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オンラインコミュニティに賛成か反対かの英作文です。添削をお願いします。

I dont tonk tiat online Communication _1S.gad.
have three.reasons why I dont think so
First, sometimes it is difficult to hear the Story
depending
on the 1nternet envirokment
We will have to listen to it over and over agait.
Second, itis easy to forget セ talk online
casy
becouse it makes me 7erous.
vo1ce
Ioften nonder if eyeyone can hear
y
Third, it is hader to coney emotions Online than
201ey
when talking direckty.
For these reasons I dort agree with this
opinion.