全を上でる.○ 771ロジ-p' 書良したおかげで生活は便利にてたったが agtee. Katuで'ネットの育が描こだ。希者はみなス2ートフォンを持って 後にるかわかっ 17eい子体も多いo 3ども自身が人をことく2できずつる可能任をみる。 もっと同風の大人 段3きだ。 枚でどでも。 (よ きずのてなれる i agree this opinion that more needs to be done to improve publc safety. It is true that thanks to deve lope Technology, we can watch the movie by smartphone, and we can Communicute with worlduide pegple. However, more and more incteasing siber crime These days. alot of Bat, they often cannot 'usé 'safety it . Perfaps, they are Suffered from word in Internet. They may 13. 29 34. yoong people have a smartphon@. 43 53 60 68 write bad massage for their fnends . 76 I think more parents should realize this ploblem, and they teach their children. Not only parents teach their child ren but also their teachers should do. Far example, childven talk with their friend about Internet's A lot of adults teach children, children will use Interhet better. 94 03 rule. 110. 120 (21

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英語 高校生

この教科書のレベルはどのくらいですか教えください この教科書でどのくらいのレベルの大学まで対応できますか?

1 On 10 February 2009, at a height of about 800 kilometers above Siberia, an American satellite collided the first such height [háit] satellite [séetalait] collide(d) [kaláid(id)] with an old Russian satellite. It was collision [kaligan] collision in the history of space development. As a result, fragment(s) [fráegmant(s)) debris [dabri:] more than 1,000 fragments of debris were scattered into space. 2 The image above shows the vast amount of space debris in orbit around Earth. Approximately 22,000 vast [váest] orbit [5:rbat] approximately [aprá:ksamatli) objects larger than 10 centimeters across are floating around Earth. Of these, about 16,000 are from known 10 considering [kansidarig) artificial [a:rtafijal] currently [ks:rantli] operation [a:paréifon] Considering that there are only about 1,000 artificial satellites currently in operation, the amount of Sources. space debris is astonishing. This space debris is not only due to the collision of satellites. For example, when rockets reach space, they s 15 leave behind surplus engines and fuel tanks. These objects remain in orbit as space debris. In addition, surplus s5:rplas] there are tools that astronauts have dropped while tool(s) [t:l(z)) astronaut(s) [astrand:t(s) aluminum [ala:manom per|par] working outside. Even a one-centimeter aluminum ball. when orbiting at a speed of around 10 kilometers per 0 bullet [bálat] second, is far more powerful than a bullet from a gun. gun [gán]

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