英検2級の英作文です 文法がおかしいところ、直した方がいいところを教えてください。添削お願いします🙇‍♂️

4 onsdatabolchon e bomol bill ライティング ●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 • POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80 語 ~100語です。 ●解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお,解答 ■解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPICの内容 201 Satmay A98 をよく読んでから答えてください。 tarkE dinical TOPIC tényen The Slaces It is sometimes said that all people should be able to enter museums for free. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ● Donations 52 24 50 ●Learning environment ●Maintenance Tidedo ups Semins IspaunU & at mining of them in lose to the sit agoste w fè)

二級のライティングです。毎回点が悪いのでアドバイスもらえたら嬉しいです。

ライティング ●以下のTOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし、これら belp 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 4 ●語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 ●解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお,解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は, 0 点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容 をよく読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC 80.0. It is often said that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree with this opinion? electri 025 POINTS ● Cost ●Health and safety The environment far, it seems to be working. The Eppuzga su bagwbon plinimipals to douems edi, loptuos dents are spending less thur de batistiwn o dorke paryalties nents has improvsalibrangat hopes to upgrade some of the

英検準1級writingです。 どなたか採点して頂けますか？ 分かりにくい所があれば遠慮なく言ってください。

177/25 Do you think that the government should use social media to make decisions? I disagree that government should use social media. to make decisions. First, I think there value of determining are politic things by communicating each politicians. Choosing option of solution online may cause them as they can touch. to fail their decision. screen easily to vote. be critical trouble of domestics. TS becoming worse economies. Second, This accident would One of the trouble to utilize social media would be dread to flood confident information of nations These informations can contain about civil's. WIf civils information revealed, it is said that civil's safe wouldn't be protected by their countries. Therefore, some countries is about to introduce social media should consider that it may pose negative effect on their countries circumstance. ./10

英検準1級writingです。どなたか採点して頂けますか？ 分かりにくい所あれば遠慮なく言ってください。

Agree or Developed countries are obliged to assist less developed countries Write your English Composition in the space below. Developed countries should assist less developed countries. First, most of developping countries such aso Africa countries have no sufficient foods and building to live good condition. Also, these countries have little budget to promote their economies. It can be said that they can't make both and meet their own possetions. For settling this matter, d'the best way of making developing countries grow is to give opportunity of working. By doing to So, they would earn money and use this to solute this circumstance./2 10 15 Second 1 Supporting developing country would thake countifies all over the world peace. Communicating each other by discussing is one of trigger to get along with each countries. Keeping good relationship would enable us ¹e c not to agonize war. 15 Therefore, to supporti developping countries allow give 20 good wealth to not only these countries but also developed countries. 25 SEM 8 目

responsibilityの前にitsが置いてあるのはなぜですか？itsの使い方もよくわかりません。

Their presence [in the country] makes the Canadian government more conscious V O of its responsibility [to help developing nations], (for example). 訳 make OC の形 S C 国内に彼らがいることによって、カナダ政府はたとえば、発展途上国を支援する 責任をより強く意識している。 語句 presence 名存在/ (be) conscious of ~ 〜を意識している 文法・構文 直訳「彼らの存在は, カナダ政府が意識している状態にする」→「彼らがい ることによって, カナダ政府は意識している」 となります。soli

英検2級訂正お願いします。 2個目の理由が店の明かりが増えることで犯罪数が減る的なことを書こうとしたのですがうまく書けなかったです😞

Some people say stores do not need to stay open 24 hours a day. Do you agree with this opinion? I disagree with this opinion that stores do not need To stay open 24 hours a day. I have two reasons why I think so. to buy things. First of all, it is convenient for us to For example, we can buy things whenever if stores Open 24 hours a day. 50 Secondly, the number of crimes is For instance, store's light prevent increasing. us from crime. For these reasons mentioned above, I am sure that it is not a good idea that Stores do not have to stay open 24 hours a day.

至急！！英検2級のライティングを見てもらいたいです！ 理由からの文で何か訂正点や文としておかしい点があったら教えてもらいたいです！！ 黒字の並線は言い換えができること、オレンジは付け足し、赤は間違いを意味しています！ とても適当な字で書いてしまったので、読めなかったら言... 続きを読む

que 515 15 un gooriapido o olds me o ライティング V●以下のTOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 Middie Robob also 4 ●解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答 of the pla 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 onsqなお ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は,0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容 をよく読んでから答えてください。 the TOPIC Some people say that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. Do you agree with this opinion? bus diela POINTS ● Education ● Income ● Skills Chow insber Shointei Hai 20979 jogy. We brents gettinummer, add the bansaint & cualcol different als. Although the Vikings

英作文の添削をお願いします🙇⤵️

ライティング ●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 4 ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお、解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は, 0 点と採点されることがあります。 TOPICの内容 をよく読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC It is often said that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ● Cost ●Health and safety ● The environment

このかっこの4がなぜ答えがイなるのか教えてください！今不定詞と動名詞の使い分けも教えてください！

for my hat. 2 Thank you for (アtellイ telling ウ tells) me the news.ou for 3 They decided (アto climb イ climbs ウclimbing)the mountain. 4 Tomoko will finish (アto practice イ practicing ウ practices) the piano. 次の日本文に合う英文になるように( )内に適する語を順に笑えなさい

自分の回答と照らし合わせて確認したいので、答えがなにになるかどなたか教えてください。 解説もあると助かります。

5 A Matter of Taste Reading Passage 042 At the age of just 22, Jamie Oliver became well known across the UK as "The Naked Chef." He called himself this not because he cooked wearing no clothes, but because he wanted to simplify food preparation so that everybody could follow his recipes. He wanted to "strip down" the idea of cooking. Since then he has had numerous TV shows, published 50 many books, and has become a household name in the UK. Today, one of the activities Jamie Oliver is best known for is his great effort to improve the school dinners that children eat every day. One day, he visited the kitchen of a typical London secondary school, and he was shocked to see how much processed junk food the kids were given to eat each day. Fat and sugar levels were extremely high, and nutritional values very 10 low. The "turkey twizzler" became the symbol of these unhealthy meals: processed meat containing 21.2% fat and only 34% actual turkey. Oliver ran the school kitchen for one year and tried to show that it was possible to serve healthy meals on a limited budget—and that kids actually enjoyed eating them. His mission was to radically change the eating habits of children in that school, and across the country. 150 200 15 20 25 CULTIES 250 His project (the "Feed Me Better" campaign) has had some influence on school dinners in the UK. After watching the documentary Jamie's School Dinners, 271,677 people signed a petition calling for healthier school meals. This led the Prime Minister to agree to spend 280 million pounds (about 37 billion yen) on school dinners, to ban some junk food from school menus, and to create a School Food Trust to provide support and advice for people preparing school meals. Research, by the way, shows that children who stop eating sugary, fatty food and instead eat Oliver's school dinners are better behaved in class, and they get higher test 300 scores, too. 350 Of course, the project has had some problems. At first, many students (and even parents) resisted the removal of the junk food they were so used to. In one famous instance, some parents were passing local takeaway food to their children through the school fence. Also, schools that followed the plan for a while were often found to gradually drift back into bad habits. After all, it is easier and cheaper to just give the kids junk food. However, Oliver's efforts represent a positive start, and with obesity becoming such a huge problem (see Unit 4), 400 it's a very necessary start.