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Grade Pre-2 5 ライティング あなたは、外国人の知り合いから以下の QUESTION をされました。 QUESTION について,あなたの意見とその理由を2つ英文で書きなさい。 語数の目安は50語~60語です。 解答は、解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお, 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が QUESTION に対応していないと判断された場合は、0点と採点されることが あります。QUESTION をよく読んでから答えてください。 QUESTION Do you think it is a good idea for people to have a car? Tes I do. I have two reason5. First, It S usefall for us プo go 10 0byuhere. fw example, aupert, suparmalas and on. Seconds Jo on. Secend, we can 20 ael with cor fomily we can have time fomil, Thas I thik it is qped idea tor people to have a cody. 30 with our d ン so 13

英文2段落目3文目のfor fairy talesのforは使ってという意味で使われているんでしょうか。、？ また、第4段落5文目が上手く訳せません、、、 これは過去完了でしょうか？？それとも、彼女は持っていた、1番初めのwrittenとdrawnをみたいにただの過去形で... 続きを読む

Your group is preparing a poster presentation entitled "The Woman Who 第5問(配点 15) c 15e uW y bos AS neighb A (20d dos Tot nongo in b s saoodt time a Wanti Created Peter Rabbit "using information from the magazine article below nob land her e Ved Pig ト popular character, Peter Rabbit. She brought her characters to life in b witty stories with finely detailed watercolors. a Br herit The daughter of wealthy parents, Helen Beatrix Potter was born on July 28, 1866 in South Kensington, London. She was educated at home and developed a love of literature and art. She used to practice her craft bv making illustrations for fairy tales like Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty. Also drawn to nature, she and her younger brother Walter kept many pets mice, rabbits, even bats and a hedgehog and she loved her family's long holidays in the Scottish countryside and the Lake District, a mountainous area in northwest England. in 19 The As a child and teenager, Potter made great sketches of her pets, as well as of trees and plants. She also kept a diary in which she recorded her Qpinions about cultural and political ideas and events. She wrote in a secret bs nsgst Peri 1866- Code that was not broken until fifteen years after her death. In the 1890s, Potter began selling her drawings.Potter's work was used for Christmas and New Year cards and an illustration of poetry. She was pleased by this success and decided to publish her own illustrated stories for children. In 1901, after the manuscript. was rejected by several publishers, she self-published her first book, The Tale of Peter Rabbit, She had first written and drawn a version of the story in a letter to the. sick child of her former private teacher.、The child was so delighted with it that Potter felt other children would be, too. She was right. The story of naughty Peter, who always gets into trouble because he does not follow his sisters' example and obey his mother's rules, was very popular. 、In 1902, the publisher Frederick Warne & Company printed a commercial edition, and it went on to become one of the most famous children's books of all time 1 Over the next twenty years, Potter wrote and illustrated twenty-two more books with that publisher, her early_observations of the animals and plants of her childhood often making their way into the stories. Potter's The Tale of Mrs. Tiggy-Winkle, published in 1905, for example, includes - 22 -

【英検準1級英作文】 英検準1級の英作文を添削して頂きたいです。自分でも添削してみましたが、分からない部分がいくつかあります。特に、黄色のマーカーを引いた部分の英語の使い方が合っているか教えて頂きたいです。また、他にも間違えがあれば教えて下さい。加えて、英検準1級に受かった... 続きを読む

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: The number of foreign workers in Japan will increase in the future =have a qreater need 高館 ●Aging society Unpopular jobs POINTS age…年を取る Unemployed Japanese DIncrease in tensions 繁張

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(レポート課題) 英文をよみ、下の問いに答えなさい。 Color can affect human mood. We have known this for a long time. Ancient Egyptians and Chinese used different colors to help sick people. No one really knows if it worked or not. But we can see today that people still think that the effect of color is important. The simplest example is the way people choose colors for their rooms. Another example is the color choice for company products. We also consider the color of clothes very carefully when we decide what to buy. Many people believe that red has a high energy level. They feel that it is connected to speed, danger, excitement, and passion. It is a good choice for a fast car, but not s0 good for a doctor's office. In that kind of place, a soft blue is thought to be better. Blue is a color that seems to help people to feel calm. In contrast to this, yellow creates feelings of happiness and cheer, and it is often used in kitchens 問 問 and bathrooms But nothing is really quite so simple. Research shows that some people get angry 問 more quicky in a yellow room. Babies seem to cry more, too. And even a soft blue, which is usually relaxing, can also make some people have sad feeling. Finally, it is important to remember that the effects of color on human mood don't alwayslast along time. In fact, the effect is usually relatively short. For example, a soft blue room may help people feel calm at first, but the effect disappears fairly soon. 問1 第2、第3段落の筆者の言いたいこと (筆者の主張) は何か。 簡潔に要約しなさい。 第1段落 色は人間の気持ちに影響を及ぼすことがある 第2段落/( 第3段落 /(名人種に対する

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英文4段落目3文目のno paintを塗られていないとなくしてしまいました、塗られていないだとしたらno paintedでしょうか？？ またno paintは完全否定なんでしょうか、、？？

第4問 次の問い(A· B)に答えよ。 (配点 33) will shrink considerably over time.、This shrinkage is caused by moisture not change size too much. But wood from a tree that has just been cut down (water) within the wood escaping into the atmosphere. The drying process of Wood used in the construction of homes must be stable. That is, it must A 次の文章と図およびグラフを読み,下の問い(問1~3)に対する答えとして 2012年度 本試験 15 roo に入れるのに最も適当なものを,それぞれ下の①~④のうち 37 35 fnnu yileub から一つずつ選べ。 19unolli bomisa odt bas boow boi basg es 9120m lo . known as “seasoning. There are actually two ways to season wood. r is to allow the natural drying process to occur. The other is to put it . cnecial oven called a kiln. Kiln drying is much faster than the natural method. During the seasoning process, water is removed from the wood until the moisture content of the wood is approximately equal to the humidity of the air around it. These changes in size due to shrinkage are not uniform because changes depend on the kinds of trees, the way trees are cut, and the surrounding conditions. It is also important to note that even after seasoning, there will always be Some small changes in size due to changes in the humidity of the surrounding air. For example, last year, I used a 230 mm wide piece of eastern white pine WOod to makea cabinet door. It changed in width across the grain (Figure 1), Shrinking by 2 mm from the original in the winter and expanding by 3 mm Ine moisture content of wood changes according to the seasons even niw= from the original in the summer. um volbsoH 8. -409

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eight times greater in 2018 than in 2014 according to one survey. Researchers say this is good news. They claim that e-bikes may have a positive effect on people's health and the environment. One major advantage of e-bikes is that older people and those who do not exercise regularly can cycle. This makes it easier for them to commute to work by bike, which is better for the environment than traveling by car. ( 22 ), e-bikes allow more people to cycle as a hobby. People who could not ride along rough roads or up mountains, for example, can now do so. Some cycling experts, however, point out problems with the increased use of e-bikes. For one, riders of e-bikes are more likely to be involved in accidents. In response, some people want speed limits to be lowered and other measures to increase safety, such as bike paths. Most importantly, experts say riders of both e-bikes and regular bikes should be careful. It does not matter if a bike has a motor or not. The important thing is to enjoy cycling ( 23 ). (21) 1 reducing electricity use 2 causing new problems 3 growing in popularity 4 improving the environment (22) 1 What i1s more 2 Therefore 3 By contrast 4 Despite this

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16 本 単A1OS 第4問 次の問い(A B) に答えよ。(配点35) bahaっ t rmed about Clyelho nw eっもndhaらgi oke A 次の文章はある報告書の一部である。この文章とグラフを読み,下の問い(間 に入れるのに最も適当なものを,それぞれ下の from sticki 28umel tio Sw 1~4)の 35 38 g Direeり o d行dde R cause 0~Oのうちから一つずつ選べ。 re sonich lates t0 Engiish. (here remane 問1 97 Magnet and Sticky: A Study on State-to-State Migration in the US g Seli5 alvu bue ainobute Tuo ToY risnnoijesup Some people live their whole lives near their places of birth, while others ale97 io 0 ge 10 elsog 91u11 brts SO bue move elsewhere. A、study conducted by the Pew Research Center looked into the state-to-state moving patterns of a iencans. T he study examined each Frefichand Spamssh state to determine how many of their adult citizens have moved there from ld e nostusefui bec Chna is a fasteOwing ecoons States with high percentages of these residents are called Chimese beeause Chioa has the greatest *magnet" states in the report. \The study also investigated what percent of other states. u beusefmte pegol adults born in each state are still living there. States high in these numbers uronean are called ticky) states. The study found that some states were both magnet and sticky, while others were neither. \There were also states that were only magnet or. only sticky. Figures 1 and 2 show how selected states rank on magnet and sticky scales, respectively. Eloridd' is a good example of a state that ranks high on both. \ Seventy percent of its current adult population was born in another state; at the same time, 66% of adults born in Florida are still living there. On the other hand, West Virginia is neither magnet (only 27%) nor, particularly sticky(49%). In other words, it has few newcomers, and relatively few West Virginians stay there. Michigan is a typical example of a state which is highly sticky, but very low magnet. In contrast, Alaska, which ranks near the top of ss the magnet scale, is the least sticky of all states. g oareon 9 at Three other extreme examples also appear in Figures 1 and 2. The first is Nevada) where the high proportion of adult residents born out of state makes this state America's top magnet. \(New York) is at the opposite end of the magnet scale, even though it is attractive to immigrants from other nations. The third extreme example is Texas, at the opposite end of the sticky scale 004

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Gither don't exist(orn often are not followed. As a result, sare levels of noise from sewing machines. Moreoyer, factory buildings are often unsafe, and horrible 31 happen. For example, the whole world was shocked in 2012 when a fre broke out t a clothing factory in Dhaka, Bangladesh, that killed117 people and injured 200. 1 realize some experts, like the economist David Schneider, say hat outsourcing beneits local Conomies by providing jobs at higber wages than local workers can make by working in agriculture, in develeping countries often( ア、Y. These