Question

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Q.Some people say that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. Do you agree with this opinion?

A.I agree with this opinion. There are two reasons why I think so. First of all, I will get income. For example, if my daughter and son birth, not only me, but also my daughter and son are able to live well. Also, I will get my skills. For instance, when I use my ability to work, I feel happy. Because of all the reasons above, I think that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers.