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Topic」Some people say that students spend too much time doing club activities at school. Do you agree with this opinion? Idon't agree that students spend too much doing club activities at school. First, it is necessary for the students to have that they takes a rest. I think that it is a club activities. Second, some students go to school to do club activities, and others only to learn. I'm sure that going to school to do club activities is great. For these reasons, I don't agree with this opinion.

至急‼️ 中1英語です👍 英語でジーンさんのスピーチをつくるのですが、最近習った複数形があやふやで書いた文があっているか分かりません！ (5文以内で書かなければなりません！) 間違っている気がするので...こうしたらいいよっ！と添削して頂きたいです！ お願いしますm(_ _)m

プロフィール 名前:ジーン(Jean) 職業:歌手 出身:イギリス the UK 得意な楽器:ピアノ(毎日弾く)、ヴァイオリン (日曜日に練習する) その他:スポーツが好き。よく友達とバドミントンをする。時々、日本食 を作るが、魚は食べない。 Hello, everyone. Do you like music? This is Jean. She is asinger from the UK. She plays the piano everyday and practices the -violin ,She likes Sports. Sheioften plays badminton with her friend. on iSundays. She Some times coaks Japancsee foodii but she doesn't eat fisha det

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次の英文を読んで,あとの各問いに答えなさい。 5 children O(enjoy) reading books. When Lepman saw this, she thought that the families, their friends, or their homes. ア She wented people all over the world to know that German children's for the children. Because of this, about 4,000 children's books were sent to her books were wonderful. ntries around the world. ォLepman displayed the books at many places all エ over Germany, and many children enjoyed the books. Then, in 1949. she neoa t 15 books to open a library for children in the middleof Munich. After that, the numberof books in the library increased, so in 1983, the library moved to an old castle built in Munich in the 1430s. This library *conducts children's books in a *catalogue called “White *Ravens,” and introduces those books to *activities. For example, the library collects good many p the world. White Ravens” means very *rare and good things because white ravens are very rare. The library also holds a large festival. At the festival, children can talk with famous writers ③ (invite) from all over the world. The library also holds many lessons. There, children can learn about peace and history. Through books, Jella Lepman wanted to create a *peaceful world. At this library, her dream lives on even today. 注 Munich: ミュンヘン not only ~ but : ~だけでなく…も nutrition:栄養 mind:心 publishing company : 出版社 display:展示する conduct:行う activity:活動 問1 0.3の( )内の語を適する形になおしなさい。 門2 下線部ア~オから, 不要な文を, 1つ選びなさい。 catalogue:目録 raven:カラス rare:まれな peaceful:平和な の A ) 司3 下線部2の具体例として,本文にあげられていないものをア~エから1つ選びなさい。 ア 優良な児童書の世界への紹介。 ウ 児童書研究者たちの研究への支援。 4 下線部④の具体的な内容となるように,( イ 有名な作家と話せる大きな祭典の開催。 I 平和や歴史を学ぶ講座の開催。s 30g 1C) )に15字程度の日本語を入れなさい。H )という夢。 131

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OI was not able to face each othen to an environmen Tal phoblem well. (aiは 環境商間題へしっかり向き合っていませんでた。) 2But, I was able to think that it might be necessary for the envihonmental pollution to regard it as impor tant in Japan through a cláss. (しかし、授業を通して日本でも現是境汚染を重要視していく処要があるので はないかと考えた。) ③ So, I am going environment aspect ih daily, hfe tirom how on. (色ので,これからは日常の中で環続面を意識してすごそうと思います。) to Spend time being conscious of (何えば、ゴミの分別や、マイバック"の持ち作きは毎a自分でもできる ことです) ⑤I think that the environmental by strenght of the each person's Conscioushess (私は-人一人の意識の強さで環境問題は改善されると考えています。) pho blem is imphoVed O So. I Call out from oneselt and I panticipate in a Volunteer and want to take action (なので、自分から声かけをしたり、ポランティアへ参か加するなど行動を起こして いきたいなす。)

英文描きました。添削お願いします🤲 I strongly believe that students should take part in club activities. One reason is that you can engage with different... 続きを読む

この文のthey are many kinds of herbal tea and they have many usesは、解説にはハーブティーは多くの種類があり多くの使い方がある。 となっていたのですが、usesで使い方、となるのですか？

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向想 く1 >次の英文を読んで、下の設問に答えよ。 Perhaps the single biggest mistaké we make when we say 'No' is to start from 'No'. , We derive our ‘No' from what we are against- the other's demand or behavior. A positive ‘No' calls on us to do the exact opposite and base our ‘No' on what we are for. Instead of starting from ‘'No', start from ‘Yes'. Root your ‘No' in a deeper 'Yes' -a Yes' to your core interests and to what truly matters. Nowhere didI learn this more clearly than from a relative of mine who suffered from a serious addiction to alcohol that nearly cost him and others their lives in a car accident. He tried many times to give up the habit but always failed. Then at the age of sixty, just when all hope seemed lost, he found in himself the will to say ‘'No' and stop drinking. The secret? “"When my first grandchild was born," he says, “I wanted more than anything to live long enough to see him grow up. It was his birth that motivated me to get treatment and stop drinking. Since then, for over fifteen years now, I have not touched a drop." His 'Yes' to being present for his grandchildren - to be able to play with them and see them grow - motivated his powerful ‘No' to alcohol. His story serves to illustrate an everyday paradoxical truth: the power of your ‘No' comes directly from the power of your 'Yes'. 1our Yes is the underlying purpose for which you are saying 'No', The first step in the method is to uncover the Yes' that lies behind your'No'.(1)The deeper you go into vour core motivation, the more powerful your Yes' will be and thus the more powerful your 'No'. aht ha Tt is ourselves. It is our 1*em ;TL

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