英作文の問題で2枚目の写真が私が書いた回答です。どこかダメな点があれば指摘お願いします🙏

6 表現力 (23点) 解答・配点 A (7) [] B . it has long been regarded as a problem that the voting rate of young 7 people is low people have worried for a long time that only a small number of young people vote (1) [] some people cast[submit/give] blank ballots there are some people who write nothing on their ballot(s) [... because (X) (nap time is just a short time, and we will still have because (Y) (it will prevent enough time to play after the nap). " *** 4点 12.

文構造について質問です！ catch a picture で「姿をとらえる」ですか？？ これってどういうイメージで覚えればいいんでしょうか？？

第6段落 ¹Awareness of touch can bring a new feeling to the most commonplace experiences. 2“I have just touched my dog," wrote the young Helen Keller in her diary. 3"He was rolling on the grass with pleasure in every muscle and limb. 4I wanted to catch a picture of him in my fingers, and I touched him lightly as I would cobwebs. 5But, to my surprise, his body turned towards me and moved into a sitting position, and his tongue gave my hand a lick. He pressed close to me as if he intended to put himself into my hand. He loved it with his tail, with his paw, with his tongue. If he could speak I believe he would say with me that paradise is attained by touch."

英作文の添削をお願いします。 ［問題］そのパーティーには参加したくない、というのが私の本音だ。 ［解答］This is my mind that I don’t want to take part in the party.

黄色のマーカーの部分のsvocなどを教えていただけないでしょうか？(..)

plainly Dreaming is a universal phenomenon, though much of what we dream may be forgotten, and some few persons are able only rarely to remember their dreams on waking. The dream represents mental activity during sleep. For this reason the workings of the unconscious mind can be more p 5 seen here than anywhere else. Ordinarily the thoughts and wishes of the unconscious mind are unknown to us, though it contains the source of creative and instinctive energy. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes liberal use of such primitive methods of representation as symbolism. In a very general way, the unconscious mind of present-day man may be 10 compared to the conscious mind of the caveman, and dreams often remind us of the picture writing of the caveman, where a relatively few simple pictures used as symbols told a detailed story of events. In addition, it is the function of a dream to express a wish, but since the wishes of the unconscious are often highly instinctive in nature, they would be 15 as disturbing to most modern persons as would the acts of a caveman in present-day society. Therefore, most dreams are disguised enough to conceal their true meaning from the dreamer. This is accomplished through the intervention of the conscience, a much more recently developed function of the brain. In psychoanalysis an effort to get the true meaning of the dream is 20 made by having the dreamer give all his thoughts and feelings about every element of the dream. These are then pieced together by the analyst, who uses his knowledge of the life history of the individual as a reference point. By this means, unconscious thoughts and wishes, as well as long-forgotten experiences, can be revealed so as to give the dreamer a much more complete understand- 25 ing of himself. Passage 35 Psychoanalysis ー語句と構文- 13. on waking = /17. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes = それは概念を形成するための装置一式の中の一番古い部品と ・・・ 訳) / L.9. may be compared to 〜 = 〜になぞらえるこ 272 - ( CLOSE ときに目く とし 16 1027 性質を るだろ ある。 見た BO 17 わ

黄色いマーカーのところについて。 asの倒置が起こってると説明が書かれていたのですが、元の文に直すとどうなりますか？

plainly Dreaming is a universal phenomenon, though much of what we dream may be forgotten, and some few persons are able only rarely to remember their dreams on waking. The dream represents mental activity during sleep. For this reason the workings of the unconscious mind can be more p 5 seen here than anywhere else. Ordinarily the thoughts and wishes of the unconscious mind are unknown to us, though it contains the source of creative and instinctive energy. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes liberal use of such primitive methods of representation as symbolism. In a very general way, the unconscious mind of present-day man may be 10 compared to the conscious mind of the caveman, and dreams often remind us of the picture writing of the caveman, where a relatively few simple pictures used as symbols told a detailed story of events. In addition, it is the function of a dream to express a wish, but since the wishes of the unconscious are often highly instinctive in nature, they would be 15 as disturbing to most modern persons as would the acts of a caveman in present-day society. Therefore, most dreams are disguised enough to conceal their true meaning from the dreamer. This is accomplished through the intervention of the conscience, a much more recently developed function of the brain. In psychoanalysis an effort to get the true meaning of the dream is 20 made by having the dreamer give all his thoughts and feelings about every element of the dream. These are then pieced together by the analyst, who uses his knowledge of the life history of the individual as a reference point. By this means, unconscious thoughts and wishes, as well as long-forgotten experiences, can be revealed so as to give the dreamer a much more complete understand- 25 ing of himself. Passage 35 Psychoanalysis ー語句と構文- 13. on waking = /17. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes = それは概念を形成するための装置一式の中の一番古い部品と ・・・ 訳) / L.9. may be compared to 〜 = 〜になぞらえるこ 272 - ( CLOSE ときに目く とし 16 1027 性質を るだろ ある。 見た BO 17 わ

2枚目の写真の1でdがどこに書いてあるかわかりません🙏

7 英文を読んで、設問に答えなさい。 【思考・判断・表現】 (12) S Accessibility is not the norm for over 1 billion people in the world with disabilities. People with disabilities face a whole different world than the one non-disabled people live in. Thus, creating safe, comfortable, and barrier-free cities and infrastructure is urgent. Yet, accessibility for all is a matter that should draw much more attention than it is now since as we grow old, we may all need it at some point in our lives, (To enhance accessibility for wheelchair users, we can install elevators in buildings ✓高める 設 O in addition to stairways and provide adapted equipment such as screen readers for visually *impaired people to use their smartphones. AaB But, considering there are many different types of disabilities, can there be one solution to suit everybody? How can we design for all? Vi S We must remember that accessibility for all concerns and impacts all aspects of our Vt lives: whether we are shopping, commuting, using our phones, wandering in a museum, S V₁ or the streets... In sum, we must change the city organization itself. O Designers and architects need to create buildings where disabled people can get V+ S around freely and without help from other people. They will need to encounter those 移動する a who face the problems in their everyday lives to understand how to implement the 実行する solutions that are truly useful and helpful for all. The key component of *inclusive I'VE s P. あらゆる人を 2. 受け入 C 3.

Are you feeling sad or lonely? この文のsadとlonelyは補語ですか？

むずくてとけませんでした😭 1から4教えて欲しいです

3 意味の通る英文になるように,( )内の語句を並べかえ, 全文を書きなさい。 (1) Feeling guilty, I could (in / him / look / the eye / hardly ). SH OF med en tromis ei aequl to sopr (2) Having (mistake / my / realized / terrible), I decided to apologize to my colleague. mistake/my/realized/ter to 自治医科大) elanuot bruodai 10 15dmun edI ( 芝浦工業大 ) CL (4) There (any/hardly / hope /is/ of) his succeeding. syual es buidt a juoda at 閉じる (3) My son said (a dreamy / with / something / his face/smile/on). roum an ybuta fin (AT¤Ñ¤) is lack o fani bib yorit en alqooq yas as id [fw godf< yuno (*E**LA)

この5問といて欲しいです。答えは無いです

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合ってるかどうか教えて欲しいです

D 助動詞 + have + 過去分詞 10. Ⅰ should have checked the email address before sending. 送信する前にメールアドレスを確認するべきだった。 11. She might have sent the message to the wrong person. 彼女は間違った人にメッセージを送ってしまったかもしれない。 解説 10. should have done は｢~すべきだったのに(しなかった)」という意味を表す。 主語がとweのときは後悔を、 それ以外のときは非難の気持ちを表すことが多い。 11. might have done は｢~したかもしれない。 〜だったかもしれない」という意味で、過去のことについて現在の 推量を表す。 may よりも might の方が確信度は低い。 GRAMMAR EXERCISES NARU HODO 1 日本語を参考に, ( )内に適切な語を入れ、 英文を完成させましょう。A (1) 私は明日までにこれらの本を図書館に返さなければならない。 I ( must ) ( be (2) あなたは誰に対しても嘘をついてはいけません。 You ( must (3) 私は今度の土曜に地域の会合に出席しなければならない。 I've ( must ) ( (4) あなたは毎日犬の散歩をしなければなりませんか。 ( Do ) you ( hove ) these books to the library by tomorrow. )tell a lie to anybody. attend a community meeting next Saturday. ) walk your dog every day? 内に適切な語を入れ, 英文を完成させましょう。 B C 2 日本語を参考に (1) ぐっすり眠りたいならコーヒーを飲みすぎるべきではない。 You ( ought ) not ( not (2) 体調が戻るまでゆっくりすべきです。 You ( had ) ( (3) 今日は、傘を持って行った方が良いですよ。 You'd ( had ) ( better (4) 夕食時に私の父が言ったことは本当かもしれない。 be What my father said at dinner (may (5) 留学することは私の人生を変えるチャンスになる可能性があります。 Studying abroad (c ) ( ) drink too much coffee if you want to sleep well better) it easy until you're feeling better. ) your umbrella with you today. true ) a chance to change my life. (青山学院大学改)