どなたか添削していただけないでしょうか？

でもその一方で,現実には友だちをめぐるいろいろな悩みや問題を抱えた人 も多いのではないでしょうか。いじめや引きこもりが社会問題として注目をあ びてから,ずいぶん時間が経っています。言ってみれば, 日本の若者は,人と 人とのつながりをとても重視していると同時に、人とのつながりをどのように 築き上げたらよいのかという問題について悩み,人とのつながりに自信を持て なくなっているのではないでしょうか。

自分で英作を添削してみたのですがここはこのままで良いとかここは直した方がいいという箇所があれば教えてほしいです🙏🙇‍♂️

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私はスターバックスに行ってコーヒーが飲めるようになりたい。というような文章はなんて言うのですか?? 急速にお願いしたいです😰🙇‍♀️🙏

英作文の添削をお願いします( . .)" 文法とかぐちゃぐちゃだと思うので、、

(7)答えはこれなのですが、 私はbe able to draw a picture which I have にしました、これじゃダメでしょうか、 ダメならどこがダメかも教えて頂きたいです😭

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長文得意な方、分かる方教えてください。 急ぎです…4問あるんですけどすみません。

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以下の直接話法の問題を間接話法に変えたものを、教えていただきたいです。。

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あなたは上手にスキーをできるようになるでしょう。 『You will ［　　］able to ski well.』 →［　　］のところは主語がYou なので［are ］じゃだめなんですか？

答え4だったのですが何故ですか？

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