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TOPIC
Some people say that young people should spend more time thinking
about their future careers. Do you agree with this opinion?
POINTS
Education
Income
Skills
concern that young people should spend
Om abo interested in it.
めore
is beoming a publhc
time thinking
It
about their fature careers. I
In
with this
opinion thet they shonld de.
I
my gpinion,
I have two
agiee
reasons for it.
T. Iegin
in the future.
with, I think they will bhe able to get a lot of income
Next, I think they will
de litely tか find their farorite
careers.
In ondusion, it is god for them to
think about Ccareers
の1ot.