英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・construction costs ・effect on local people ・spending by visitors ・the environment

Q, is it a good idea that governments to build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. A,lagree with the idea that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. This will be an opportunity to save money in order to deal with accidents and keep their population. Firstly, if local governments do not build tourist sites, the government can save a lot of money because construction costs are very expensive. Thus the governments can use the money in order to treat troubles such as epidemics or disasters. Moreover, if the governments construct tourist sites, more and more tourists visit the local regions. Thus, the number of people who want to live there quietly increases. For these reasons, I do not think it necessary that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums.

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PRE 以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、これ。 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80 語~100 語です。 ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお、解営 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。TOPIC の内容 をよく読んでから答えてください。 ライティング BRIN 4 TOPIC Today, some young people do not want to start working for large companies. Do you think the number of these people will increase in the future? POINTS Incomeer po ● Opportunity Use for the elecre ickers wou onle S ncjce nadnon TGG0 GIG Stress 2ovammen 020ONSUIDE 171,201

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●記入上の注意(記述形式) 指示事項を守り,文字は,はっきりと分かりやすく書いてください。 太枠に囲まれた部分のみが採点の対象です。 4 ライティング解答欄 I donf think That sone pong peaple who do not want To Start iworking for |ange comupanies will inchease iん fature. The tirst reason is that we have a lot ot oppoitunity to gtow up ny.cetfin lange bonmpanies. The secoud reason is thet the income the is stable than shs-t companies more For these heesous that I explained above Some Voung pe0ple who do net want to start iwotking tor large companles wl hot ihchea se m thé tatere 1 have Jeay opiaion. Tuo To support heasous 1152.

英検準1級ライティングです。 添削、アドバイス等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・accidents ・crime ・food ・technology

Q, more needs to be done to improve public safety? A,l agree with the idea that we should do a lot to improve public safety. I have two reasons. The First reason is that the number of criminals is increasing in the last few years. That is because these days, polices are so lazy that they tend to overlook the trivial troubles of criminals. Thus, governments should force lazy polices to work harder. The second reason is that more and more car accidents are happening recently. That is because some people who drink or are not attentive drive cars. Thus, we should introduce car services to improve public safety more rapidly. For these reasons, I think it necessary that more needs should do a lot to improve public safety.

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Masters of the Desert “Bedouin” is a name given to some of the people who live in North Africa and the Middle East. Unlike most people, many Bedouins do not ( 24 Instead, they are nomads, which means that they are always moving about. They walk around the hot deserts of countries like Egypt and Israel, leading their camels and sheep to gras and water. Life in the desert is not easy, but over thousands of years, Bedouins have developed unique skills to help them survive. Some people estimate that there are around 20 million Bedouins in the world today. However, ( 25 ). Because many of them are traveling, it is impossible to count them all. In recent years, however, many Bedouins have given up their traditional way of life. This is because the amount of land controlled by governments has increased, which has made it harder for the Bedouins to travel freely. Some of them now live in urban areas and have regular jobs, such as driving taxis and working in restaurants. Some Bedouins have found work with the Israeli army as trackers. A tracker is a person who follows people by using signs left on the ground, such as the marks left by feet or tires. Trackers must know their environment well and be quick to notice anything unusual. ( 26 ), with their desert survival skills, Bedouins are excellent trackers. About 1,600 of them are now serving in the Israeli army, and their ability to notice dangers along Israel's borders is helping to protect the countily. 1 sleep lying down 2 live in one place 3 eat meat or fish 4 use paper money 1 their exact numbers are unknown 2 there were many more in the past 3 the groups have no government 4 they all meet once every year 1 Naturally 2 Occasionally 3 Secondly 4 Equally

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● POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし,これら以外の観点か 4 以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ら理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Today, many people enjoy jogging before or after work. Do you think the number of such joggers will increase in the future? POINTS ● Health ● Sociality ● Accident odsdafly) Sars ethemelale offot odh to bi

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4 以下のTOPICについて、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただ し、これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC Today in Japan, there are few restaurants where pets are allowed to Come in. Do you think more restaurants should allow pets in the future? POINTS sanitation * allergy danger 1 do not think that more restaurants should allow pets in the future. I have two reasons. hirst, most most of the people have allergy of dogs or cots. Ifthey eat lunch with petた, they will oppear allergic symptoms. Second, most pets have a lot of vorious disease. 9ood Sanitation ond cam be give people disease. The number of. people who suffer from diseose may increase in These for reasons, I think that "Can H is not of animal the future it stores allow pets pets should not enter the restauronts . Come in . 興疑問題の 模擬問題

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TOPIC These days, some people read e-books instead of think the nunmber of people who read e-books will increase in the paper books. Do you future? POINTS - weight space * functions

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