Question

kiyo

英語の添削お願いします。お題はペットを飼うことについてどう思うか。
I agree to have pets. I have two reasons.
First, I think that pets are so much mind heal.I have a dog.
For example,my dog was very happy when I gave her dog snacks. I looked that and was heal.
Second,we are able to learn about the importance of life .
If we don’t take care,even a dog and a cat,a goldfish die.So,we must take care of them to the last.
In conclusion,it has influence that it is good for us to have pets .

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Answer 1

motty

I agree to have pets. I have two reasons.
First, I think pats give us much healing.
For example, I have a dog in my house.
My dog becomes very happy when I give him(her) dog snacks.
His(her) happy face heals me so much.
Second, we are able to learn the importance of lives.
If we don't take care of animals like dogs, cats, and goldfish, they will die.
In conclusion, having pats give us good influence.

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