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Agree or
Developed countries are obliged to assist less developed countries
Write your English Composition in the space below.
Developed countries should assist less developed
countries.
First, most of developping countries such aso
Africa countries have no sufficient foods and
building to live good condition. Also, these
countries have little budget to promote their
economies. It can be said that they can't make
both and meet their own possetions. For settling
this matter, d'the best way of making developing countries
grow is to give opportunity of working. By doing to
So, they would earn money and use this to solute
this circumstance./2
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Supporting developing country would
thake countifies all over the world peace. Communicating
each other by discussing is one of trigger to get
along with each countries. Keeping good relationship
would enable us
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not to agonize war.
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Therefore, to supporti developping countries
allow give
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good wealth to not only these countries but also
developed countries.
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