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2015年度 英語 13 They should not have to lose their livelihoods. Secondlv. although I agree 次の英文は、英語のディベートの授業での対話です。この対話を読み,下の問い に答えなさい。 with Keiko that climate change is a serious problem, I think air travel is a much less damaging source of carbon pollution than, for example, burnimg MR. ROBERTS: Good morning, everybody. Today we have the first of our Coal. We should address these more serious causes first. Finally, the most student debates. The topic this morning is air travel, and the argument is. 法 important reason is the issue of freedom. People in a democracy expect the “Domestic air travel in Japan should be discouraged." Keiko will first argue right to travel as they wish. It has made our lives more convenient and in favor of the proposal and Junko will speak against. Over to you, Keiko. created more opportunities for everyone. We should not reduce our quality of life. Thank you for listening. KEIKO: Good morning, everybody. I am going to speak today in favor of the proposal. Limitless air travel inside Japan is a luxury that we can no longer MR. ROBERTS: Thank you to our two speakers. Now, are there any afford. The main reason is that it is extremely damaging to the questions from the audience? environment. The carbon gases produced by aircraft are very high and are a 頭人 proven cause of global warming. Therefore, we should try and reduce air 問1 次の(1)~(5)の文について, 本文の内容と一致するものには○.一致しないも travel as much as possible to protect the environment, not only for Japan but のには×を,それぞれ解答欄に記入しなさい。 also for the whole world. Secondly, air travel is actually unnecessary within the four islands of Japan. Now, while I appreciate that travel to Okinawa is (1) Keiko's main reason for opposing domestic air travel is the damage it a different case, there are efficient train services throughout Japan that are causes to the environment. h fast and environmentally friendly. These make an excellent alternative to air (2) Keiko thinks that air travel is cheap and efficient. flights, so there is really no need to use airplanes in most cases. Finally, (3) Keiko recommends that people travel between Okinawa and mainland there is an economic reason. Air travel is expensive for passengers because Japan by ship. the price of fuel keeps increasing, but airline companies are still struggling (4) Junko thinks that climate change is not an important problem. to make profits. Moreover, regional airports often cannot attract enough (5) Junko thinks that a lot of jobs will be lost if air travel is reduced. customers, and, overall, the industry is not cost-effective, It's time to admit that air travel is too damaging and expensive to be sustainable. Thank you. 問2 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 Which of the two speakers do you more agree with? Give at least one JUNKO: Thank you, Keiko. I am going to disagree with the proposal for three reason for your answer. (解答欄:13.8cm×4行) reasons. Firstly, I think there is a strong economic case to support flying. Many jobs depend on air travel, not just the pilots and cabin staff, but also people who work in airports or for airlines, or who rely on fast transport.

見辛かったらすみませんが、問2の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです🤲

2015年度 英語 13 They should not have to lose their livelihoods. Secondlv. although I agree 次の英文は、英語のディベートの授業での対話です。この対話を読み,下の問い に答えなさい。 with Keiko that climate change is a serious problem, I think air travel is a much less damaging source of carbon pollution than, for example, burnimg MR. ROBERTS: Good morning, everybody. Today we have the first of our Coal. We should address these more serious causes first. Finally, the most student debates. The topic this morning is air travel, and the argument is. 法 important reason is the issue of freedom. People in a democracy expect the “Domestic air travel in Japan should be discouraged." Keiko will first argue right to travel as they wish. It has made our lives more convenient and in favor of the proposal and Junko will speak against. Over to you, Keiko. created more opportunities for everyone. We should not reduce our quality of life. Thank you for listening. KEIKO: Good morning, everybody. I am going to speak today in favor of the proposal. Limitless air travel inside Japan is a luxury that we can no longer MR. ROBERTS: Thank you to our two speakers. Now, are there any afford. The main reason is that it is extremely damaging to the questions from the audience? environment. The carbon gases produced by aircraft are very high and are a 頭人 proven cause of global warming. Therefore, we should try and reduce air 問1 次の(1)~(5)の文について, 本文の内容と一致するものには○.一致しないも travel as much as possible to protect the environment, not only for Japan but のには×を,それぞれ解答欄に記入しなさい。 also for the whole world. Secondly, air travel is actually unnecessary within the four islands of Japan. Now, while I appreciate that travel to Okinawa is (1) Keiko's main reason for opposing domestic air travel is the damage it a different case, there are efficient train services throughout Japan that are causes to the environment. h fast and environmentally friendly. These make an excellent alternative to air (2) Keiko thinks that air travel is cheap and efficient. flights, so there is really no need to use airplanes in most cases. Finally, (3) Keiko recommends that people travel between Okinawa and mainland there is an economic reason. Air travel is expensive for passengers because Japan by ship. the price of fuel keeps increasing, but airline companies are still struggling (4) Junko thinks that climate change is not an important problem. to make profits. Moreover, regional airports often cannot attract enough (5) Junko thinks that a lot of jobs will be lost if air travel is reduced. customers, and, overall, the industry is not cost-effective, It's time to admit that air travel is too damaging and expensive to be sustainable. Thank you. 問2 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 Which of the two speakers do you more agree with? Give at least one JUNKO: Thank you, Keiko. I am going to disagree with the proposal for three reason for your answer. (解答欄:13.8cm×4行) reasons. Firstly, I think there is a strong economic case to support flying. Many jobs depend on air travel, not just the pilots and cabin staff, but also people who work in airports or for airlines, or who rely on fast transport.

空欄に、下のワードリストの単語を入れる問題なのですが、合っていますか？よろしくお願いいたします。

Using Key Words Correctly olnl paittea Write the missing words in the short essay below by choosing a word from the WORD LIST below. Use your glossary if necessary. THE IMPORTANCE OF TREES Trees are as important to humans as food and 1e, waTer. Trees clean the air of toxic chemicals such as carbon ? Ci dioxide and otherpollutants. They also produce about 30% of the oxygen on_carth The trees lining city streets can save up to 50% on air-conditioning なる in the summer and control 4. notse pollutioní. Forests hold soil in place and keep water from running off the land. Trees provide shelter, food, recreation, beauty, and homes for birds, insects, and other ani- mals. We use the 5 t Wo0d from trees in many ways, from paper to houses. We could not exist if there were no é d. Trees. Sadly, we are destroying them faster than they can grow. Rainforests, which are vital to the earth's health, are decreasing yearly. Many birds and animals have become 7extinct due to tree loss. Climate change has badly affected the trees which give us coffee and 8_0. Co coa beans. In Japan, about 60% of the 9k.land is mountain forests; however, Japan is one of the biggest importers of wood in the world. Seventy percent of Japan's building materials come from overseas. Eighty percent of Ja- pan's chopsticks are 10 Q. Imporled It is estimated that 20 percent of Japan's imported timber comes from illegally logged trees, mainly in Southeast 11 h. Asta. 6 We need to become more aware of the threat to the world's trees and use wood resources wisely. One good thing we can do is this: 12_f.plant a tree. WORD LIST ji earth k. land 痛入されま A. imiBorted b. noise C. dioxide g. cocoa d. trees K. Asia . plant e. water 1.extinct fwood 絶盛した HEALTHTALK LESSON 4

最後のマーカーした部分の右にthatを使う理由を教えてください！

On a sunny day in September 1991, a couple hiking They thought the body might be one of the missing 1 The 死がい " the Alps canteross'a corpse in the melting: かもしれない。 つス 出くわす。 The co) 15 perfeq to be New Words climbers who are lost every year in the mountains They never imagined how important their discovery would be. After a local archéólogist looked clósely the corpse, it was determined to be prehistoric. When hike [háik] Alps [elps] it. corpse [k3:rps] 角児メ前の。 at dea コissing [misin] the body tissue, the plants on the corpse, and the 細胞の組織 be mber [kláimar] things that were around the corpse were analyzed 20 2overy ivari] by using radiocarbon dating, it turned out to be that of とてなる っlogist dadzist] a man who had died 5,300 years ago in the Neoithic Age. He came to be called “the Iceman."

以下の写真はソフィー・ハウの｢世界をより良くするための教訓｣という文章の一部なのですが、オレンジで線を引いた部分をどのように訳せば良いか分からないため、教えてください。 hold someone to accountで｢～に責任を問う｣ということから、｢そのゴールは私によ... 続きを読む

Wales is a small but progressive country, the only country in the world to have legislated to protect the interests of future generations, the only country to have appointed someone independent to oversee this. Across the world, our systems of government, of politics, of economics have tended to act in the short term. And often, the decisions that are taken discount the interests of future generations and the planet. But in Wales, we're trying to change that by passing a law which requires not just our government but all of our main public institutions to demonstrate how they're acting for the long-term and how the decisions they take don't harm the interests of those yet to be born. And so as a mum of five and the world's only future generations commissioner, I want to share with you today some of the lessons we've learned about how we're trying to leave the world better than we found it. First of all, you must involve people in setting long-term goals. Ask them: What's the Wales or the world you want to leave behind to your children and your grandchildren? We held a national conversation -- the Wales We Want -- and people told us, "We want a low- carbon economy. We want you to help us keep people well rather than just treat them when they're ill. We want connected communities and a more equal Wales." And our government legislated to set seven national well-being goals to achieve that. Each institution has to demonstrate how they're meeting those goals, and they're held to account by me. You have to focus on the interconnections between different aspects of well-being. You need to talk often about why it's just as important to public health as it is to the environment to tackle high levels of air pollution, why diversity in the workforce is just as important to economic prosperity as it is to addressing inequality. Our institutions have a legal duty to act beyond their immediate remit to recognize those connections, work with unusual suspects. And so we're seeing hospitals in Wales working with the National Botanic Gardens to create spaces for nature on their sites. We're seeing offices in our environmental agency helping to find solutions to tackle childhood

この問題の有効数字1 atmの1桁ですか？それとも0.285 torrの3桁ですか？初歩的な事ですみません💦 ちなみに答えは(有効数字を考えずに)、166.19 torrとなりました。

Three of the primary components of air are carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and oxygen. In a sample containing a mixture of only these gases at exactly 1 atm, the partial pressures of carbon dioxide and nitrogen are given as P P, 『N2 What is the pārtial pressure of oxygen? 0.285 torr and = 593.525 torr. CO2 e 8S

【英語ですみません🙇‍♂️】9,10,11,12で、どれがorganized, reduced なのか教えていただきたいです🙏 6,7,8は分かったのですが、下はよく理解できませんでした説明お願いします。。

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