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I disagree that Big companies have a positive effect on society. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is bad for the environment to produdet @ [arge-scale products. Big company mode a lot of products so they use maturials such as water, electric, and gas@ Also, they discharge carbou dioxide. By doing so, global warming will be increasing. Secondly worker is difficult to grotect! Work-life balance. Big companies ask them for many job 1,0 Go they will home go at late night. Also some peode have to move their house for working. They will lose their free time, and fell,. tired. Therefore, big companies have a lot of bod points. I think people should work widdle or small companies than big companies will have a happy lifel. and google

共通テストで8割以上取りたいと思っている高校生です。 写真はシステム英単語の一部を撮ったものなのですが、 赤のところは勿論、どこまで覚えるべきでしょうか？

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英検準1級ライティングなのですが、ここ減点されるなどあったら教えて頂きたいです。

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(21)の答えが3になるのがなんでか少し分からないです…わかる方いますか？？

(21) (22) (23) Any Change? Long ago, humans did not use money. Because they often could not produce everything that they needed, they traded some of their goods for goods made by others. Gradually, the goods that they exchanged were replaced by cash. For hundreds of years, metal coins and paper bills that can be exchanged for goods and services have been produced. Cash is convenient for many people because it is easy to carry. At the same time, though, it ( 21 ). Another disadvantage is that criminals have been able to produce fake coins and bills. In the middle of the 20th century, plastic credit cards were introduced. They had security features to prevent them from being used by anyone except their owners. At first, their use was limited to wealthy people. Over time, however, they became ( 22 ). In the last few years, apps for smartphones that can be used in the same way as credit cards have also become popular. Because of this, some people are suggesting that we may soon see the end of cash. Supporters of a "cashless" society in which all payments are made electronically argue that it would have several benefits. For example, people would not have to worry about keeping their wallets safe. However, some people are concerned that they might be unable to pay for the things they need because of a software error or a broken smartphone. Moreover, some people do not have bank accounts or credit cards, so their only option is to use coins and bills. ( 23 ), it seems as though societies will continue to use cash. 1 can be lost or stolen can be recycled 1 thinner and lighter 3 harder to use 1 For now 2 Until then 2 4 2 4 3 is used for shopping online is understood by almost everyone more colorful and exciting more widely available With luck 4 By contrast

英訳があっているか教えて欲しいです

②しかし、今日の世の中において, そこでは個人のプライバシーを保護することがますます難しくなって いるが, However, in today's world, which is becoming harder and harder to protect our personal privacy. 考え方 「今日の世の中」 について補足説明する。 Hints 「ますます~になる」 become 比較級 and 比較級 「個人のプライバシーを保護する」 protect one's personal privacy ③ ソーシャルネットワーキングサービスや科学技術があらゆる動きを記録できる世の中においては In the world which social media and science Technology can any move 「考え方 「世の中」 の意味を限定する。 Hints 「ソーシャルネットワーキングサービス」 (Social Networking Service) は和製英語。 英語では social media を用いる。

この社会を実現するためには、人工知能の活用が欠かせません。 Taking advantage of AI is essential to realize this society. 添削お願いします！

写真の5の文についてですが、青線部のrecognizingの主語は何ですか？(自分的には、認めるという動作は人が行うものだから、一般の人々などが省略されているのかなと思います)解説おねがいします。 補足:5の文は4の文(前文と大いに繋がりがあるように感じたので、参考として含... 続きを読む

④4 These days, there is (in fact) a growing recognition [of the need to V S develop a greater linguistic awareness and tolerance of change, especially (in a multi-ethnic society)]]. 和訳 今日実際に、特に多民族社会で、 言語への意識を高め、言語の変化をより受 け入れられるようにする必要性がますます認識されるようになってきている。 語句 tolerance 「容認 寛容さ」、 multi-ethnic 「他民族の」 5 This requires, (among other things), < that schools have the knowledge S V 0 and resources [to teach a common standard], while recognizing the existence and value of linguistic diversity)>. 和訳 そのためにはまず、 学校は共通の基準を教えるための知識と能力を備える一方 で、 言語の多様性の存在と価値を認める。

(1)の問題について質問です。 学校では2枚目のような文が答えでした。 しかし私は3枚目のように書きました。 あってますか？ よろしくお願いします☀️

¹Animals can play various roles in supporting people, especially those with physical or mental difficulties. Some are service animals, which are trained to assist physically challenged people. ³Others, called emotional support animals (ESAs), comfort people with mental health disorders. Overwhelmed by stress or anxiety, these people may suddenly experience panic attacks. However, living with an ESA can relieve such stress, and can also be an alternative to medical care. "In some countries, even an animal such as a parrot or a hamster can be an ESA if the owner gets a document issued by a medical professional. Some ESAs, just like service animals, can ride with their owners on trains, buses, or planes. This means that the owners can travel freely and feel safer in public places. Thus, the companionship of ESAs gives people with mental challenges more opportunities to expand their world. 10 In this way, ESAS make society more inclusive. 4 5

至急です‼️ 次の需要曲線と供給曲線はどちらに移動(シフト)しますか？( )の中に、右 又は 左を記入しなさい。 ①子供が減少すると文房具の需要曲線は( )にシフトする。 ②給料日前になると外食への需要曲線は( )にシフトする。 ③美容室が増加すると美... 続きを読む

黄色のマーカーの部分のsvocなどを教えていただけないでしょうか？(..)

plainly Dreaming is a universal phenomenon, though much of what we dream may be forgotten, and some few persons are able only rarely to remember their dreams on waking. The dream represents mental activity during sleep. For this reason the workings of the unconscious mind can be more p 5 seen here than anywhere else. Ordinarily the thoughts and wishes of the unconscious mind are unknown to us, though it contains the source of creative and instinctive energy. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes liberal use of such primitive methods of representation as symbolism. In a very general way, the unconscious mind of present-day man may be 10 compared to the conscious mind of the caveman, and dreams often remind us of the picture writing of the caveman, where a relatively few simple pictures used as symbols told a detailed story of events. In addition, it is the function of a dream to express a wish, but since the wishes of the unconscious are often highly instinctive in nature, they would be 15 as disturbing to most modern persons as would the acts of a caveman in present-day society. Therefore, most dreams are disguised enough to conceal their true meaning from the dreamer. This is accomplished through the intervention of the conscience, a much more recently developed function of the brain. In psychoanalysis an effort to get the true meaning of the dream is 20 made by having the dreamer give all his thoughts and feelings about every element of the dream. These are then pieced together by the analyst, who uses his knowledge of the life history of the individual as a reference point. By this means, unconscious thoughts and wishes, as well as long-forgotten experiences, can be revealed so as to give the dreamer a much more complete understand- 25 ing of himself. Passage 35 Psychoanalysis ー語句と構文- 13. on waking = /17. As the oldest part of the concept-forming apparatus, it makes = それは概念を形成するための装置一式の中の一番古い部品と ・・・ 訳) / L.9. may be compared to 〜 = 〜になぞらえるこ 272 - ( CLOSE ときに目く とし 16 1027 性質を るだろ ある。 見た BO 17 わ