英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。 Points Health Male-female equality Salaries Work-life balance

Date No Topic Topic: Do componies need to improve the way they treat their wates? | think Companies need to impreve the way they treat their workers. - I have twe reasens to support my opinion in termns of health and Salaries. Fist. Companies shauld adeiisate their workers' health. 2 If workers have an illnes and canmot wack esily, a lot. of. (2 Companies wald be Coniesed to manage. Companies need to do 経営こど?) health check for workne health. It is good for (o Companies and I Workers to check halth. I think this is an adrontage each other. 12 Second, Cormpanies have to raise salaries, Some Workers de not lc be paid salaries for extra tasks, They will be very ticed and ? have an illes, It is not good for them fo work hard. 12 For these reasons, Companies have (mprove the wey they treat their workers.

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Date No. Topic: Agre or disage : Lite in Japan is becoming more strertal I dsagee with the idea that lüfe in Japan is becaming more strest.l. I have two rensons to support my opinion in terms of househald applianes and health Firt, hausehold appliances are becaming more usetul so Our lives will be convenient. for erample, there is an auto cleaner. We do not have to clean aurselves because auo cleaners can clean theicelves. Thanks to them, we can have free time a to rest. 2 Secnd hedty focd is increosing these doys, s0 the nunber of peple have an illnes decrease. If we have an illness, we will not die e medical Technelogy is better than pact. It is goad for us to live Commericanly. becans 3 For these resons, life in Japan is not becoming. more stresstal.

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Date No. Topic: Do you to fural areas after retirement? think that it is beneticial to move from urban cities I de not think it is beneficial to move from urban cities p nural areas affer retirement. I have two reasorns to support my opinion in terms of corvenience and isolation. Fist, urben Life is more Convenient than raral Life. a For example, we can buy things what we want immediately (0 because there are. many stores near our house, Also. there are. 17 a lot of trains lines, so wrban plople are enable to (テ go eaythae Second. urban ife is hot iselation, If we live rural areas, 1 we wnuld not be saved by other pegple when a catastoraphy Occers, I think Some buildings built at urban area are. satey (1 than rural area's brilding. For these reasons, I think moving fom urban cities to rural areas is pot beneficial. 126words Ch

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Date No. Topic: Agree or diogre. Pegle will depend more on self- driing.cars in the future. I disagree with the idea that pesple will depand more on self- driving cars in the future, I have two reasons to support 9 my opinion in terims of unespectod poblems and Cost. Fist. there may be some unexpected problems when we are driving 運転中(2) I think that self- diving cars are not pertect, a self-driing car. so few accidents, at leost, will happen. We can not say a り。 Safe. Aren Second, self- deiving cars Cost is higher than ordinary cars. self-driving cars are Self-dhiving cars need high quality technelogy. Materials are. differat trem ordinary cars' materials. Alse. it is very diffialt Le to make self- driving cars, 50 they costs highly, People cannit co buy them easily. For these reasons,Ithink people will not depend more on self deiviog le と Cars in the futare.

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英検準1級の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです。よろしくお願いします。 Points Cars Shopping bags Trash Environmental friendly applicants

Date No. pci Agee or disogiee: Mony poaple in Japan are becming more Concerned about the 'envirenment H agre with the idea that mony peaple in Japan are beoming more concerned about the envirenment. L have two reasans to suport my opinion Fist, gbbal wenming is a big pobleonm thee doys. for eremple. a lat_ of cars emit dioxide into the air. Dioxide is ane caMse of global warming, so we should use eoo rindly cNS such ag electric cor and hy dregen cor to decrese dioxide. Seiond. elastic trash is thran away in the sea Mony Sea arimal's hurt due to plastic Trash Japanase govern mart decided thet plastic bag is imporsed fee to decrease plastic troh and clean the sea. Then, the number of penple increse usinga shopping bags. For these resans, more Japanere peple will become more Cancened abart the envinnmert.

英検準1級の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです。 Points Time management Flexibility Cost Communication

No. Topic: Agree or dingre.' The nmber of peaple who chosse to Work decade Caming remotely will increase in the I agree with the idea that the mumber of peaple who chose to work remotely will increase in the coming decade. I have two resons fo supput my opinicon in terms of tine management and commrunication. Fisst, people can reduce their time of commate Some people Spend a lot al time tor compmute、 t is good for thern to Work reoutely They wauld not have to in the fatune. The nunber of workplace would decrese. ge theic work ploce. Second, it is easy to Communicate each other peaple. Worbers who hove a Computer can talk with ather workers when meeting in persen is very difficat.Working remotly gerson will be very conuerient. For these reasons. I think many people will choose to work remotely in the coming decade.

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Date No. Topic: Da you think that unhedthy fod and drink should be tared at a higher rate than healthy fod? (20- 150vods) agre with the idea that wnheathy food and drink shauld be taxed at a higher rate than healthy food. I have two reasons to support my opineh. Ficst, the number ot peaptle that have an illnes will deerease. Many Jopenese peaple eat wabealitby foad such as fast fed (ロ se patients incease becasse of haring unheaty food. Theretore, it is god for us to decrese oppotuniy of haring the food Second, we can use tax for inventing healthy food. Vnhealthy fod is sold at a lot of super market. a I hink healty fod shadd be insteaded of unhealty fod l0 Heathy food will incre ase by using tar f uaheathy foed lo For these reasens, being tored at_a higher rate is the good iden 13 (12/ mnd) こ Co こ

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電池(起電力 E (V]), コンデ ンサー(電気容量C [F]), コ イル(自己インダクタンスL (H))を右図にようにつなぐ。 まずスイッチS, を入れ充電す ると,コンデンサーには 0 が蓄えられる。 次にS, を開き S。を閉じると が生じる。角周波数 ω3D ] [rad/s] で あるから,周期 T=[0] f=[6] [Hz] である。 点Qを基準とする点Pの電位V[V] は,時間 t [s] (スイッチ S, を入れた時刻をt=0とする) の関数 としてTを用いて表すと、 (V) (1) 電気振動が生じてるとき,コンデンサーに 蓄えられるエネルギー U。 [J] を, E, C, T, t を用いて表す。 282 S。 1 0 CE 2 E- Cキ の電気振動 1 3 LC Q (J]のエネルギー ④ 2元、LC 4編 1 6 2元、LC (s), 固有周波数 2元 6Ecos t T の 1 -CE tos 2 2元 T 4元 81+cos T CE U、= -CE = Uo 9 -CV°= 2 ~ 三 4 oe(-) 1+cos20 (cos'0= を用いて変形せよ) 右図に(1)のグラフ をかけ。ただし、 イ 2 -CE sin 2 -CE'sin' 2 Uc[J). MAAL Co0 1 だけ し,=- CE"とする。 2 Cos8: (tam20 0.5)T Y.50 2T) H{s) 2 ーUト (3) 電気振動が生じて いるときコイルに蓄えられているエネルギーた= U, (J]を6, C, T, tを用いて表すと 24。 f T -U J そ切 Ves U,=0 o) なせててま? tの駅回特にないけ。 Gmad Jo 158

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Vocabulary skills: Collocations Read the text. Then find verbs that collocate with the words and phrases below. Write the infinitive of each verb. KEY VOCABULARY SKILLS STUDY SHEET 7, PAGE 164 The Duke of Edinburgh’'s Award The Duke of Edinburgh's Award (known as the DofE) began in the U.K. in 1956. It gives young people from all backgrounds an opportunity to experience challenge and adventure, acquire new skills, and make new friends. Each year, participants between the ages of 14 and 24 complete many hours of voluntary community work. There are three levels: Bronze, Silver, and Gold. Each one requires increasing commitment, so you can choose which level is best for you. There are four sections at Bronze and Silver level, and five at Gold. These sections combine practical, cultural, and adventurous activities. Achieving a Duke of Edinburgh's Award helps young people to develop a sense of responsibility, and promotes values of persistence, commitment, and enterprise. It has a lasting impact on young people's behavior, skils, and life chances. In 1988, the DofE was expanded to become international. These days, over 635,000 participants around the world are achieving a DofE at any one time. Since the DofE began, Over six million young people in over 123 countries have taken part, and it continues to grow in popularity. 1 an appointment / small talk / progress success / your goals / independence dark / older / crops 2 4 a course / a form / an exercise someone a chance / a talk / feedback 5 awareness / growth / competition a qualification / knowledge / a reputation for something a problem / dificulty / something at first hand a friendship / a taste for something / an idea 6 7 8 9 Predicting Look at the title of the information sheet you’re going to read. Discus with a partner what. think you'll read about. Gnbal Youth Service Day