オンラインコミュニティに賛成か反対かの英作文です。添削をお願いします。

I dont tonk tiat online Communication _1S.gad. have three.reasons why I dont think so First, sometimes it is difficult to hear the Story depending on the 1nternet envirokment We will have to listen to it over and over agait. Second, itis easy to forget セ talk online casy becouse it makes me 7erous. vo1ce Ioften nonder if eyeyone can hear y Third, it is hader to coney emotions Online than 201ey when talking direckty. For these reasons I dort agree with this opinion.

2011年北海道大学の英作文の添削をおねがいします。questionCです。 字数が足りていませんが、それ以外の部分をおねがいします。

Australia, the United States, and urban India. Rend the following passage and answer questions A through C in English. while their wives work outside the home, Stay-at-home dads are also called stay- Stay-at-home dads are married fathers with children who care for their family domestic burden has led some couples to completely reverse their roles. The number of stay-at-home dads is starting to increase in Britain, Canada, 「husband who can do the housework, such as shopping, cooking, and looking alter the children. The widespread expectation that men should share the vin England showed that 75 percent of women in their twenties prefer a 38 on were breadwinners and women were caregivers. Arecent Traditionally, Survey can Many stay-at-home dads take great pleasure in showing affection to their children. Their wives can pursue careers without worrying about teaching family values or paying for child care. Research suggests that children of stay- athome dads often benefit from strong bonds with both parents, whereas the father's role ina stay-at-home mom household is less influential. Although the number of stay-at-home dads is increasing, it remains small Compared to the total number of fathers. In the United States, the government estimates that in 2009 there were 158,000 stay-at-home dads, a mere 0.2 percent of 67.8 million fathers. In Australia, about 1 percent of fathers are stay-at-home dads. In urban India, one estimate suggests 3 percent of fathers stay at home full-time. Some stay-at-home dads suffer from social stigma. Many people, including stay-at-home moms, do not understand why a man would choose to give up his career to care for his family full-time. Being a stay-at-home dad can also be career suicide. Many employers view stay-at-home dads as lacking ambition and commitment. Losing professional skills may prevent stay-at-home dads from returning to the workforce.

誰か採点お願いしますやって欲しいことは2つあります①添削②英検と同じように内容・構成・語彙・文法の観点を点数つけてほしいです この二つです

Question Some people say that too much water is wasted in Japan. Do you agree with this opinion? (POINTS: Daily habits, Technology. The environment) Answer Tagree with this opinion. I have two reasons why. To begin with, there are lot of water in Japan than other countries. WVe can use it whenever we like it. But it is difficult for other countries to do because they do not have a lot of water. But they can manage to live with less water. In addition, we often keep it running while we are taking a shower or washing dishes. Many people use it unconsciously therefore It is a problem. For these reasons l agree with this opinion

QuestionAとBの1について、私の回答で丸はもらえますか？教えていただきたいです 北大2017年の英作文の問題です。

Read the following passage. for my age. I leave home early and it takes about two hours on a crowded train to get to the office. I get Sunday off, but on the other days I'm usually in my office till nine o'clock, or even midnight on occasion. But I enjoy seeing the customers excited about our new products and services. Every August I take a 15 years. It's a secure job in a major company and I enjoy a relatively high salary six-day summer vacation, usually at my parents' place in Toyama. It's nice to Thave been working for a Japanese cell phone company in Tokyo for the last 2017年度(3] 32 a or the space of the countryside after my cramped apartment in the suburbs. However, I spend two days travelling there and back, and then it's straight back to work the next day. Last summer, however, I was able to take 10 days off in August and used the rare chance to take my wife on a foreign holiday by going to visit my old friend, Pierre, in Paris. He and I met at university in the US nearly 20 years ago when we were both international exchange students. We shared a love of tennis and S0on became good friends, and have stayed in touch. He now works as a supervisor in a post office in eastern Paris. It was lovely to see Pierre again and spend time in the spacious apartment he shares with his wife. I was very surprised to find that they were just back from a month-long summer vacation in southern France and Switzerland. Pierre told us that this is perfectly normal in his job, and couldn't believe his ears when I mentioned that my usual vacation is around a week and that I work 12 hours a day, six days a week. His usual workday, he said, was from 9:00 to 16:00. He wasn't joking ; he was back home by bicycle by 16:20 every day. He likes his job as the postal service fulfills a vital function in society by connecting people both aomestically andinternationally. On hearing his story, though, I began to reflect upon my own life and work. AmI working to live, or just living to work ? Answer questions A to C in English. You may use words and ideas from the Lext, but you must not copy complete sentences.

長文です。答えはイ何ですが、その根拠となるところがわかりません。

(*印の付いている単語·語句には, 本文のあとに [注] がある。) There are many museums and *theme parks around Tokyo. Some of them teach people about the history of Japan, like *Edo Wonderland in Nikko and the "Edo-Tokyo Museum in Ryogoku. They are popular places for school trips because students can enjoy learning about Japanese history. I remember one of my school trips. When I was a student in Australia, we went on a school trip to Old Sydney Town. It was a theme park that *recreated the *past, just nke Edo Wonderland in Nikko. Old Svdnev Town was an hour away from Sydney Dy bus. 1t had more than 30 buildings. They were made in the same 'style as buildings in 1803. Many *actors were working at the theme park. They *wore old-style clothes, spoke old-style English, and "pretended to live in the town. “Horse-drawn wagons went up and down the streets. upin My friends and I were excited to see the actors' "performances. People drank at a "pub, sang old songs and danced in the streets. Some of them pretended to “fight a duel Some museum “staff gave us short history lessons, and we enjoyed listening to them very much. I remember Old Sydney Town was very exciting, because it brought us to another world. Old Sydney Town closed about 30 years after it opened. Many people visited there at first, but the number of people visiting there "gradually went down. The buildings started to become old. and more and more actors left Old Sydney Town. There were a lot of people who enjoyed visiting Old Sydney Town when they were children. And later, they took their own children there, but they said it was not as exciting as before. Why did Old Sydney Town close? There are many different "opinions about it. Some people say young people now like to play video games, and these young people think that a trip through time is not very exciting. Other people believe that Old Sydney Town did not *attract many people because it could not make new and exciting *entertainment. Times change and people also change. New "technology and the Internet can make new kinds of entertainment, and people can enjoy them at home. New building *materials can now make buildings that look like something from the future. New technology will make us more surprised. But it is also very important for us to keep old culture and entertainment. Maybe some of these things are not seen in everyday life, but they make a "link with the past. For example, if you go to see kabuki, maybe you will think about Japanese people who lived in the past. Culture *is made up of all the things people did in the past, and it makesa country and its people "unique. If we forget about the past, then we lose our culture. 10

英語 これの答えなんだと思いますか？解いてみたのですが答えがなくて自信がありません。15番の選択肢は①ago ②from now ③past ④in です。 答えだけでかまいませんお願いします🙇‍♀️

A frosty Novemper morning decorates the leafless trees to perfection. When I went up the hill, the white frost was sparkling, and the of milky mist hanging in the air. 6 trees arose on all sides. There were layers The frost has not yet taken to lingering* on the trees in the morning. The air was soon mild. When I went to plant a new tree just received from the nursery*, a gentle moistnes prevailed. Planting trees is pleasant work, encouraging I dug the hole, the soil moved easily beneath the spade, soft and damp. thought about the future, and especially 7 so when conditions are as favorable as this. The weak roots settle 9 into the loam and compost and bone-meal*, pressed into the pit that has been dug; and the infant" thing, little more than a twig, is magnified in the 10 into a handsome and graceful maturity. The village has responded readily 11 the urgings* to plant more trees. In various corners single saplings* are being installed; where more space is available, groups are being planted. A decision as to 12 is not arrived at without much discussion, opinion being split, in general terms, between decorative exoties which put on a great show of blossom and those less showy trees, unfortunately slower in growth, which are more 13 to the village scene. To my relief the latter choice has been preferred. My immediate contribution has been to plant on the grassy edge of the lane which passes my house. 14 there is no room_for anything tall, I chose a white hawthorn*, and as I set it in the earth I could picture it giving pleasure to people who will walk along this lane many years 15 long after I am dead. [注] linger「とどまる」、nursery「苗床」 loam and compost and bone-meal 「黒土(ローム)と堆肥と骨粉」 infant「未発達の」、urging「奨励」、sapling「苗木」、 hawthorn 「セイョウサンザシ」 問6 0 green 2 rich 3 bare fallen 6 問7 0 Below As ③ Though Above 7 間8 0 for 2) dark ③ pessimistic の optimistic 8 問9 0 up hard unresistingly with difficulties 9 問10 0 imagination 2 real ③ future の life 10 問11 0 for ③ to by 11 on 問12 0 the way of planting の what to plant ③ how to plant 0 plant or not 12 問13 の traditional 2 colorful ③ dangerous 0 against 13 問140 If As long as 3 Unless Since 14

英作文の添削をしてもらいたいです！主に文法・語法 お題は“When we browse the Internet, we are always exposed to customized information. What do you think about that?”... 続きを読む

誰かこの問題解いて欲しいです

2 次の対話文を読み, 設問(a)~(e)にもっとも適切なものを1~4の中から1つ 選びなさい。 Two friends standing in line at a store checkout. Marissa: I know I have it in here somewhere Karen: What are you looking for? Marissa: My point card. Sheesh, I have so many of them now. I can never find the one I'm looking for. Karen: I know! It's getting ridiculous, isn't it? Every store has its own, and they're all different. Hold on a second. Let me go look by the register. They usually have a sample Yeah, the one for this store is orange. Marissa: Orange? Oh, here it is. Thanks. I really wish there were a better system. Pretty soon I'll need to start carrying a second wallet. Crazy! Karen: You know what would be great? If we had just one card that we could use for every store. You know, with an IC chip in it. I think those chips can hold a lot of data. It could hold point information for every store you go to. Marissa: That's an interesting idea but wouldn't it be a little risky? What if you lost it? You'd lose the points from all your stores. And Karen: Actually, I think most point data is now stored online. anyway, if you keep all your cards in the same wallet, what's the difference? What happens if you lose your wallet now? Marissa: Yeah, I see your point, I guess. But after all, I don't mind that each store has its own point card, because I like looking through the different designs. It's almost like collecting trading cards. Karen: Then you'll definitely need that second wallet! 5 英LAEEJPKS-006

英検2級のライティングの添削お願いします。

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英検2級です。添削お願いします！ 過去問のライティングです！

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