英語 高校生 3年以上前

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Q Some people say that parents should limit children's access to the Internet, What do you think abou that ? 意見と理由27 I think that parents should limit children's access - to the Internet. I have two reasons for this. First, children can not tell good things from bad things about how to use the Internet. Second, Many times using the Internet has some bad effects on children's brains.