英検2級のライティングです。間違いやアドバイスがあればお願いします。採点もできればして欲しいです。

I think that it is importunt to set clar gouls when starting. new activities I have two The first reason is that reasons. First, it is effective to try new activities; for us. For example, if we want to give up New activities. We can continuex that. The scand reason is that. It is very help to decide planning. direction for effort. As a result. I'm able to know way to achive my goal. Therefore I agree with that it is important to set clear goals when starting new activities.

どなたか添削お願いしたいです🙇‍♀️🙇‍

new ライティング ●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、これら! ●以下の TOPIC について、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は80語 ~100語です。 解答は、解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ していると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容 TOPIC をよく読んでから答えてください。 Some people say that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS Cleanliness ●Lifestyles ●Neighbors jex/que already, sea yunotomo iggs sgual to redmon or gaanooni ya E galloyon allhbinni di rovtie ban blog aininos indt ih arianaiv

英検2級の要約とライティングの添削をお願いしたいです🙇‍♀️すごく字が読みにくいと思うんですが よろしくお願いします💦

以下の英文を読んで,その内容を英語で要約し、解答欄に記入しなさい。 ●語数の目安は45語~55語です。 解答は,解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。なお, 解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。 英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 University students often plan for their future careers by attending job fairs or searching online for information about different kinds of work opportunities. There are other ways, too. Some of them choose to join short-term work programs at companies called internships. These have some good points. Students will be able to know more about companies they are interested in, such as what kind of jobs there are and what kind of people are working there. Also, internships allow students to get to know other students. These students can encourage each other both during and after the internship. On the other hand, if students choose to join very short internships, they may not be able to understand the job they are doing before the internships end. Also, students who take part in internships may find it difficult to do well in their studies. University students have their future careers. They many things about things about companies and are interested a enable students to find chances to join interships for know other students who in those too. However, they can not understand the job and they confuse their way to study if they join internships only a few days.

格調高い文章とは、具体的にどのようなものですか。何を基準に決めてるんですか

英検2級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 問題は写真に書いてあります。 文法、単語のスペルミスなどを重点的に見て 頂きたいです。 よろしくお願いします。

Thanks to improvements in information technogy. It is possible to work outside the office. Do you think the number ol. people doing so will increase in the future! I think that the number of people doing so will Increase in the future. I have two reasons why I think so. First of all, lit allows us to use thime fully and the number of people will increase fully time. 1 secand, If it is possible to work outside, we will going to office. I As a result, we are able to spend time with family and friends. Because of these reasons. more and more people doing so will in the future. 単

英検二級の答案です。添削お願いします。また、あと20字程度語数が足りないのですが何を付け足せばいいでしょうか。

reducing lled TOPIC ats that are Some people say that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. Do you agree with this opinion? ¿2o5 Om So

英検一級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 Should the Japanese government encourage more immigration? というトピックで書きました。よろしくお願いします。

The Japanese government should encourage more immigration Problems such as lack of diversity, Japanese companies retreating from the world declining birth rate 39 there is a because market, and aging population with a can be solved by increasing immigration. Japan, although it is one of the advanced countries, lack of diversity. Except of big cities like Tokyo, there are only few foreigners. I think this is a set back to Japan while other countries are stepping foward by changing its own system, Japan is refusing to make a change to its old style, and I believe this is because Japan doesn't have abundant. perspectives. foreign countries to. By encouraging more immigration, they can provide many different views and stimulate Jahanese people. as of what does other countries. a image Japanese companies are retreating from the world market. Many Companies in Japan are producing overeng ineered expensive products that only targets Japanese customers and it is losing its power in other countries : If Japan accepts more immigrants Japanese companies. will be able to get detailed regire to their product and stay in the world market. Aging population and a declining birth rate is a huge problem in Japan right now. Because of it, companies are losing workers and young people will have to saffer with a lot of taxes in the future. Encouraging immigration can increase population and solve. these problems more By encouraging more immigrations, many problems that Japan is facing can be solved.

英検準1級のライティングについて質問です！！ POINTSが4つ与えられ、その中から2つを選ぶと 書かれていますが、POINTSの中から使っていいキーワードは 2つだけということですか？それとも、2つ以上使っても減点されなのでしょうか？ どなたか知っている方がいたら教えてく... 続きを読む

高校の課題で2000文字以内の作文を書かなければいけないのですが、なかなか作文が進まず… 農業経営などいいお題？があったりしたら教えてください！

の発表分野(下記の3つの分野にテーマが含まれていなければならない) ※2.3年生は昨年までの学校農業クラブ活動や専門科目の学習から得た経験を それぞれの分野に照らし合わせて、内容を意識して自分の発表はどの分野になる か考えること 分野:I類(生産 流通経営) 1.農業生物の育成や生産性向上に関する意見 2.農業生産物の流通や消費に関する意見 3.農業経営や経済活動に関する意見 具体的な発表内容例 1)栽培·飼育に関する意見 2)肥料や薬剤に関する意見 3)農業生産物の流通や保全 管理に関する意見 4)農業経済· 経営に関する意見

英検のライティングです！ どなたか添削お願いします…！！🙇🏻‍♀️

語数の目安は80語~100語です。 解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお, 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて。 いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea? POINTS Safety The environmment Tourism